Comments | hiro_chan: [Fic] Five drabbles for footie

hiro_chan

[Fic] Five drabbles for footie_100

Aug 09, 2007 14:21

So here it is. After weeks of not contributing any to the comm, I managed to make 5 little drables. Hope you like :).

Author : hiro_chan
Prompt : Magic
Team : Manchester United
Rating : PG
Disclaimer : Lies :).

Note : This is a bit pointless. OK, very pointless, but I hope stil read-able :).

( Drabble 1. Cristiano Ronaldo )

paul scholes, wayne rooney, cristiano ronaldo, manchester united, patrice evra, footie100, footballslash, sir alex ferguson

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hiro_chan August 9 2007, 10:12:13 UTC

Thank you :D:D! Phew so glad you like them. It's darn hard to get the feeling accross in just 100 words :).

petarrr August 9 2007, 08:54:06 UTC

Eee these are lovely! I love Pats! he he.

hiro_chan August 9 2007, 10:16:02 UTC

I just realized that Pat has never been written in a fic - and then I came accross again on one of his interview where he said he thanked God everyday for letting him join United and this just came to my head *g*.

He's adorable, our Pat - he really needs to be written more into fic, if not as a pairing, then as a sidekick *g*.

Glad you like the fic X3~

petarrr August 9 2007, 10:24:46 UTC

Ha ha Pat is amazing. Its just so great because you hear that and go well atm we have Heinze suing us to let him go. Blergh they just dont make them like Pat anymore.

Lol I am a fan of Pat/Wazza. Srsly. But nobody wants them. :( :( :(

hiro_chan August 9 2007, 10:30:06 UTC

Pat/Wazza XDXDXD!!! OMG wherever did you get that idea from XD? OK, brainwash me, who knows I'll be able to write one haha.

Is correct. I wish many of them are like Pat, Smudge, Gaz, Ryan and Paul.. :(. They comes with different specifications nowadays :(.

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aeroporto August 9 2007, 11:01:14 UTC

Those were really great! I loved Wayne's in particular.

hiro_chan August 10 2007, 06:03:20 UTC

Thank you :D:D!!!

I really like how the Wayne drabble came out, if I can say so myself :p. I just had that flash of inspiration (i really don't know where it comes from) and Wayne seems boyish enough, adorable enough to fit into the idea - especially with his wide blue, blue eyes and such ♥

clippage August 9 2007, 14:23:49 UTC

:) Very nice.

hiro_chan August 10 2007, 06:34:02 UTC

Thank you :)

kobean August 9 2007, 17:00:47 UTC

dsjgbsdlgn. i adore them all.

+ the cris one is just all kinds of lovely. it is so real - and gah. it just makes me feel all nostalgic - like i was the one living it, ya know? or is that weird? lol.
+ omg. paul/ole. ♥ i dont even know where to begin.

“do you feel better now?”
that single question makes me melt into a puddle. guh. and just the whole scene itself is wonderful, and simple. and it's just the perfect combination for the both of them.
+ the wayne one made me absolute grin. AHHH! wayne is so adorable. and santa. and his wish. just... perfect.
+ oh patrice. this piece - ♥ just. i can't get over the way you described united to him. ahhh. fantastic.

From the majestic stadium and its rich history and its passionate faithfuls to Cristiano’s trickeries and Gary’s burning passion and Paul’s imaginative passes and Wayne’s skills and exuberance and Ryan’s magical achievements throughout the years - it still feels unreal to Pat.

+ the saf one made me smile then, cry. guh. :(

But there were times when he had to look into a ( ... )

hiro_chan August 10 2007, 07:48:30 UTC

I was so busy replying to your other posts that I forgot to reply this one :p.

I'M GLAD YOU LOVE THEM ALL ♥! I want to reply to your points one by one but I have no word - AT ALL - so I'll just settle with : so, so happy you like them :).

And hehe, I really like the SAF one. I mean he kind of has somekind of personal attachment with the players, especially those he nurtured since boys, and I do think that he's find it sad, in a way, to release the kids that I'm sure he really hope will succeed. Ahem. Anyway ;).

Thank you for the lovely comment, hun ♥