Hold Me Close [47/?]
anonymous
June 5 2009, 06:04:07 UTC
England likes to think he is brave now, and he's really coming along. Soon, he'll be who he used to be, and then he can really be good to America. He feels a little embarrassed at the idea of wanting to be of some use to the American, he can't really fathom why. Some part of him feels like he'd be laughed at, but he really does want to repay America for everything he's done
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Re: Hold Me Close [47/?]
anonymous
June 5 2009, 06:43:12 UTC
New reader here <3 I read the previous parts last night and I'm excited to see a new part so soon after I caught up :) I really think it's a sweet story and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work ♥
Hold Me Close [48/?]
anonymous
June 5 2009, 07:26:04 UTC
The morning remains relatively uneventful. America has no idea about England's tears. They're wiped away before America wakes up, and when America sees England's puffy eyes that morning, he assumes he was just bothered by the same nightmare and offers more reassuring words
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Hold Me Close [49/?]
anonymous
June 5 2009, 07:27:07 UTC
“I certainly think they're the same.”
“That's after you saw them. Plus, you guys had sex, so you actually owe me. He hit me with his Britannia Angel wand, eh.” Canada replies and flips the pancake on the pan.
“But that wasn't your intention.” Alfred shoots back with a childish pout - he's losing... damn it, and to Canada at that!
“It wasn't, but it still happened. I filled your life long desire.” Canada says, and focuses more on his pancake now that Alfred is shouting less.
“It's not really life long, you know.” A stool screeches on the tiles as America pulls it out and sits.
“Well, it's certainly been you desire since at least when you declared and won your Independence in the American Revolution. I don't really remember when you told me you wanted him before that though.” Canada pools the pancakes onto a plate and fill the pan with the rest of the batter.
American Revolution?“I know, I know. I think it was right around the time before he was taxing me like mad.” America says and swings his legs a little
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Re: Hold Me Close [50/?]
anonymous
June 5 2009, 09:54:14 UTC
Oh Arthur...You poor darling. Not really a good way to find out. And does he remember who is now? Or just the Revolution. Also. Matty, you scheming man you. I think I love you more. (And I really want that shirt you got Arthur...XD)
Re: Hold Me Close [50/?]
anonymous
June 6 2009, 23:21:43 UTC
I've been reading all the parts up to this today and all I can say is- OH.MY.GOD. THIS SHIT IS AWESOME.
Seriously, I'm addicted now. I can't wait for another update and I really love the whole plot as it has progressed. It's really starting to get interesting now with England overhearing America and Canada.
Hold Me Close [51/?]
anonymous
June 11 2009, 21:45:01 UTC
England says very little during breakfast today; it is mostly banter between America and Canada, idle chit-chat between the twins before they pause and look at England
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Re: Hold Me Close [51/?]
anonymous
June 14 2009, 01:08:22 UTC
New reader here!
To my eyes, you're awesome, Author!Anon. I've been reading the whole thing today, and I keep wanting for more ^^' Often, I found myself thinking "I'd wish for this to happen"...just to find it coming true a few chapters later! It was as if you could read my mind, and I'm absolutely thrilled for that *-*
Will be absolutely looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Re: Hold Me Close [51/?]
anonymous
July 3 2009, 00:36:11 UTC
This anon checks this fill everyday in hopes of an update. Not to sound pushy or impatient, I was just wondering if author!anon is ok and just fighting for time/working through a writer's block? I really love this story and it would be upsetting if it was just...left here with no resolution :(
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“That's after you saw them. Plus, you guys had sex, so you actually owe me. He hit me with his Britannia Angel wand, eh.” Canada replies and flips the pancake on the pan.
“But that wasn't your intention.” Alfred shoots back with a childish pout - he's losing... damn it, and to Canada at that!
“It wasn't, but it still happened. I filled your life long desire.” Canada says, and focuses more on his pancake now that Alfred is shouting less.
“It's not really life long, you know.” A stool screeches on the tiles as America pulls it out and sits.
“Well, it's certainly been you desire since at least when you declared and won your Independence in the American Revolution. I don't really remember when you told me you wanted him before that though.” Canada pools the pancakes onto a plate and fill the pan with the rest of the batter.
American Revolution?“I know, I know. I think it was right around the time before he was taxing me like mad.” America says and swings his legs a little ( ... )
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Poor Arthur, he's so confused. *hugs him* You fic constantly makes me want to hug Arthur!
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OH ANON, HOW I LOVE YOU SO!
P.S. I LOVE LONG STORIES. XD
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AUTHOR ANON SO AWESOMEEE!!!!
yay for moar updates! ILU!
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OH.MY.GOD. THIS SHIT IS AWESOME.
Seriously, I'm addicted now. I can't wait for another update and I really love the whole plot as it has progressed. It's really starting to get interesting now with England overhearing America and Canada.
Can't wait for your next update <3
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AND WHOO ARTHUR's GOINHG TO LONDONNN!!
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Don't worry, just take your time~ I've been busy this past week too. xD
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To my eyes, you're awesome, Author!Anon. I've been reading the whole thing today, and I keep wanting for more ^^' Often, I found myself thinking "I'd wish for this to happen"...just to find it coming true a few chapters later! It was as if you could read my mind, and I'm absolutely thrilled for that *-*
Will be absolutely looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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and AHHH AUTHOR ANOAN THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!! ;___; I'm so happy i'm going to cry!!
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