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katsheswims June 5 2012, 02:36:26 UTC
This was an awesome story!

I had no idea that Dean was in a coma. I was just thinking Buffy was transported to TX instead of killed. Though looking back Dean's dreams of the car crash and other things pieced it together. It was a great twist!

I thought something was off/wrong when Bobby called John and freaked out, but I wasn't sure what was so bad with Dean being with a slayer. I figured out Dean was in a coma or something like it during the scene where John met up with Bobby then Missouri.

Overall a really good story.

Keep writing!

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hezio2 June 5 2012, 11:46:23 UTC
Thanks for the comment :)
I tried to leave hints throughout the story so I'm glad you found them.
Of course originally, I was going to have Dean be dead, but betas artist, sister all screamed NO!

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filenotch June 6 2012, 02:06:36 UTC
Nice job interleaving the worlds, and some great lines.

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hezio2 June 6 2012, 12:48:14 UTC
Thanks :) glad you liked it.

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lolaann1 June 6 2012, 22:22:29 UTC
Oh man, I can't believe I missed that you posted this! I saw on tth where you were using the other ending there. I'm sure it was hard to decide, since they were both good :D Yay! Just had to leave you my love for this story.

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hezio2 June 7 2012, 00:25:15 UTC
you are so sweet.
couldn't have done it without you and your patience!

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jeffhardyfan722 June 19 2012, 00:41:27 UTC
I've already left comments on others chapters, but I am so completely happy that this story is finished and of course I love the ending! I'm happy it's finished because now I can go back and read the whole thing without waiting :-D !!!!

I will say that I probably won't read the alternate ending cause I like the warm and fluffy ending right here! I had always wished for a happy ending with Buffy, but didn't get it. I'm also pretty sure that I won't get a happy ending with SPN either. So, to read a story like this where it's all nice and happy and lovey dovey makes me squee with joy! I love that u wrote this and it has been a pleasure reading it and will be just as good when I re-read it this coming weekend!

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hezio2 June 19 2012, 02:51:48 UTC
Thanks so much for sticking around and the add. I added you right back btw.
ps the other ending is happy just not as fluffy happy.

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Monday, June 18th livejournal June 19 2012, 01:57:36 UTC
User rahirah referenced to your post from Monday, June 18th saying: [...] and Chapter 8 [...]

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Re: Monday, June 18th hezio2 June 19 2012, 02:52:33 UTC
Thanks for mentioning me :)

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