Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 2
anonymous
July 6 2009, 03:50:47 UTC
“Listen Lovi, I’ve loved you for along time.” At this the Italian froze. “At first I thought to you as like a little brother or even a son. But, as you grew older I came to see the nation you grew up to be. You are so cute, well sometimes you are hotheaded, and you like to headbutt me, and can never sit still…” he felt Lovino tensing up with anger. “But,” he added, “you are and always will be my Lovino. Now do you see why I’ve been pleading with you to go out with me at least just once?” Lovino blushed and swallowed the pasta that had been sitting in his mouth before he spoke again
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Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 3
anonymous
July 6 2009, 03:52:22 UTC
“Wha-?” Lovino began before he caught on. Antonio tugged at Lovino’s shirt and helped take it off. He also pulled off his own shirt and discarded both uselessly into a pile off to the side. He leaned down and slipped his hand into Lovino’s pants, making him gasp with a deep breath
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Re: Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 4 (FINAL)
anonymous
July 7 2009, 06:35:27 UTC
>//o//<
This was so sweet and cute and sexy and hot!!! Yes, in that order... XDDDDDDDD That's what went through my mind as I read it.
Ahhhhhhhhh~ Antonio... Carrying a lube just-in-case eh? *cough*
Done really well. ^^ I don't speak Spanish nor Italian (if there was any Italian in it) so I can't say if it's right. But nonetheless this anon enjoyed it thoroughly. ^^
Thanks so much! ^^ I was worried for this since I haven't written anything remotely smutty in a long, long time. But I'm glad it turned out well ^^ oh and you need not worry for my Spanish because I speak it =D
Re: Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 4 (FINAL)
anonymous
May 31 2010, 08:20:11 UTC
~•~•~ Absofuckinglutely hot and sexy!!! Loved it! <3 *insert fangirling squeaks here*
That last Spanish phrase "Yo te amo tambien,mi amor" is alright but it would sound better like this: "Yo tambien te amo,mi amor" but it's ok how it currently is. I just pointed it out because Spanish is my main language and I thought it would sound better like that,but don't worry it's just moving the words since the phrase is right nonetheless.
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This was so sweet and cute and sexy and hot!!! Yes, in that order... XDDDDDDDD That's what went through my mind as I read it.
Ahhhhhhhhh~ Antonio... Carrying a lube just-in-case eh? *cough*
Done really well. ^^ I don't speak Spanish nor Italian (if there was any Italian in it) so I can't say if it's right. But nonetheless this anon enjoyed it thoroughly. ^^
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Loved it.
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Absofuckinglutely hot and sexy!!!
Loved it! <3
*insert fangirling squeaks here*
That last Spanish phrase
"Yo te amo tambien,mi amor" is alright but it would sound better like this:
"Yo tambien te amo,mi amor" but it's ok how it currently is.
I just pointed it out because Spanish is my main language and I thought it would sound better like that,but don't worry it's just moving the words since the phrase is right nonetheless.
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