[Fic Fill] An Overdue Visit

[inner_wings]

TITLE: An Overdue Visit
AUTHOR/ARTIST: inner_wings 
RECIPIENT: revolutionjack 
CHARACTERS/PAIRINGS: England, America, platonic England/America
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: England goes to see his little colony again after a long absence, but a few of England's lessons for America don't go quite as planned.

Comments

[kasumicc]

It's endearing to see England getting so uncomfortable by expressing affection xD And America sure is a trusting boy ^^' But that's what makes him so lovely ♥
Nice fic! :)

[inner_wings]

Thanks! :D

[inner_wings]

Thank you! :)

[revolutionjack]

Ohmygod!! You posted!! :DDD I'm sorry, I've been so busy with college I'd forgotten to check this~

I absolutely love the way America and England interact in this, and this is legit exactly what I had in mind.

I like how you included the little bit where England was teaching America how to say the word independent; making America's eventual revolution all the more bitter from England's perspective.

I absolutely the little "Why I am the only one you can trust" thing that England did, and America's reaction, and they are both sooooo incredibly in character right there I could cry. England is so insecure, and yet awkwardly adorable, and America's so trusting and and caring; I /love/ his reaction to Russia kicking over snowmen and his solution to it.

Over all, your characterisation is /incredible/ and I am sooo jealous of your style; it's utterly beautiful.

/stalks your journal nao

[inner_wings]

FFFFFFF so late responding to this, sorry.

I'm so glad you liked it! :D The prompt was lots of fun, thanks for it!

[graverunner]

OH MY GOSH. America is an adorable bundle of

ADORABLENESS.

Erhem. Also, this made me laugh like a ninny:
America's horrified expression made it clear what he thought of people who kicked over snowmen.

[inner_wings]

That's some very sparkly adorableness! XD Thank you!