Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 4 (FINAL)
anonymous
July 6 2009, 03:57:10 UTC
“Pervert. And you questioned me wanting sex on the first date.”
“Aww, Lovi~” Antonio chuckled. He spread a bit of lube onto his fingers and using one hand spread Lovino’s legs. “Ready?” he asked. All he needed was a nod to plunge one finger inside. Lovino closed his eyes in pain and tried to adjust to the intrusion. After all, something bigger would be entering him soon…
Antonio let him adjust and began to thrust, adding two and eventually three fingers to the mix. He scissored him, spreading him much wider. He continued thrusting his fingers, searching for the prostrate. He knew he’d found it when he heard a loud “SHIT!” come from Lovino’s mouth as he arched his back thrusting upwards. Antonio withdrew his fingers knowing it was time. His own member was slick and wet and barely needed any lubricant. He needed Lovino as much as he needed him. He lifted his legs and positioned himself in front of his willing partner’s entrance.
“I love you Lovi” he said lovingly and slid inside of Lovino. He was met with a hot and wet heat surrounding his cock and he almost came right then if not for wanting to make this memorable. Lovino, already properly prepared, needed little time to fully adjust.
“Antonio fuck me already!” he pleaded. Antonio thrusted and both nations moaned loudly, losing control. Antonio continued to thrust except going faster and harder, ramming deeper into Lovino.
“Agh...Lovi…” Antonio moaned. It was too much. The heat around him, Lovino’s wet walls clenching around him and the way he moaned his name, only his name… He slipped his hand between their bodies and started pumping Lovino’s unattended cock to match their thrusts. The way Lovino moved amazed him. He matched every thrust with an arch of his back or a moan. Lovino wrapped his legs around Antonio, sheathing himself further on the Spaniard. He clawed at his back, trying to find some stability.
“Antonio!” he cried as he climaxed all over their bodies. His walls clenching around Antonio sent him over the edge too.
“Lovi! Te amo!” he cried as he released himself inside Lovino. He rode out the effects of the orgasm with a few more thrusts and then he pulled out, barely holding himself up from collapse. Both men were panting, tired, but extremely satisfied.
“I love you…” Lovino muttered, his flushed face concealing any blushing. Antonio smiled and kissed him on the forehead.
“Yo te amo tambien, mi amor.”
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Phew, that's out of the way. This anon is embarrassed since she hasn't written anything smutty in a while and not this descriptive. /Hopes she did okay. >.< I'm sorry if it was badly written! I take kindly to comments and criticisms to help improve my writing (porny or not). Spain/S. Italy is <3
Re: Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 4 (FINAL)
anonymous
July 7 2009, 06:35:27 UTC
>//o//<
This was so sweet and cute and sexy and hot!!! Yes, in that order... XDDDDDDDD That's what went through my mind as I read it.
Ahhhhhhhhh~ Antonio... Carrying a lube just-in-case eh? *cough*
Done really well. ^^ I don't speak Spanish nor Italian (if there was any Italian in it) so I can't say if it's right. But nonetheless this anon enjoyed it thoroughly. ^^
Thanks so much! ^^ I was worried for this since I haven't written anything remotely smutty in a long, long time. But I'm glad it turned out well ^^ oh and you need not worry for my Spanish because I speak it =D
Re: Spain/S. Italy - Dating Part 4 (FINAL)
anonymous
May 31 2010, 08:20:11 UTC
~•~•~ Absofuckinglutely hot and sexy!!! Loved it! <3 *insert fangirling squeaks here*
That last Spanish phrase "Yo te amo tambien,mi amor" is alright but it would sound better like this: "Yo tambien te amo,mi amor" but it's ok how it currently is. I just pointed it out because Spanish is my main language and I thought it would sound better like that,but don't worry it's just moving the words since the phrase is right nonetheless.
“Aww, Lovi~” Antonio chuckled. He spread a bit of lube onto his fingers and using one hand spread Lovino’s legs. “Ready?” he asked. All he needed was a nod to plunge one finger inside. Lovino closed his eyes in pain and tried to adjust to the intrusion. After all, something bigger would be entering him soon…
Antonio let him adjust and began to thrust, adding two and eventually three fingers to the mix. He scissored him, spreading him much wider. He continued thrusting his fingers, searching for the prostrate. He knew he’d found it when he heard a loud “SHIT!” come from Lovino’s mouth as he arched his back thrusting upwards. Antonio withdrew his fingers knowing it was time. His own member was slick and wet and barely needed any lubricant. He needed Lovino as much as he needed him. He lifted his legs and positioned himself in front of his willing partner’s entrance.
“I love you Lovi” he said lovingly and slid inside of Lovino. He was met with a hot and wet heat surrounding his cock and he almost came right then if not for wanting to make this memorable. Lovino, already properly prepared, needed little time to fully adjust.
“Antonio fuck me already!” he pleaded. Antonio thrusted and both nations moaned loudly, losing control. Antonio continued to thrust except going faster and harder, ramming deeper into Lovino.
“Agh...Lovi…” Antonio moaned. It was too much. The heat around him, Lovino’s wet walls clenching around him and the way he moaned his name, only his name… He slipped his hand between their bodies and started pumping Lovino’s unattended cock to match their thrusts. The way Lovino moved amazed him. He matched every thrust with an arch of his back or a moan. Lovino wrapped his legs around Antonio, sheathing himself further on the Spaniard. He clawed at his back, trying to find some stability.
“Antonio!” he cried as he climaxed all over their bodies. His walls clenching around Antonio sent him over the edge too.
“Lovi! Te amo!” he cried as he released himself inside Lovino. He rode out the effects of the orgasm with a few more thrusts and then he pulled out, barely holding himself up from collapse. Both men were panting, tired, but extremely satisfied.
“I love you…” Lovino muttered, his flushed face concealing any blushing. Antonio smiled and kissed him on the forehead.
“Yo te amo tambien, mi amor.”
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Phew, that's out of the way. This anon is embarrassed since she hasn't written anything smutty in a while and not this descriptive. /Hopes she did okay. >.< I'm sorry if it was badly written! I take kindly to comments and criticisms to help improve my writing (porny or not). Spain/S. Italy is <3
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This was so sweet and cute and sexy and hot!!! Yes, in that order... XDDDDDDDD That's what went through my mind as I read it.
Ahhhhhhhhh~ Antonio... Carrying a lube just-in-case eh? *cough*
Done really well. ^^ I don't speak Spanish nor Italian (if there was any Italian in it) so I can't say if it's right. But nonetheless this anon enjoyed it thoroughly. ^^
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Loved it.
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Absofuckinglutely hot and sexy!!!
Loved it! <3
*insert fangirling squeaks here*
That last Spanish phrase
"Yo te amo tambien,mi amor" is alright but it would sound better like this:
"Yo tambien te amo,mi amor" but it's ok how it currently is.
I just pointed it out because Spanish is my main language and I thought it would sound better like that,but don't worry it's just moving the words since the phrase is right nonetheless.
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