At odds with quiet fires

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At odds with quiet fires #2
pg 13 // Jonghyun/Taemin // ~7k w
-- so i know i said something about this
only being split in two parts... i guess
that's not going to happen now. maybe
3 parts? yeah, probably 3. :))

Comments

[mariposa02]

spot for me cause I'm great

[mariposa02]

uiii this is just incredibly cute and awwwwwww >.<
I don't know what to say.

[ubomb]

omg yay \o/

[ubomb]

let me just say that i'm enjoying this more than i did enjoy the movie tbh :3 taemin is so cute, i squealed when he refused to take the pills ;; and i dont know why but the way jonghyun is slowly realizing things is so real. i love the dialogues sakdjlfkñ
but omg hep hap kibum killed me.

" “You need some apples, son?”

“Apples?”

“Yeah, apples. For your high motherfuckin’ horse.”

brought me to tears i didn't expect that and iogifjñg;ñ-- imagining key like that is fun.
this is wonderful :3 i dont think i need to repeat that, though. lmao i am so redudant :')
can't wait for chapter 3 \o/ ilu~

[hipslip]

awww thank you so much :) i'm glad it's not ruining the movie for you in any way. :D

black!kibum is such a treat for me to write, ydek.

thank you so much again-- see, redundancy is okay! for commenting and reading, i mean. glad you liked it~

[imvus]

Again you have made this so wonderful. Too much to like to quote all but here is my favorite:

**Taemin counts them one by one by the color of their wings while Jonghyun just admires them, his eyes tapering. “There are a lot of butterflies here.”

“My mom once said that I’ll know she’s special if when I’m around her I’ll feel a hundred butterflies in my stomach.”

Taemin smiles to himself, taking down his hair from the ponytail and shaking his hair free. “Maybe they escaped.”

“From where?” Jonghyun spins his head around to look for a cage of sorts that could possibly hold the butterflies captive. The line goes busy so Jonghyun tries his mother’s number again.

“When I opened my mouth just then.” Taemin replies, eyes on his hands.***

Finally someone admits their feelings! :)

[hipslip]

thank you so much for reading and quoting :D

let them be stubborn. this makes for some very good frustration LOL~

[imvus]

Your very good at letting them take their time and work through all the little issues and finally, finally realize and admit their true feeling (what ever that may be)

It makes for a very good read too!

[shineecandy]

i thought i would hate yoona here, good thing she's not the bad person here.

for some reason i want ontae to be together just so jonghyun could realize and admit he likes taemin...

i cant wait for ur update!

[hipslip]

thank you so much for commenting and reading :D

uhmm, i don't wanna give anything away by commenting on ontae and yoona. LOL. will update soon~

[hipslip]

haha this is the most i've ever enjoyed writing kibum :D glad it's working.

thank you for reading and commenting :D