Under Control. [9/12]
anonymous
April 28 2009, 21:47:48 UTC
[OH GOD I AM SO SORRY. This is the final to the Prussia/teen!America prompt started at part 3 (http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=7419095#t7419095). I hope someone even remembers that still. >< It’s been so long. Author!Anon would like to take the moment to apologise to anyone who was left waiting and blame school and Nordic fluff for hijacking her brain. To make up for it, here’s the awesome smut. *bows down
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Under Control. [10/12]
anonymous
April 28 2009, 21:49:04 UTC
After the troops had been dismissed - America gave each of them a proud smile as they walked past him - Prussia told him to go wait in his hut. His review would be delivered to him posthaste.
He could not stay still. America sat on his bed maybe for half a minute, which felt like hours, then got up and paced around the hut, all the while nervously running his hands over his clothes. Should he undress already? Was he allowed to? He bit his lip, oh god, but if he didn't get to end this today he would
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Under Control. [11/12]
anonymous
April 28 2009, 21:50:08 UTC
"Keep your hands off it. That stuff's expensive," he said condescendingly. America scowled just slightly. Prussia ignored this, only smirked, and next moment he was pulling off his shirt and moving on to his pants. He was being deliberately slow, as he rather enjoyed watching how America's face, his whole body became more and more flushed the longer he had to wait
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Under Control. [12/12]
anonymous
April 28 2009, 21:51:57 UTC
America's hands were shaking as he raised them from the bed and clumsily clutched onto Prussia's shoulders. The bed strings creaked miserably underneath their weight, but America could not hear such sounds through his pleasure. Their bodies all but slammed together and America found his face buried in the crook of Prussia's neck, his lips tasting skin and sweat. A vicious thrust and angling of hips and a small scream was lost between them.
"Oh, please let me come."
Prussia inhaled sharply. ""What was that?" he whispered.
America repeated the request. "Please, P-Prussia. I-I need..." But though the next thrust was even stronger than the previous ones, Prussia fell still, buried deep inside America's warmth. The boy squirmed impatiently. When nothing happened for a while, aside from their laboured breaths, America pulled back to look at Prussia's face
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Re: Under Control. [12/12]
anonymous
April 29 2009, 03:10:58 UTC
I'm SQUEEING right now, author!anon, literally SQUEEING. I thought this was never going to be finished, which would have been a shame, but da-amn, you posted and it made my day! ♥ ♥
Totally using this as fodder for one of the Prussia/America promtps. :D
Re: Under Control. [12/12]
anonymous
April 29 2009, 05:36:54 UTC
*splutters* I... THIS! FUCK!
Anon, you freaking rock! Every feeling, every action, every line was just so incredibly well placed! AND Oh. My. God. So hot! *clutches the computer screen* Just... Just... PERFECT!
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He could not stay still. America sat on his bed maybe for half a minute, which felt like hours, then got up and paced around the hut, all the while nervously running his hands over his clothes. Should he undress already? Was he allowed to? He bit his lip, oh god, but if he didn't get to end this today he would ( ... )
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"Oh, please let me come."
Prussia inhaled sharply. ""What was that?" he whispered.
America repeated the request. "Please, P-Prussia. I-I need..." But though the next thrust was even stronger than the previous ones, Prussia fell still, buried deep inside America's warmth. The boy squirmed impatiently. When nothing happened for a while, aside from their laboured breaths, America pulled back to look at Prussia's face ( ... )
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I was supposed to sleep now but I had to re-read from the start and YOU! author!anon, is the master of hotness!
thank you for such an awesome end to one of the hottest fics on this meme!
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s...so... hot... omg...
ilu authoranon ;__; <3
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And the last lines are just perfect!
Well done, very well done!
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God, anything with Prussia is so fucking hotttt. This is saved for future fapping.
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That was... nnnn... Prussia.
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Totally using this as fodder for one of the Prussia/America promtps. :D
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HO MY!!!! YESSSS!!!!!
Captcha: Kneaded Leading (who Prussia? HAHAHA)
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Anon, you freaking rock! Every feeling, every action, every line was just so incredibly well placed! AND Oh. My. God. So hot! *clutches the computer screen* Just... Just... PERFECT!
Bravo anon, excellent work!
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I love you and want your babies and throw you on my bed and be violently fucked by you, you know that?
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THANK YOU
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