Love. I feel torn between laughing at Cuddy's frustration, feeling bad for her, and going AWWW. I think the last one wins. ;-) Beautiful job as always!
Booby Spice, LOVE LOVE LOVE! And yay for no deaths! Woot! I'm quite proud of you.
I just loved this style and I'm quite impressed at how well it flowed and how easily the dialogue separated itself from non-dialogue.
I just thought this was so funny: oh for the love of god, foreman says. the three of you- just get a room!
Hehe!
I love the characterizations and I love how I can totally see Cuddy being annoyed and aggravated with him and 'resisting the urge to bang her head against her desk'. And I loved Wilson in this. And House's romantic side was very cute.
There was something else I wanted to say, but I can't remember now. I'll just comment again later when I can think of it.
Do you know how hard it is for me not to make everybody miserable?! Seriously, woman. The things I do for you.... ;)
I kid, I kid. I'm glad you liked it, though. And I hope it made you a smile a bit. Suckyness needs to stay away from my Ollie. Else I'll pelt it. With. Um. Sappiness! Yes. Sappiness until it bleeeeeeeds.
Oh! I remember. I really liked this whole thing: there's a long pause. she tilts her head.
wilson's not a loser.
I loved the timing on that. The pause, and then the comment. And it was very funny. And I love the how House gets all jealous of the Wilson/Cuddy, perhaps even more so than Cuddy/anyone else.
Okay, so I was going to ask you this in AIM, but you all went away, but I have to go to sleep because I have to be up early, so I'm going to sign off, so I'm going to ask this here: Why the quotation marks on the last line and only the last line? Hm.
because that's where the story really begins, you know? everything else is just them dancing around each other, it's the stuff they've been doing forever. she says no, he says yes, she caves; house getting jealous, wilson being all mr. moral highground, cuddy being stubborn... that can all be said a hundred different ways. (i'm pretty sure this exact same plot has been done a hundred different times, for that matter. ^^) but by the end, she finally trusts him enough to let him in, and he's finally let his guard down enough to take advantage of the fact that she's going to let him in. and they can finally try something different. so the last line, that's really the first thing he says.
...and that, of course, is the obnoxious, confusing, pretentious answer. the simpler explanation is i felt like it. *g*
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Love. I feel torn between laughing at Cuddy's frustration, feeling bad for her, and going AWWW. I think the last one wins. ;-) Beautiful job as always!
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(...I think I stared at your icon for a solid minute before realizing that it was going backwards. Win. ^^)
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Hehee. Your icon is awesome. ^^
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I can't wait to see you my wee fooshie...
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*pouts*
*pouts more*
*stomps foot*
*pouts*
Did you get tickets?? You're coming for surez???
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I just loved this style and I'm quite impressed at how well it flowed and how easily the dialogue separated itself from non-dialogue.
I just thought this was so funny:
oh for the love of god, foreman says. the three of you- just get a room!
Hehe!
I love the characterizations and I love how I can totally see Cuddy being annoyed and aggravated with him and 'resisting the urge to bang her head against her desk'. And I loved Wilson in this. And House's romantic side was very cute.
There was something else I wanted to say, but I can't remember now. I'll just comment again later when I can think of it.
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I kid, I kid. I'm glad you liked it, though. And I hope it made you a smile a bit. Suckyness needs to stay away from my Ollie. Else I'll pelt it. With. Um. Sappiness! Yes. Sappiness until it bleeeeeeeds.
Or, you know. Something like that.
Love!
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there's a long pause. she tilts her head.
wilson's not a loser.
I loved the timing on that. The pause, and then the comment. And it was very funny. And I love the how House gets all jealous of the Wilson/Cuddy, perhaps even more so than Cuddy/anyone else.
Okay, so I was going to ask you this in AIM, but you all went away, but I have to go to sleep because I have to be up early, so I'm going to sign off, so I'm going to ask this here: Why the quotation marks on the last line and only the last line? Hm.
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...and that, of course, is the obnoxious, confusing, pretentious answer. the simpler explanation is i felt like it. *g*
and you know what occam says about simplicity ;)
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