Spring Forward, Fall Back (1/?)

[hi_im_kris]

Title: Spring Forward, Fall Back
Pairing(s): Brittana, Klaine, Faberry, Sugarmony. Mentions of Finchel, Bartie, and probably a few others that I can't really remember...
Author: KrisRide94
Rating: PG
Summary: Harmony, Rory, and Sugar are the best of friends. When their family life starts to fall apart, they wish on a star to change it, at any cost.

Comments

Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

Ack! This is amazingly cool! :D I think you've circumvented the whole cliche of kids going back to fix their parents futures by making two of the kids people we already know from the show - which is absolutely fantastic, by the way! Like, oh my gosh, so cute! And Sugar and Rory work really well as Brittana/Klaine children :D

Re: Feedback! :D

[hi_im_kris]

Wow! Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to give me some in depth feedback. I can guarantee I'm going to rehash the dynamics of this story, because even I know that there's bound to be some problems with the set up currently.

That being said, I'm really glad you liked it! I hope you'll continue to read it. Thanks!

Re: Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

You're very welcome! And hahaha okay, sounds great :) It's always so tough pinning a piece down when you're just starting working with it - I just got critique on a rewrite of something I've been working on for a few years now and I'm off to go bring out some relationship dynamics I completely forgot in favour of bringing up other plots XD A writer's work, haha.

I definitely will continue to read it; I'm looking forward to more! I'm glad the feedback was helpful to you!

Re: Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

(also, you drum? :D )

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[hi_im_kris]

Lol Yeah I do drum! Four years and counting, I love it so much! :)

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[miss_darkmoon]

That's awesome :D Haha, I was reading your blurb thing on the side of your page while scrolling to the top and thinking "hey, that looks like my blurbs..." with the interests thing XD I used to play drum kit with a band but now I mostly play djembe, haha :D (Hand drums require a lot less practice for me and I'm lazy :) And kind of like it better now too. But the full kit is fantastic too!)

Re: Feedback! :D

[hi_im_kris]

Haha that's pretty awesome! It's always cool to meet another drummer. I need a new kit so bad though, it's getting to be a piece of junk. Lol I just have to save up and get a new one haha

Re: Feedback! :D

[miss_darkmoon]

It is, isn't it? :D And aw, that sucks! Ha, I bought a new kit like... gosh it would have to be almost five years ago or something. But it's still pretty decent because that was a while before I stopped playing it. Before that I was playing shows on this piece of crap I picked up at a garage sale XD

And saving up is always the key, isn't it? Haha, that's the one thing I've enjoyed about switching to hand drumming... though my djembe is still too big to be really portable.