United We Stand [1/?]
anonymous
May 6 2009, 00:35:54 UTC
This is the non-original-author-Anon. I don't think I followed the characters in the original story very closely. I kind of took up whatever characterization seemed fitting for the time period. I hope this is okay, OP
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United We Stand [2/?]
anonymous
May 6 2009, 21:02:29 UTC
America started teaching the new states early, once he finally got them back, telling them both stories of the revolution. He lingered on the people involved, the ones he could remember best, mumbling about France’s help before he went mad, Franklin’s love for Paris, speaking whatever garbled French he knew
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United We Stand [3/?]
anonymous
May 6 2009, 21:04:52 UTC
America marveled at how fast Texas could gulp down what was put on the plate in front of him. He ate like a man who hadn’t eaten in weeks - and America thought, that might be true. Though they both knew how the vote would turn, Texas had refused to take anything of America’s before everything was ratified
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Re: United We Stand [3/?]
anonymous
May 8 2009, 17:12:01 UTC
*laughs* You know, I don't usually see the States so much as America's kids, but it really works here. Poor America, with 50 of them! (Though, I can't say I'm too surprised. America always did strike me as a bit of a, um, loose nation.)
Not taking offense or anything, but during the 1800's, America did it's best to keep away from Europe's affairs as long as Europe kept out of the New World. Today's America, yeah, I can see seeming a bit loose. But back then? I don't quite see where you're seeing it. Please enlighten me?
United We Stand [5/?]
anonymous
May 10 2009, 23:37:08 UTC
“Dammit, SC!”
The slap nearly echoed through the room, or perhaps it was only in America’s mind that it did.
“I didn’t take your fucking letters! I tol’ you a million times, I didn’t take them.”
But America grabbed her shoulder, drawing back his hand for another slap. South Carolina did not flinch, though, even as red blossomed across her cheek. He saw the truth now, in her eyes, something he’d always thought he could see before. Why hadn’t he seen it this time, again?
Breathless, America took back his hands. The defiant look stayed on South Carolina’s face.
“I’m… I’m sorry,” he said, and she grabbed back her arm, saying nothing to him, storming out, calling for Florida.
So South Carolina hadn’t taken the letters from America’s locked drawer, the only important ones in the whole desk. He’d need to find them though. They couldn’t have just walked out…
United We Stand [6/?]
anonymous
May 10 2009, 23:40:22 UTC
The few doctors they’d allowed to touch him called it a miscarriage, while those in the west called it Bleeding Kansas. All America knew was that there was too much blood, more bloodied sheets than he’d ever remembered, and it felt like the life had been torn out of him, and that all that was left to do was the dying part
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Re: United We Stand [7/?]
anonymous
May 15 2009, 03:00:15 UTC
I'm so glad you guys like it! I think I've included all the states that entered the Union between Maine and Nevada, at least in passing. Sorry, Mountain States, but you didn't exist yet, LOL.
Sorry for the delay in updating. I'll try to get more up tonight because I'll be out of town this weekend ^_^;;“What’s that sound?” asked America, rubbing his temples. Only California was around to ask. Even though Oregon had come into the Union relatively easily (as a free state, too - Massachusetts was pretty happy about that), Pennsylvania still suggested that he take things easy for a while
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http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=6235351#t6235351
And would love a sequel featuring them in Civil War fic. Which means I'm asking for something much more serious and dark than the original fill.
While the states are fighting between themselves, America is bedridden under care due to major physical and mental damage from all the fighting.
Bonus for state hate sex and/or non-con. Double bonus if it's Virginia and Massachusetts who are both harboring major daddy issues.
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Looking forward to seeing the next bit!
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The slap nearly echoed through the room, or perhaps it was only in America’s mind that it did.
“I didn’t take your fucking letters! I tol’ you a million times, I didn’t take them.”
But America grabbed her shoulder, drawing back his hand for another slap. South Carolina did not flinch, though, even as red blossomed across her cheek. He saw the truth now, in her eyes, something he’d always thought he could see before. Why hadn’t he seen it this time, again?
Breathless, America took back his hands. The defiant look stayed on South Carolina’s face.
“I’m… I’m sorry,” he said, and she grabbed back her arm, saying nothing to him, storming out, calling for Florida.
So South Carolina hadn’t taken the letters from America’s locked drawer, the only important ones in the whole desk. He’d need to find them though. They couldn’t have just walked out…
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THIS IS SO SAD
AND SWEET
AND HISTORICAL
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I'm from Minnesota, and this just tugs my heartstrings.
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Sorry for the delay in updating. I'll try to get more up tonight because I'll be out of town this weekend ^_^;;“What’s that sound?” asked America, rubbing his temples. Only California was around to ask. Even though Oregon had come into the Union relatively easily (as a free state, too - Massachusetts was pretty happy about that), Pennsylvania still suggested that he take things easy for a while ( ... )
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And poor little Oregon. I liked how you described her distress. I actually started feeling really bad for her. (Poor thing!)
Ugh 50 kids, ohh America you need a babysitter.
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