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Observation Deck

Oct 14, 2011 00:19

Title: Observation Deck
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Quinn, Blaine, Puck/Kurt, Kurt/Blaine, mentions of past Quinn/Puck
Genre: romance, there might be some angst hiding in there too
Warnings: none
Spoilers: Everything that’s aired
Summary: It’s not easy being on the outside looking in.
Word count: 2150ish
Author’s note: From this prompt. Also, Blaine ( Read more... )

oneshot, rating: pg, puck/kurt, fic: glee

Comments 22

patchfire October 13 2011, 23:37:51 UTC

Oh that was lovely. I want to say more but I just sighed happily at the end of it and went "Oh" very softly, so there you go. :)

hey_doey_doey October 13 2011, 23:40:00 UTC

Thank you. :D

lil_miss_choc October 14 2011, 12:34:52 UTC

I did pretty much exactly the same thing. ^^^

I love the way you captured Noah's vulnerability underneath his toughness - a really sterling job!

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 13:14:17 UTC

Thank you! :)

raving_liberal October 13 2011, 23:38:54 UTC

Awww. I think you did a good job w/ the POVs. I liked it!

hey_doey_doey October 13 2011, 23:42:16 UTC

Blaine's POV was like the writing equivalent of getting teeth pulled, but I really enjoyed Quinn's POV.

And thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :D

chyldofeternity October 14 2011, 00:08:33 UTC

OMG THIS WAS AWESOME! *dies from squeeing too much and not getting enough air*

I could not have imagined a better fic for that outsiders-POV summary I put up!

You are awesome!

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 09:47:43 UTC

Aw, yay! I'm so glad you liked it! It was such a great summary, and I really wanted to do it justice. :)

charlie_jae October 14 2011, 00:15:06 UTC

I feel sort of bad for Blaine, I've actually been in his spot before. It still hurts even when you see it coming. So I liked that I didn't have to force myself to feel for him. It sucks to see someone you care deeply for, fall in love with someone else.

Yet that ending with Quinn made my heart feel a little warm. I've always believed she didn't have the same feelings for Puck as he did for her.

Nicely done. I liked it.

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 09:48:57 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

From your pen to RMs ears... david_of_oz October 14 2011, 00:20:36 UTC

This is a perfect bit of perfection that is perfect and I hereby declare it to be canon! Let's hope the show steals this immediately - and cuts you a BIG FAT CHECK. And a writer's contract.

Re: From your pen to RMs ears... hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 09:49:44 UTC

That would be lovely. I won't hold my breath though. ;)

And thank you. I'm glad you liked it!