Another new SGA fic - for tinnny

[history_gurl]

I offered to write porn in celebration of aithine's birthday. One of the requests was from tinnny. She asked for dog tag porn. What she got was, um, dog tag porn, with a bit of angst. Seems I can't just write uncomplicated porn. *sigh

Comments

[dacey]

That was just absolutely gorgeous. The whole thing felt like I stumbled upon something not meant for me to see or hear, but I stayed anyway, holding my breath, because I just couldn't walk away. It was beautifully done. Thanks so much for sharing it.

[history_gurl]

The whole thing felt like I stumbled upon something not meant for me to see or hear, but I stayed anyway, holding my breath, because I just couldn't walk away.

Oh, thank you. That's precisely the atmosphere I was going for. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[kimberlite]

Rodney drove his mouth into Sheppard, punishing him for leaving and for dying and for trying to be the hero he shouldn't have to be. And Sheppard's mouth gave back as good as it got, teaching Rodney about guilt and responsibility and having to leave good men behind, no matter how hard you tried.

Really lovely angst and emotion (and hot dog tag sex!). :)

[history_gurl]

Yay! Glad you liked it. And really, how could dog tag sex NOT be hot?

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[tinnny]

I *adore* it!

I'm really sorry I let you wait this long until I had time to read the story. ;/

Teeth clicked louder than the two sets of dog tags as they clashed. Rodney drove his mouth into Sheppard, punishing him for leaving and for dying and for trying to be the hero he shouldn't have to be. And Sheppard's mouth gave back as good as it got, teaching Rodney about guilt and responsibility and having to leave good men behind, no matter how hard you tried.

This is just amazing. I love the imagery and at the same tim the very physicality of the dog tags. This is rough and demanding and a fight as much as sex, absolutely great!

I cannot resist the Siege angst. :) There's so much depth to this story, it's so much more than porn. Thank you for making it so angsty - it's exactly my thing.

Thank you so much for writing this, for me! I enjoyed it immensely. I hope it was fun writing, and I hope many more people loved it. I'll pimp it again to make sure! :))

Re: Like? Like?! :D

[history_gurl]

I'm SO glad you liked it!

And I'm really sorry I waited so long to reply to your reply. *bg* To be honest, I got the comment while I was on vacation, and I thought I had replied. Oops.

I had a great time writing this! When you requested dog tags, Sumner was the first thing I thought of. The rest just sorta snowballed.

And let's be honest. I am obviously incapable of writing straight (pun intended), uncomplicated porn. It works so much better for me when it's angsty and difficult.

Oh, how I love our boys!

Re: Like? Like?! :D

[tinnny]

Oh, how I love our boys!

Heee, glad you do! I have the impression a lot of people are dissatisfied with season 2, but so far at least the fandom is still going strong. :)) Good fanfic is all that keeps my interest in the characters alive.

[anonymous]

This was lovely. I have to say that while porn is great on its own, adding a touch iof angst just makes it that much greater *g*. Very hot too :).

Laura.

[history_gurl]

Thank you so much. I am all about the angsty porn. Now I just need to write some more. *g*

[beadattitude]

This was fantastically hot, and Rodney carrying the dog tags was a stroke of genius.