Fic: What Happens In Vegas (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: What Happens In Vegas (1/1)
Rating: R
Pairing: Jack/Ianto (established relationship), mentions of Jack/Gwen
Word Count: 1,597
Summary: Ianto knew how it worked, but never quite understood why.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: Just a little ficlet based on the back story for a larger plot idea I had recently.

Comments

[altena_san]

T_T... That was very hot, sticky, and sad. Sort of like when you accidentally spill a cup of hot chocolate on the back of your hand. Very well done, bravo!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you; to be compared to hot chocolate in any capacity is quite an honor ;)

[jessieflower]

Beautiful Disaster.
It made me want to cry.

[hitlikehammers]

Wow; thank you. I’m flattered to have sparked such emotion.

[badwolf36]

Absolutely gorgeous introspection.

*May I suggest perhaps breaking your paragraphs up into smaller bits? It would make it a lot easier to read on-screen. Just a suggestion*

Thanks for sharing!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so very much for both your kind words and your suggestion. I did note the rather dense paragraphs as they appeared, particularly when posted here (they look so… massive, in caparison to my word processor) - and I did consider breaking them up, and more than likely would have had it been a different piece. However, I feel for the sake of the flow in terms of theme here, it was best to keep each given concept separate, almost an entity unto itself, resulting in the long paragraphs. I greatly appreciate you trudging through to the end, regardless of the length :)

[badwolf36]

I see your point about the central theme. *And isn't it just a bugger when things look so different on the Web than on your computer? :) *

[hannahofthemist]

Wow. Let me just say that I NEVER comment on fics... Never ever ever. But this... it brings up so many of the issues I see forming as the relationship between Jack and Ianto progresses, and does it so beautifully and hauntingly. Congrats on a great piece!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you ever so much. That’s exactly what I think may come up as their relationship progresses, as well - glad that you seem to agree.

[invisible_lift]

This is the second piece of yours I've read, and I'm just struck by the sheer lushness of your prose. It's very dense. Gorgeous.

[hitlikehammers]

My word - thank you. It means a great deal that you’ve enjoyed what I’ve posted thus far, and I sincerely hope that you continue to enjoy what is to come.