Spring Forward, Fall Back (1/?)

[hi_im_kris]

Title: Spring Forward, Fall Back
Pairing(s): Brittana, Klaine, Faberry, Sugarmony. Mentions of Finchel, Bartie, and probably a few others that I can't really remember...
Author: KrisRide94
Rating: PG
Summary: Harmony, Rory, and Sugar are the best of friends. When their family life starts to fall apart, they wish on a star to change it, at any cost.

Comments

Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

Ack! This is amazingly cool! :D I think you've circumvented the whole cliche of kids going back to fix their parents futures by making two of the kids people we already know from the show - which is absolutely fantastic, by the way! Like, oh my gosh, so cute! And Sugar and Rory work really well as Brittana/Klaine children :D

Re: Feedback! :D

[hi_im_kris]

Wow! Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to give me some in depth feedback. I can guarantee I'm going to rehash the dynamics of this story, because even I know that there's bound to be some problems with the set up currently.

That being said, I'm really glad you liked it! I hope you'll continue to read it. Thanks!

Re: Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

You're very welcome! And hahaha okay, sounds great :) It's always so tough pinning a piece down when you're just starting working with it - I just got critique on a rewrite of something I've been working on for a few years now and I'm off to go bring out some relationship dynamics I completely forgot in favour of bringing up other plots XD A writer's work, haha.

I definitely will continue to read it; I'm looking forward to more! I'm glad the feedback was helpful to you!

Re: Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

(also, you drum? :D )