Re: Hollywood Horror 21/21
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:19:00 UTC
WEDNESDAY
The door to the conference room slammed open and nine heads turned to see Natalia, clutching a piece of Ivan’s scarf and looking around the room with a predatory gleam in her eyes.
“Has anyone seen my brother?”, she inquired curtly, gaze roving over the room.
“Nope, sorry”, grinned America from his seat, giving her a hero smile. Arthur rolled his eyes and sipped his Earl Gray, exchanging an exasperated look with Ludwig.
“Very well then”. With a flutter of skirts, Natalia was gone.
A few minutes past.
“I think it’s safe to come out now.”, offered Canada.
With a lot of scuffling, Ivan emerged from underneath the table, exhaustion written on his face.
“So you actually stayed there for over a day?”, asked England incredulously, amusement evident in his tone.
“Next time, I vill be organizing guards and defence, da?”, answered Ivan darkly, taking a swing from his nearly empty vodka bottle and collapsing into a chair.
“That is quite the feat-aru!”
The nations all jumped in surprise and turned towards the door to see a smiling China walking in, Shinatty-chan cellphone in hand.
“Where exactly have you been?”, asked Ludwig tensely, massaging his temples.
“Me? I went to town to get another power cord- aru. Then I noticed there was no Chinatown for miles, which made me think about how nice it would be to have dumplings readily available-aru!”, grinned Yao, sauntering over to the table.
“And then…you went to another Chinatown?”, Francis inquired hopefully.
“Nope. I made one right there-aru!”, answered China happily, sliding a brochure across the table.
America smiled as Francis paled a little and picked up the piece of paper with the very tips of his fingers, considering the new attraction with a look of deep mistrust. England snickered, France glared back, and soon the two were in a heated argument over nothing. Ludwig moved to intervene, but found himself held back by the sleepy Italian draped across his lap. Romano started yelling at the German, barely restrained by a smiling Spain. Switzerland cocked his gun menacingly while China just stared.
Exchanging a smile with Mat, Alfred decided that things were exactly as they should be.
‘And the Hero lived happily ever after’, Al narrated in his head. ___________ Sorry for the lame ending, anon ran out of steam. Nevertheless, anon is done! *dances in glee* She will now prance off to find more requests to fill...tomorrow. Thank you, wonderful anon who commented. <3
Re: Hollywood Horror 21/21
anonymous
July 4 2009, 03:33:52 UTC
Reviewer!anon is sad to see that it's over, but I really really enjoyed the fill. It was funny, cute, and I loved all of the character interactions. I didn't think the ending was lame one bit. And I loved Matthew's and Alfred's brotherly interactions <3 They really do care about each other :D
...this anon was wondering if you'd de-anon with this fic so she can add it to her memories and easily link it to people who aren't fans of the kink meme? It's fine if you don't want to, though ♥
Also! “Do you even know what you look like? Any more ‘not sleeping’ and the bags under your eyes will smother New Jersey." How did you know I was a New Jersey!anon who would love a shout out to her state? XD
Re: Hollywood Horror 21/21
anonymous
July 4 2009, 07:32:14 UTC
Haha, this is hilarious! I loved this fill anon! Lame is not the word to describe it. The way that Alfred mistook everything for "something" and believed Ivan's (made-up) tales of the Viy. You managed to get every character in with their flairs to add to the story! I loved Francis writing the note in lipstick. Brilliant :D And the moment with Alfred and Matt was so sweet~
The door to the conference room slammed open and nine heads turned to see Natalia, clutching a piece of Ivan’s scarf and looking around the room with a predatory gleam in her eyes.
“Has anyone seen my brother?”, she inquired curtly, gaze roving over the room.
“Nope, sorry”, grinned America from his seat, giving her a hero smile. Arthur rolled his eyes and sipped his Earl Gray, exchanging an exasperated look with Ludwig.
“Very well then”. With a flutter of skirts, Natalia was gone.
A few minutes past.
“I think it’s safe to come out now.”, offered Canada.
With a lot of scuffling, Ivan emerged from underneath the table, exhaustion written on his face.
“So you actually stayed there for over a day?”, asked England incredulously, amusement evident in his tone.
“Next time, I vill be organizing guards and defence, da?”, answered Ivan darkly, taking a swing from his nearly empty vodka bottle and collapsing into a chair.
“That is quite the feat-aru!”
The nations all jumped in surprise and turned towards the door to see a smiling China walking in, Shinatty-chan cellphone in hand.
“Where exactly have you been?”, asked Ludwig tensely, massaging his temples.
“Me? I went to town to get another power cord- aru. Then I noticed there was no Chinatown for miles, which made me think about how nice it would be to have dumplings readily available-aru!”, grinned Yao, sauntering over to the table.
“And then…you went to another Chinatown?”, Francis inquired hopefully.
“Nope. I made one right there-aru!”, answered China happily, sliding a brochure across the table.
America smiled as Francis paled a little and picked up the piece of paper with the very tips of his fingers, considering the new attraction with a look of deep mistrust. England snickered, France glared back, and soon the two were in a heated argument over nothing. Ludwig moved to intervene, but found himself held back by the sleepy Italian draped across his lap. Romano started yelling at the German, barely restrained by a smiling Spain. Switzerland cocked his gun menacingly while China just stared.
Exchanging a smile with Mat, Alfred decided that things were exactly as they should be.
‘And the Hero lived happily ever after’, Al narrated in his head.
___________
Sorry for the lame ending, anon ran out of steam.
Nevertheless, anon is done! *dances in glee* She will now prance off to find more requests to fill...tomorrow.
Thank you, wonderful anon who commented. <3
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...this anon was wondering if you'd de-anon with this fic so she can add it to her memories and easily link it to people who aren't fans of the kink meme? It's fine if you don't want to, though ♥
Also!
“Do you even know what you look like? Any more ‘not sleeping’ and the bags under your eyes will smother New Jersey."
How did you know I was a New Jersey!anon who would love a shout out to her state? XD
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Failure!anon must be psychic, to know that New Jersey!anon is from there!
Failure!anon has also uploaded the story here : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5195198/1/Hollywood_Horror
She hopes that is what reviewer!anon was looking for.
Otherwise, she's so glad that you enjoyed the story! <3
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The ending was just right! Lovely fic ♥
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Aww, thank you! Failure!anon is happy that she's managed to get the characters right.
I'm really glad you enjoyed! <3
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