[fanfic] Diligere Errantem - Twenty-Five

Jan 13, 2011 13:00

Title: Diligere Errantem
Part: Twenty-Five
Characters: OCPhilippines, Spain, & America (mainly)
Pairings: America x OC Philippines, Spamano
Warnings: OLDER TEEN - Highly Alternate Universe, Historical Setting, Non-Countries, OC Warning, Drama, Angst, Romance, Cross-Dressing, Some Implied Adult Themes, Unbetated Mind Dribble...in fact, nothing about ( Read more... )

oc: philippines, char: s. italy, fanfiction, char: america, artist - vivalalixi, author - damagectrl, char: spain

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northwhitespecs January 14 2011, 13:52:23 UTC
HAPPY ENDING!

sort of. Oh the many many questions that are left. But HOLY CRAP IT'S DONE. ... it's done. D: I have to say that this chapter was just beautiful. I mean, all the angst and broken relationships but with Alfred and Maria meeting in Venice. Oh, derp, I... cannot handle this much romance/angst in one sitting.

Idk why, but I suddenly support Spamano. I just felt so heartbroken when he choked out "Why can't we be happy?" ;A; I just want to give him a big big hug (even though it really was all his fault)

And that picture! The 3 islands and everyone! Even Matthew! 8D (I always wondered what happened to Arthur after the washed-on-the-shore incident)

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damagectrl January 14 2011, 16:09:36 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

Hehehe, yep, there are a lot of questions. Little details here and there, right? ^_^

I'm glad you liked the chapter. I think the last scene was my favorite part. Don't worry, Lovi needed to grow up and he's taking steps to becoming a better man. One day, after his artistic wanderings, he will return to Spain and possibly the little girl in the picture, trying to grab on to him. :D

I like to think Matt married Ukraine and they've taken over the Kirkland vineyards. Arthur was at the Roma engagement party, but I didn't have a chance to mention him. Hehehe...thank you again!

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red_alouette January 14 2011, 15:11:59 UTC
Alas, that all good things must end.

Aww, Alfred really went after her! And yes crack!epilogue yes me want

This whole fic has been an awesome ride. So many emotions and plot twists and things that made me smile :)

I am curious though. What exactly did Alfred paint on the chapel wall? Is it the Virgin and child again or something else? And the family pic (or family painting) is love~

Once again, this fic is made of WIN. I look forward to your future works! ^_^

(Also, thank you. You have inspired me. I am now excited to do my report on Raphael Sanzio. :D)

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damagectrl January 14 2011, 16:15:40 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

He did say he'd follow her in an earlier chapter. :D The crack!epilogue will be silly, but I will try. X3

Alfred painted the Virgin and child picture again; the original one he showed Maria was the draft that he would paint on the church wall - it is his declaration of love. I'm glad you like the family pic! I was very demanding with it. XD

May this come full circle and you get top marks on your report; as Raffaello's connection to Michelangelo is what inspired me to write this story!

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trishpawachunyu January 16 2011, 02:33:59 UTC
OMG IT'S DONE ♥ I love this, sister. Short, yes, but beautiful. I know that Al and Ria end up together and make beautiful babies, but I still can't help but still feel sorry for Lovi...but I'll be letting him get the girl for once in your fic req anyway, so no worries And I shall be waiting here, with bated breath, for the epilogue ♥

Again, sister, I LOVE YOU ♥♥♥ /hugs

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damagectrl January 16 2011, 07:17:26 UTC
Thank you for reading, Squishy! :3

I know, I know...everyone feels bad for Lovi. >_> :sigh:

The random epilogues are going to be just random dribbles and not as serious as this, so don't expect too much. ^_^

:huggles!:

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damagectrl January 16 2011, 07:19:51 UTC
Thank you very much for reading!

I'm glad you liked the ending! Whoo-hoo! I've converted someone! \o/ I feel like I took too long with this, so I apologize for making you guys wait. And then there were November and December where I didn't even update. >_<;; Thank you so much for your patience!!!

Hehehe, yeah, I'm very pleased with the way it came out. I was really hard on her about it, so I sent her part of the epilogue to read to try to make up for it. X)

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mikaishi April 9 2011, 05:18:50 UTC
-cries- this is so.....so good!!!!! I wanna marry u for this!!!! I personally think that this should turn into a movie lol!! it made me cry, blush, and excited!!!! kyaaa!! kilig 2 the max!

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