[fanfic] Diligere Errantem - Twenty-Five

Jan 13, 2011 13:00

Title: Diligere Errantem
Part: Twenty-Five
Characters: OCPhilippines, Spain, & America (mainly)
Pairings: America x OC Philippines, Spamano
Warnings: OLDER TEEN - Highly Alternate Universe, Historical Setting, Non-Countries, OC Warning, Drama, Angst, Romance, Cross-Dressing, Some Implied Adult Themes, Unbetated Mind Dribble...in fact, nothing about ( Read more... )

oc: philippines, char: s. italy, fanfiction, char: america, artist - vivalalixi, author - damagectrl, char: spain

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Its finished ;3; yukihiro826 January 13 2011, 23:51:35 UTC
Lovely chapter^^

and as well as the ending,

why can i imagine spain acknowledging the granddaughters but never alfred XD

Its like when they visit her papa spain he gave them hugs and kisses... but is very cold at alfred...

Lol i will always support lovi in this fic, but hey i know that will never happen as well XD i just love lovi more than alfred XD

Im glad that i woke up this morening to this lovely ending too XD

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Re: Its finished ;3; damagectrl January 14 2011, 00:55:50 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

I can imagine him doing that, as well. :)

Yes, I know...there will also be Lovi-supporters. >_< :sigh: Still, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Hope you have a good weekend! :D

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Fiiiiiin~ mikamikachuchu January 14 2011, 02:17:06 UTC
Awwwww!
I love the happy ending picture! :D ARTHUR'S IN IT OMG I MISSED HIM :D

I was really curious about what Maria wrote to Antonio XD

Ahhhh! Lovely chapter, lovely story, lovely ending picture ^_^

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Re: Fiiiiiin~ damagectrl January 14 2011, 15:53:34 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

I'm glad you like the picture! I was very strict with her on what I wanted. >:3

I think what Maria wrote Antonio is best left to the imagination - let people think what they want. It just started with "To Papa". ^_^

Thank you again for continued reading!

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vchecamz January 14 2011, 04:56:25 UTC
one word: AMAZING!!!

I'm sorta new in this community and your fanfic was the first one I read, and I must say I am soo glad I read it. It was simply beautiful! the characters, the plot twists, even the ending(and that's something I don't usually say in a story). Everything was sheer genius.

I loved the fact that every character had a chance for happily ever after. Antonio can go to Venice to reconcile with Maria, Lovino can find himself a new stud or stud-ette (whichever one he prefers) and Maria and Alfred can have a happy family in Florence. Heck, even Rome had a happy ending. That's something you don't usually see in stories. I salute you and may many more ideas come your way.

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damagectrl January 14 2011, 15:56:39 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

Welcome to the community! :)

I'm honored that my fic was the first you read and extremely relieved that you enjoyed reading it. It was no where near genius, but it I did enjoy writing it.

I'm very pleased that you loved the ending, as I didn't want to tie everything up perfectly - I just wanted the reader to know that whatever happens next happens, but there is a happy ending there.

Thank you very much for your time! I do hope to write more for the comm in the future. :)

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damagectrl January 14 2011, 16:03:14 UTC
Thank you for reading!

It was very fun writing it and I'm glad people were enjoying my brain dribble. :D

It was very hard to feminize his name. I even tried looking up options and they all made me cringe. It did seem to work out, though. GrandDad Iggy understands. XD

Lovi was meant to be hated in the beginning. Though he grew on people...a lot...more than Alfred. -_-" Ah, the girls won't have him as a Grandpa. Look closely at the drawing and notice who is trying to grab a hold of him. :3

There is Hungary! She'd probably bleed at the nose at the notion of three little girls to dress up.

Thank you again for reading!

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comment hack XD yukihiro826 January 14 2011, 23:41:12 UTC
oh my

so having relationship to girls younger than them runs in the blood XD

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Re: comment hack XD yukihiro826 January 14 2011, 23:44:00 UTC
edit

lol i wonder what would the parents and the grandfather

would react if the three girls declare that they want to marry lovi XD

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it's the end!! beingrandom January 14 2011, 11:37:36 UTC
*sigh* one of the best stories I have read in my whole fanfic reading years :D

I love the ending :) plus this chapter is just so full of drama and emotions that it got me gripping my mouse xD

I'm going to miss reading this >< but nevertheless it's a great ending :D

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Re: it's the end!! damagectrl January 14 2011, 16:05:07 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

I am very sure you will read many more, far better, fanfics. :) Not to worry!

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and the story. Thank you so much for sticking with it and your patience. This took several months to complete, so thank you very much for your time!

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