At odds with quiet fires

[hipslip]

There are two events that helped develop Jonghyun’s hatred
for surprises.

When Jonghyun was sixteen he willed himself not to gag in
his mouth when his best friend Jinki came to him hand in hand with a boy named
Minho, announcing their new found intimate relationship. His nostrils might
have flared a bit but not much can be

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[a_life_defiant]

SPOT! cause that's what I do ^^
brb reading

♥

[hipslip]

SO QUICK. <3 i just realized how the html in this is slightly messed up :\

[a_life_defiant]

lol, can't help it. I see you and I pounce. today was for shit & I knew that this was gonna be brilliant ^^

maybe even a bit golden with the light hitting it and stuffing some of the strands with this kind of flare

I love how you worded this. LOVE. 'stuffing' so odd....but it describes it so perfectly.

And Jonghyun almost losing himself and turning into a poet earlier.

lol Kim Shakespeare XD

“I just. I like marking my territory.”

keke, I spot underlying dog reference *snickers*

“Of all the people to be jealous of you pick the one who thinks that gold teeth is, and I quote, doper than life itself.”

oh Key....he did not.....*facedesk*

He misses keys on the piano, stumbles on the box of flutes and fumbles with his words.

Box of flutes??? what kind of idiot keeps flutes all willy-nilly in boxes like.....oh wait. We're talking about Jonghyun here. nevermind. this makes sense. XD

Kibum...I can't handle your replies. He sounds exactly like this kid I know. I'm dying here, you just can't see it ^^

Jonghyun’s lips

[hipslip]

another wonderful comment from you :) i've always wanted to write kibum thinking that he's black. no idea why. 8| thank you :)

[imvus]

spot! I was going to message you today to make sure you were okay. I so glad you posted. I will be back in a little while to read this! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hipslip]

i know. i feel as if i havent posted in a while even if it's just been two weeks :O thank you for not forgetting about my writing though haha. and for the concern. i've just been impossibly busy it's not even funny.

[imvus]

It's only been two weeks? It seems so much longer then that...lol. I'm glad to know you were okay and just busy

[hipslip]

I KNOW. it's only been two weeks according to my lj calendar. even i think it's gone on for too long. and i'm not particularly EXTREMELY pleased with this piece of work but the mushyness of the movie that i mentioned in my a/n really rubbed off on me.

i am so happy that jonghyun's slight homophobia (or just lack of knowledge when it comes to homosexuals) is coming across as effective. :D that is what comprises his character after all :D

i feel like a dick coz i dont know my readers that well but you said something about workng in a cafe when you were in your twenties? im guessing you're in your thirties now? and where are you from? :)

[hipslip]

thank you so much :)will update soon.~

[artifex_scriba]

No offense, but I honestly get surprised when I find that you post something. Cuz it's so unexpected, but not in a bad way, because you keep posting things that aren't what you say you're going to post, but that's just fine because everything is always so good and I just love you so much so I don't care if stories aren't updated because your writing just makes me so happy.
Sigh...
And this was adorable and I'm glad you're going to add on to it because Taemin here makes me all squishy inside and Jonghyun just seems like such a real person, they both do, and Key is just so... oh my gosh, I don't even know.
Yeah... Good job :) As always.

[hipslip]

thank you so much for being patient with me and for continuing to read my work. i'm actually quite ashamed of this particular fic since it's not as original as i would want it to be. but sometimes when i get so inspired by something that i've watched (which is clearly what happened) i just have to type it down and get it out. :))

[shineecandy]

jonghyun is such a douche... i feel sorry for taemin.... but at least they are making progress. cant wait for the rest!

[hipslip]

as of now, yes. yes he is. :) thank you so much for reading and commenting. i shall update soon.