Ashtray Heart [6/13]

Jun 22, 2012 11:03

Title: Ashtray Heart [6/13]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 1394
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5

Nothing. I just… I love you, you know? )

✿type: gay, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: angst, ✂fic: ashtray heart, ☃lenght: chaptered, ☂pairing: onho, ☂pairing: 2min, Ωgenre: smut, ✎rating: R, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✿type: ot3

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mine princessliette June 22 2012, 10:18:27 UTC

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Re: mine princessliette June 22 2012, 12:58:10 UTC
wow..this chapter is wow..
Cant blame minho because i understand why he did that .__. Though if only miho didnt hide a thing D: but well D: i just hope taemin will understand that it's not all minho's fault and change.
Oh gosh, i want to keep reading >

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Re: mine hitoshisakurai June 22 2012, 13:06:03 UTC
'Wow' flatters me :DD
Ne, me too... I didn't want him to look like a cheater-out-of-boredom/lust, but, you know... as someone that didn't want to be only number 2 in someone's life. But, IT'S NOT THE END. It's only the half *omg, the half already?!* :DD
And I want to keep writing xDD Thank you so much for reading, love<33

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Re: mine princessliette June 22 2012, 13:37:06 UTC
>__< hwaiting hwaiting!!! <3 <3 keep up the goodwork bb!!!! andidontwanttobeonlynumber2too><

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itsjustjodie June 22 2012, 14:38:01 UTC
i think what Minho has to do is TALK to Taemin, not fuck other people. i understand where hes coming from. but without any communication, they cant fix anything.
but even know i love the feeling between him and Jinki, i lov 2min, but for some reason, they feel more real...
thanks for the update. :)

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hitoshisakurai June 22 2012, 14:59:18 UTC
Well, he's trying hard, but... it's not that easy ^^ and it's not like he fucks other people, it's just Jinki that he once slept with~~ but you've got a point of course^.^
Thank you for reading~~!

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minhosims June 22 2012, 21:04:18 UTC
i agree with you. can't he just have a talk with taemin? i seriously will cry if this fic ends up witb onho.
should i even stop reading from now? ;__;

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hitoshisakurai June 22 2012, 21:48:44 UTC
Omg I didn't want to make it this bad >////<
Minho's been trying to talk with Tae all this time, to spend time with him, and it's true they haven't had a talk about 'why do you make your studies always more important than me' but that's because Minho knows that learning is probably the most important thing for Minnie... and also because he's fed up with the way their relationship goes. Which doesn't, of course, make him any less guilty of what he does, because cheating stays cheating. But still, I don't want people to hate him >////<
I kinda felt that I'm gonna lose some readers at some point ^ ^"
Aww, don't cry though, it's just a fiction ;~~~;

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4evershinee June 23 2012, 06:22:09 UTC
everytime I see another chapter I feel so happy :)
The story is amazingly great and while I read it I'm like adjkfdfgfgkfgdgfs this is so greaat!!!
and tbh I would love it if it end up with onho
You write so good I can't describe with words, so please keep writing ad never stop writing.

(Oh my god, this lame comment took me so long to write,I'm genetically akaward,please don't hate me)

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hitoshisakurai June 23 2012, 08:57:06 UTC
Oh my, you do? I'm so glad that it makes you happy!!
And, my, so many compliments, gosh, I'm melting ^///^

(How could I hate you?!!! This comment is so sweet and it made my day, thank you so much!! ;~~~~; <3)

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sashitae June 23 2012, 13:07:07 UTC
Gosh Minho you could've just confronted Taemin, i mean even Taemin confronted you when he asked why you felt so distant... somehow Ho seemed so coward here, coz he kept running away from his problem *glares at Ho*, tho i don't agree with Taemin's attitude to Minho too... If you think that Ho's getting distant you should've also try to get him back closer... *glares at Tae ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai June 25 2012, 19:45:46 UTC
Wah, 'coward' is a good word! Tho on the other hand he tried to confront with Taemin, maybe not in the direct way of 'I hate it that we barely see each other', but he at least tried to spend time with him... so... yeah, they're both guilty actually T^T

EXACTLY! He doesn't know it yet so he's absolutely not the one to blame, he just grew too attached to someone he didn't know too well... but let's not spoil the plot ^.^

D'awww, thank you so much for commenting, I'm really happy you still read this ;~~~~;

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villa_visualkei June 23 2012, 18:29:34 UTC

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fullmoonsyn June 24 2012, 04:05:11 UTC
I was also quite shocked at Jinki toppping xD And OMGOSH is that CHUNJI?! ADORABLEEEEEE!

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villa_visualkei June 25 2012, 02:03:29 UTC
Haha! I know, I don't read too many Dom!Jinki fics that are OnHo, hehe. Changing it up, hehe.
YEAH!!!! He's adorable and all squishy ne!!!! :3.

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hitoshisakurai June 25 2012, 19:42:53 UTC
Oh God, you two are just so cute I can't even xDD
And it's the first time Jinki tops~ who knows if it's the last as well, if they ever have sex again and so on LA LA LA >D
And I guess I should finally learn Teen Top's members... as well as Infinite's and so on... /too lazy

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