What Starts in Chaos

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Jonghyun thinks Jinki is right. He is stupid as well as stupider. Because if he wasn’t he wouldn’t follow the invisible trail of breadcrumbs Jinki left outside of the amusement park. He wouldn’t danger himself being seen by some unfathomable preconceived criminal scenario out here in a forest where he’s pretty sure leads to the beach.

He can smell

Comments

[lubzyou]

Spot, omo, I love you. I just realized I didn't comment on the other two parts. I'm such a troll but I've been waiting for this.

[lubzyou]

…MY FEET HURT JUST AS MUCH BUT I THINK I CAN STILL FIND A WAY TO SQUEEZE IT UP YOUR ASS!
Angry Jinki, you would make him speak wonderful insults.

meekly asks when a minute of the crickets singing passes by.
I love how you say common phrases in an uncommon way.

“Jessica-the blonde?”
Damn! It’s always Jessica. Idk why I hate Jongsica so much.

…I’m kind of amazing in that sense. Also, incredibly adorable. Just ask half the girls in our school.
And all of the guys.

Jonghyun drops the book on the mattress and rises to his feet and oh god was Jinki’s room getting smaller or was that all just him? Was he still drunk or…
>.< Poor Jinki, this would be incredibly awkward. I would probably never walk back into that room.

Thanks to Jonghyun and his lips…
*fist pump* get it.

To your A/N, but *_* I love Jongyu fluff and I needed this after Middlemen

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late comment.

thank you so much for reading and commenting :)

and this is exactly why i posted this right before ending middlemen. im glad it helped even if in some small way. hopefully you'll stick around for the taekey sidestory? yes? no? hehe.

[lubzyou]

THERE WILL BE A TAEKEY SIDESTORY?!
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SPOT

[mariposa02]

fuckyeah!

Re: SPOT

[mariposa02]

this is sooooo cute and great and I really, really, really love it :D

I hate it when people like you call me out on things like-what? Being jealous? I mean, really. Even if I was which I’m not but kind of am who the hell are you to point that out for me. And with such vulgarity. What? You think you’re right? And even if you are which you aren’t but kind of are you should at least get it right.” - I understand.

Re: SPOT

[hipslip]

late comment. :(

thank you for consistently commenting and reading my fics :3

and for quoting. and for understanding jinki's weirdness in this whole thing. <333

[imvus]

love the fluff!! but it's over.....( whining, sorry wanted more...maybe some smut...lol) Teenage angsty fluff, gotta love it!

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then you will be glad to know that i'm writing a taekey side story for this. haha. :3

[imvus]

I'm such a huge ontae stan but I'm slowly coming around to all pairings the last being taekey. And if it wasn't for your Middlemen....omg that was the best. :)

[plenty8]

OMOMOMOO <3333333

GET IT JINKI!

gosh, the ending was so cute ;___; they're so stupid when in love (even though they always are)!

well done on this! *applauds* loved every chapter!

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late comment fail D8

thank you so much for your comment and for reading this whole fic. please stick around for the taekey sidestory? i think it's only fair. :)

[tendrejoue]

Ahahah this was really great, they're all so cute!! Jinki will have to replace his fetal boxes later the poor baby kekeke

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Jinki will have to replace his fetal boxes later
-- priceless

late comment :((

thank you for reading. :)

[tendrejoue]

You Know what? I don't even remember what I was talking about, but with an iphone you're bound to make typos and some are just awesome XD