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One Fic: A Little Bit More Fun (No Challenge)

Jan 29, 2014 13:01

Title: A Little Bit More Fun
Summary: Teddy takes a risk on Valentine's Day. Written as a gift to empressempoleon.
Characters/Pairings: Teddy/Victoire
Genre: Romance
Beta: None
Rating/Warnings: G
Medium: Fic
Word Count: 1089
Can The Order Post to Tumblr? No thanks.

( A Little Bit More Fun )

character: teddy lupin, character: victoire weasley, creator: bluemermaid, rating: g, genre: romance, form: fic

Comments 4

caitieness January 30 2014, 03:30:49 UTC

the way you describe teddy's emotions in this are really fantastic.

bluemermaid January 31 2014, 16:42:07 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

empressempoleon February 1 2014, 05:01:44 UTC

Thank you so much! This was so sweet and adorable and perfect. Awww. You wrote Teddy really well, I thought it was nice to see him so flustered and insecure about his feelings. And Victoire was characterized nicely - I think this is one of the few fics where she is honestly a very sweet girl rather than sassy, and I liked it. Thanks again! It was lovely.

bluemermaid February 4 2014, 19:25:35 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! In my own personal head canon, Victoire is sweet and Dominique is the sassy one, haha. :)