Matt and Mohinder: The Adventures of Parenthood. Episode Two: Bra Shopping

Dec 06, 2007 17:17

Title: Matt and Mohinder: The Adventures of Parenthood. Episode Two: Bra Shopping
Author: hiddenfantasy
Rating: PG
Summary: Matt and Mohinder take Molly shopping for her very first bra.
Notes: I can't help it, I love torturing all three of them. Written for slytherin_face 'cause she's having a bad day. Many thanks to mosaic and worri for giving me the bunnies!
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ilsaluvsrick December 7 2007, 00:45:04 UTC
Wow, Molly is way cooler and more laid back than I was at that age. If my dad dared to goof around like Matt did, I would have died of embarrasment.

Can't wait for next chapter. Are they going to give Molly the full version? Just boy/girl or all the variations? Either way it's gong to be painful.

"OK, but what is it that you guys do? Cause you're not making babies."

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hiddenfantasy December 7 2007, 00:53:31 UTC
I think Molly is pretty laid back, especially since she has Matt as a father and he's bound to be embarrassing no matter what he does.

Oh yeah. Molly's going to get the whole speech. It's going to be painful but funny as hell. :D

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saavikam77 December 7 2007, 01:04:06 UTC
LMAO!!! ^_^ Yup, Matt and Mohinder are definitely out of their element. :p

I'm almost scared to see what the 'birds and the bees' conversation is going to look like. O_O

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hiddenfantasy December 7 2007, 01:18:07 UTC
Yes they certainly are, which is why it is so fun to read.

Don't be scared! I'll be funny, I promise!

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demarcos_btoast December 7 2007, 01:25:17 UTC
Just wow! This was amazing and hysterical! And oddly mortifying at the same time.... I about died when Matt and Molly were discussing moobs
and his need for a bro (gotta love Seinfeld for that term).

I spied no spelling or grammatical errors, fyi, making this a well rounded and truly enjoyable read!

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hiddenfantasy December 7 2007, 01:36:17 UTC
I couldn't resist adding moobs. Had I been thinking of Seinfeld, I would've added the bro in too! :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I generally look over my fics a few times before posting, just so I can catch anything. Being a former English major, I'm kind of anal about that. XD

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demarcos_btoast December 7 2007, 01:43:52 UTC
I try to do that too but some things slip through, so I generally look to the readers to point out what I missed. And I like to extend the same courtesy to other writers.

And don't feel bad, I'm almost OCD about grammar and spelling. Its kind of a good thing when writing fan fiction...

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hiddenfantasy December 7 2007, 01:58:00 UTC
-nods- Yes, I miss some things too and unfortunately that can make things jarring, which is not fun.

Thanks for taking a look, though, and checking things over!

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liritarofrohan December 7 2007, 01:49:17 UTC
So cute!

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hiddenfantasy December 7 2007, 01:58:31 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

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tayles December 7 2007, 01:57:43 UTC
Firstly, squee bra-shopping fic! I lol'd. Though I'm with Mohinder - should Matt ever wear a lacy red bra, he's on the couch for a week. Maybe more for the teddy. I like him allll manly *molests*

I love your Molly.

Secondly, OMG, your mood theme is made of win and awesome. Who made it, where can I find it, am I allowed to use it? 'No' is an acceptable answer but I will have to stare at yours to make up for it XD

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hiddenfantasy December 7 2007, 02:02:04 UTC
I like him all manly too! ^.^ So does Mohinder.

Thank you! I'm glad you like my Molly.

lidi made the moodtheme. And it can be found here!

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