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Observation Deck

Oct 14, 2011 00:19

Title: Observation Deck
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Quinn, Blaine, Puck/Kurt, Kurt/Blaine, mentions of past Quinn/Puck
Genre: romance, there might be some angst hiding in there too
Warnings: none
Spoilers: Everything that’s aired
Summary: It’s not easy being on the outside looking in.
Word count: 2150ish
Author’s note: From this prompt. Also, Blaine ( Read more... )

oneshot, rating: pg, puck/kurt, fic: glee

Comments 22

pterawaters October 14 2011, 00:31:33 UTC

Oh, that was amazing. I've got tears in my eyes! You've written the Puckurt relationship well, definitely, but I'm impressed with how you handled Blaine and especially Quinn. Many many internet cookies for you!

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 09:50:45 UTC

Thank you very much. :) I really liked Quinn's POV, I might have revisit it in another fic.

naryakiuxen October 14 2011, 02:16:27 UTC

oi, why so sweet? It feels like I have all this Puckurt feelings now... and I just want them to be happy and bickery and happy...
Loved the story! you did a good job with the POVs :D

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 09:50:58 UTC

Thank you. :D

caledonius72 October 14 2011, 07:44:40 UTC

Lovely, just lovely. Not an out of place word or thought. Gestation of their budding relationship was nicely done, and a good commentary on how those new to the group see beyond the person's history and see the person now. Interesting POVs make that little bit different. Well done.

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 09:51:25 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm happy you liked it!

iskra667 October 14 2011, 11:09:26 UTC

That was great in a bittersweet way :)

You did a great job withe Blaine, you actually made me a little sorry for him, while still making it obvious it's not working with Kurt ;) And Quinn was lovely.

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 11:16:48 UTC

Thank you. :)

greenglowsgold October 14 2011, 20:37:34 UTC

Oooh! I actually enjoyed the Blaine POV. Not only that, I felt bad for him! :D

Also loved Quinn's part, but mostly the whole Puck/Kurt-developing-behind-the-scenes thing. I always like when relationships are shown out-of-focus.

In summary: this is awesome! And I'm super-impressed with you and everyone else who seem to all be finishing their challenges, somehow...
How are you doing that, again?

hey_doey_doey October 14 2011, 23:15:33 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I forced myself not to write evil!Blaine, even though part of me really really wanted to. ;)

As for finishing the challenge...I recommend lots and lots of caffeine. :)