Fic: Life Unending (1/1)

Oct 23, 2009 16:34

Title: Life Unending
Rating: PG
Character(s): Richard Alpert, Jacob
Word Count: 108
Summary: Reconciling an end with life unending. For the lost_in_108 Challenge #5: Liquor and the 18coda Prompt #10 - Elegy. Spoilers through 5.16 - The Incident, Parts 1 & 2.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: This wrote itself, really. Which explains why I don ( Read more... )

character:lost:richard alpert, fanfic:gen, fanfic:challenge, fanfic:pg, challenge:lost_in_108, fanfic, fanfic:oneshot, character:lost:jacob, challenge:18coda, fanfic:lost

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starfoozle October 23 2009, 21:13:25 UTC
Oh, excellent. There is not nearly enough fic with Jacob and Richard out there. I've been looking for some for a while, so I definitely pounced all over this as soon as I saw it. :D

You've managed to encapsulate a lot in very few words. The last line is particularly well-crafted. Really lovely work, as always.

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hitlikehammers October 30 2009, 22:38:28 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm... a bit fixated on these two, as it happens, so I'm glad that they're to your liking :)

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siluria October 23 2009, 22:30:09 UTC
But in time, you’ll learn not to care

Which I've always assumed is the whole crutch of immortality!! :) Nicely done, with a really great feel to it!

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hitlikehammers October 30 2009, 22:38:54 UTC
Thank you :D

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ozmissage October 24 2009, 16:20:56 UTC
I absolutely love this. The writing is gorgeous and Richard! Guh. The poor guy. This is so vivid and wrenching. Amazing job!

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hitlikehammers October 30 2009, 22:39:12 UTC
Goodness; thank you so much!

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primarycolors92 October 24 2009, 16:51:46 UTC
Ooh! Very evocative- I love the last line.

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hitlikehammers October 30 2009, 22:39:39 UTC
Thank you :)

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jeaniris October 24 2009, 19:21:37 UTC
Really love this and all it says about the Richard Jacob relationship.

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hitlikehammers October 30 2009, 22:40:22 UTC
Thank you so much.

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