Title: Ashtray Heart [6/13] Pairing: OnHo, 2Min Rating: R Word Count: 1394 Genre: angst, smut, slice of life Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.
OMGOSH!!!! Minho!!!! WTF???? Not missing Taemin's absence, what sort of shit is that!!!!???? He's losing his mind, like seriously and I'm totally enjoying it and punishing myself for it all at the same time, haha.
Taemin meeting Jinki... ER OMG!!!! yeah go for it, that would be pleasantly, awfully fucking awkward!!!! How would you get around that one Minho????? You've been calling your Partner of three years a friend, like OMG!!!! I feel drama.
AND I also feel a tension bubbling up in Minho that can only mean bad things, and OMG, the stress of some of 2MIN's conversations are driving me insane, what with the added stream of Minho's inner thoughts. Minho telling Taemin he loved him... well that was a little heartbreaking.
Just like Minho crying at the film, like seriously this is soooo freaking heart-wrenching. You portrayed his weakness and feelings of not knowing what to do so perfectly, like I actually felt a little sad myself.
THEN IT HAPPENED!!!! LIKE OMG!!!!! -SCREAMING-. JINKI IS NO LONGER A "ONE-NIGHT-STAND-" Now Minho, now Minho you are in some deep shit. You can no longer lie to yourself.
...Also Jinki... topped...? (= O.o =) Waaaaah -blushing-. He's so different when he's around Jinki. That scene was kind of sad too, but full of passion and venerability on both parts that it just broke my heart how Minho and Jinki are sort of dwelling in each other's loneliness and sadness.
My heart was all Doki~Doki when they kissed and I was like "OMGAAAAH (= O__O =). I'm not gonna lie the happiness I felt over OnHo kissing again totally outweighed the guilt in the back of my mind about Taemin and the fact that the phone ringing was probably Taemin ringing Minho to apologize or something because he's sweet and shiiiiit...
Oh God, you two are just so cute I can't even xDD And it's the first time Jinki tops~ who knows if it's the last as well, if they ever have sex again and so on LA LA LA >D And I guess I should finally learn Teen Top's members... as well as Infinite's and so on... /too lazy
Oh they WILL have sex again xD And switching it up in the relationship would be super fun to see! But I'll keep reading no matter what, even if it turns into (sobs) 2min...
OMGAAAH... I would like them to...?? -Blushes and puppy dog eyes- XDD. Even better with submissive Jinki, OMO WHAT ARE YOU SAYING??. I am weird when it comes to the love scenes... hehe.
Haha. Bless. I know what you mean. I am always like that too. I only just learned the other members (after only knowing Bang and Zelo) of B.A.P (after I have suddenly become a little obsessed with them, haha). I don't know Infinite's names either... I don't know much of their stuff either -OMG- haha, I actually prefer Teen Top as a band, :3.
Hahahaha, I'm enjoying writing it so much you don't even know, even though I end up breaking people's hearts and stuff xDD *is a sick psycho*
I'm happy you found Minho's 'I love you' heartbreaking ;~~~~; I mean... omg, my inner-psycho shows again, SHUTTUP XDD No, but, I wanted to pour some feelings of hopelessness into it so I'm really glad you felt that ;~~~~;
AND HE'S NOT A ONE-NIGH-STAND ANYMORE, YEAH. MINHO'S IN TROUBLE NOW.
And the 'I regret nothing' gif is epic too, gosh, can't stop loling XDDDD
Thank you so much for those amazing comments TT^TT
OMG! I laughed at this gif for way too long before I could become coherent enough to reply to this comment. Hahaa :3.
Haha. I know I felt the same way when I was writing a certain story... that I kind of want to forget about and still can't believe that I actually went through with it, haha, I even broke my own heart writing that. Haha. I think that's good though because if your enjoying writing it you can feel the passion for the story through your writing and the character's interactions. I think this story is really held together perfectly with Minho's inner thoughts, which although we as reader's know he has cheated lead us to feel a little sympathy for him and his regrets.
You totally poured the hopelessness in there, it's dripping all over this story (and Minho). :3.
OMG OMG!!!! I know. It can only really sort of go down hill from here because whether Jinki was a mistake (OMG that hurts to say that -sobs-) or not, he is now a mistake that Minho consciously indulged in again... which sort of makes it even harder for him to seem like he's innocent. I think he's got this sort of infatuation with what Jinki can provide him with, he's so different from Taemin and now Minho and Jinki have this strange painful connection what with Minho sort of dwelling in Jinki's melancholic nature and his experience with heartbreak already, their able to share something that Minho can't share with Taemin and Taemin is so unaware (at the moment) that it makes it even more painful. Wah, what am I even going on about...? haha. I swear this story is driving me insane, so many conflicted emotions, haha. I must stop now, :3.
