I offered to write porn in celebration of
aithine's birthday. One of the requests was from
tinnny. She asked for dog tag porn. What she got was, um, dog tag porn, with a bit of angst. Seems I can't just write uncomplicated porn. *sigh
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I really think we've never had enough emotional fallout for John over killing Sumner.
Its sexy but very emotionally revealing and raw
Wow, that's a great compliment. Thanks again.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially the dog tag images. When tinnny asked for dog tags in her porn, well ... my brain went "guh".
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There's just not nearly enough exploration of John's guilt over killing Sumner. Not on the show, not in fanfic.
I loved this muchly.
And this? Then he carefully lifted the tags over John's head, unwrapped Sumner's tag from John's hand, and placed both sets of tags around his own neck. "Let me carry them for a while."
Is beautiful.
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There's just not nearly enough exploration of John's guilt over killing Sumner. Not on the show, not in fanfic.
I agree totally. I think there is some confusion about the difference between "detached and distant" (which I totally think John is) and "shallow" (which he totally isn't).
Sadly, I believe the writers of the show, and the fanfic community, tend to believe that since John doesn't easily show his feelings (like Rodney seems to do), then he musn't have them. I think there was way more guilt there than the little bit we've been shown. Don't be surprised to see me go back to this well at some point.
Anyway, glad you liked. :)
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My solomn comment is this: Mmmmm Mmm Mmmmm McShep. :)
I've been ghosting around the McShep board for awhile now, and this was great cause Rodney wasn't at all cowardly with intimacy [cause i never see him backing away from his true ideals] and John was poiently in denial, like he always seems to be [despite his best tries.]
I account any mispelling or unreasonable jargon to the hour and the beer.
Lots o love, LARA
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this was great cause Rodney wasn't at all cowardly with intimacy
Yes, exactly. I am NOT a fan of cowardly Rodney. And John? He is the King of Denial. Poor guy.
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