Fic: Three Minutes, Sixteen Seconds (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Three Minutes, Sixteen Seconds
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Daniel/Desmond
Word Count: 869
Summary: The world, it’s always ending. But Daniel knows it doesn’t end here. For lostpuffin, who requested “Desmond. Heat. Shivers. Quivers.” at The lostsquee 2009 Lost Summer Luau, and for the 15pairings Prompt #4 - Roll Over. Spoilers through 5.16 - The Incident, Parts 1 & 2.
Prompt

Comments

[jenthegypsy]

I'm completely speechless. All I can say at this moment is "Stunning. Absolutely stunning."

[hitlikehammers]

Wow - thank you ever so much! :D

[haldoor]

That really is wonderful. Oh Dan, how my heart aches for you. And Des... to know, but not know. Excellent stuff, as ever. Thank you for sharing with us! ;-)

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it :)

[elliotsmelliot]

This was so interesting. The images appeared to me so fractured, both in sound and sight, however Dan and Des were tangible and grounded the entire thing, like good constants (and writers!) do.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! I'm really glad that it came across that way to you - it's exactly the sort of vibe I was hoping to capture :)

[anansie_s]

So, so lovely.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you!

[hendercats]

Oh, wow ... oh, wow! I love this.

I am convinced. Totally. Prior to reading this, I did not care to see Des slashed with anyone other than Sawyer, but you've made me a believer in this pairing. Jen's got the right word: stunning. To that I would add: fabulous. *flail*

[hitlikehammers]

Goodness, thank you so much! I'd never really thought about slashing Desmond at all before this idea struck, and when it did, it sort of just... spilled out. For you say that I convinced you of the pairing, though - that's such an amazing compliment! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this :)