OMG! I know. It made me laugh for ages before I could even use it, haha. Chunji is epic, even if some of his expression are a little creepy/deranged (=^____^=).
OMGOSH!!!! Minho!!!! WTF???? Not missing Taemin's absence, what sort of shit is that!!!!???? He's losing his mind, like seriously and I'm totally enjoying it and punishing myself for it all at the same time, haha.
Taemin meeting Jinki...
ER OMG!!!! yeah go for it, that would be pleasantly, awfully fucking awkward!!!! How would you get around that one Minho????? You've been calling your Partner of three years a friend, like OMG!!!! I feel drama.
AND I also feel a tension bubbling up in Minho that can only mean bad things, and OMG, the stress of some of 2MIN's conversations are driving me insane, what with the added stream of Minho's inner thoughts.
Minho telling Taemin he loved him... well that was a little heartbreaking.
Just like Minho crying at the film, like seriously this is soooo freaking heart-wrenching. You portrayed his weakness and feelings of not knowing what to do so perfectly, like I actually felt a little sad myself.
THEN IT HAPPENED!!!!
LIKE OMG!!!!! -SCREAMING-. JINKI IS NO LONGER A "ONE-NIGHT-STAND-" Now Minho, now Minho you are in some deep shit. You can no longer lie to yourself.
...Also Jinki... topped...? (= O.o =) Waaaaah -blushing-. He's so different when he's around Jinki.
That scene was kind of sad too, but full of passion and venerability on both parts that it just broke my heart how Minho and Jinki are sort of dwelling in each other's loneliness and sadness.
My heart was all Doki~Doki when they kissed and I was like "OMGAAAAH (= O__O =). I'm not gonna lie the happiness I felt over OnHo kissing again totally outweighed the guilt in the back of my mind about Taemin and the fact that the phone ringing was probably Taemin ringing Minho to apologize or something because he's sweet and shiiiiit...
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YEAH!!!! He's adorable and all squishy ne!!!! :3.
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And it's the first time Jinki tops~ who knows if it's the last as well, if they ever have sex again and so on LA LA LA >D
And I guess I should finally learn Teen Top's members... as well as Infinite's and so on... /too lazy
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OMGAAAH... I would like them to...?? -Blushes and puppy dog eyes- XDD. Even better with submissive Jinki, OMO WHAT ARE YOU SAYING??. I am weird when it comes to the love scenes... hehe.
Haha. Bless. I know what you mean. I am always like that too. I only just learned the other members (after only knowing Bang and Zelo) of B.A.P (after I have suddenly become a little obsessed with them, haha). I don't know Infinite's names either... I don't know much of their stuff either -OMG- haha, I actually prefer Teen Top as a band, :3.
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Hahahaha, I'm enjoying writing it so much you don't even know, even though I end up breaking people's hearts and stuff xDD *is a sick psycho*
I'm happy you found Minho's 'I love you' heartbreaking ;~~~~; I mean... omg, my inner-psycho shows again, SHUTTUP XDD No, but, I wanted to pour some feelings of hopelessness into it so I'm really glad you felt that ;~~~~;
AND HE'S NOT A ONE-NIGH-STAND ANYMORE, YEAH. MINHO'S IN TROUBLE NOW.
And the 'I regret nothing' gif is epic too, gosh, can't stop loling XDDDD
Thank you so much for those amazing comments TT^TT
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Haha. I know I felt the same way when I was writing a certain story... that I kind of want to forget about and still can't believe that I actually went through with it, haha, I even broke my own heart writing that. Haha. I think that's good though because if your enjoying writing it you can feel the passion for the story through your writing and the character's interactions. I think this story is really held together perfectly with Minho's inner thoughts, which although we as reader's know he has cheated lead us to feel a little sympathy for him and his regrets.
You totally poured the hopelessness in there, it's dripping all over this story (and Minho). :3.
OMG OMG!!!! I know. It can only really sort of go down hill from here because whether Jinki was a mistake (OMG that hurts to say that -sobs-) or not, he is now a mistake that Minho consciously indulged in again... which sort of makes it even harder for him to seem like he's innocent. I think he's got this sort of infatuation with what Jinki can provide him with, he's so different from Taemin and now Minho and Jinki have this strange painful connection what with Minho sort of dwelling in Jinki's melancholic nature and his experience with heartbreak already, their able to share something that Minho can't share with Taemin and Taemin is so unaware (at the moment) that it makes it even more painful.
Wah, what am I even going on about...? haha. I swear this story is driving me insane, so many conflicted emotions, haha. I must stop now, :3.
OMG! I know. It made me laugh for ages before I could even use it, haha. Chunji is epic, even if some of his expression are a little creepy/deranged (=^____^=).
Thank you~~ :3.
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