Re: Hollywood Horror 14/?
anonymous
July 3 2009, 23:39:39 UTC
Matthew found Alfred in the conference room, coming early to get the seat that was not next to Ivan. He nearly jumped in surprise upon seeing his brother, white as a ghost, rummaging around the blackboard
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Re: Hollywood Horror 16/?
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:10:56 UTC
Alfred wandered down the hallway, evening light slowly fading away. He’d spent the day with Mat, allowing himself to be cleaned and fed. Everything had been going well, until Matthew left to check on the conference, and came back saying that Yao and Ivan weren’t there
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Re: Hollywood Horror 18/?
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:13:07 UTC
Alfred sat shivering in a corner, staring forlornly at the front door. Although he didn’t know this, Ludwig had locked it earlier so as not to lose anyone else. To Alfred, however, it seemed like all the demons of hell were conspiring against him, keeping him here against his will
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Re: Hollywood Horror 19/?
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:14:33 UTC
“Alright, Al, I thought we went over this. There are no ghosts in the hotel. Or demons. Or anything else for that matter, except us invited nations and maybe Natalia
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Re: Hollywood Horror 20/?
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:16:07 UTC
Wednesday dawned in the Pyrenees, early summer breeze filtering into the room. Shivering, Alfred scooted closer to the warmth in front of him, snuggling closer until he felt it shift
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Re: Hollywood Horror 21/21
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:33:52 UTC
Reviewer!anon is sad to see that it's over, but I really really enjoyed the fill. It was funny, cute, and I loved all of the character interactions. I didn't think the ending was lame one bit. And I loved Matthew's and Alfred's brotherly interactions <3 They really do care about each other :D
...this anon was wondering if you'd de-anon with this fic so she can add it to her memories and easily link it to people who aren't fans of the kink meme? It's fine if you don't want to, though ♥
Also! “Do you even know what you look like? Any more ‘not sleeping’ and the bags under your eyes will smother New Jersey." How did you know I was a New Jersey!anon who would love a shout out to her state? XD
Re: Hollywood Horror 21/21
anonymous
July 4 2009, 07:32:14 UTC
Haha, this is hilarious! I loved this fill anon! Lame is not the word to describe it. The way that Alfred mistook everything for "something" and believed Ivan's (made-up) tales of the Viy. You managed to get every character in with their flairs to add to the story! I loved Francis writing the note in lipstick. Brilliant :D And the moment with Alfred and Matt was so sweet~
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(And you used Switzerland! Thank you ♥ )
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...this anon was wondering if you'd de-anon with this fic so she can add it to her memories and easily link it to people who aren't fans of the kink meme? It's fine if you don't want to, though ♥
Also!
“Do you even know what you look like? Any more ‘not sleeping’ and the bags under your eyes will smother New Jersey."
How did you know I was a New Jersey!anon who would love a shout out to her state? XD
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Failure!anon must be psychic, to know that New Jersey!anon is from there!
Failure!anon has also uploaded the story here : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5195198/1/Hollywood_Horror
She hopes that is what reviewer!anon was looking for.
Otherwise, she's so glad that you enjoyed the story! <3
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The ending was just right! Lovely fic ♥
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Aww, thank you! Failure!anon is happy that she's managed to get the characters right.
I'm really glad you enjoyed! <3
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