What, even more Germancest?
anonymous
April 22 2009, 05:11:27 UTC
Germany/Prussia, with one(or both) of them feeling extremly guilt about this relationship. B: If Prusssia thinks about times when he wa raising up Germany and feels even more guilt.
Re: What, even more Germancest?
anonymous
April 23 2009, 18:31:19 UTC
How the hell he do this to someone who raised him up? to someone he love most? Many years ago because of his hopeless stupidity and reckless dicdission, the Prussian almost died and end up in hands of Russian. His brother suffers because of him before and will go on in the future
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Re: What, even more Germancest?
anonymous
April 24 2009, 14:46:17 UTC
Normally, bad grammar drives me crazy, but since this is anonymous, its harder to get a beta, so I decided to read it anyway.
Anon, that section where Germany was comparing body parts, the different kinds of contact that reveal different forms of affection, was *excellent*. Grammar aside, that was some really powerful imagery. I'm really glad you wrote this despite the language issues.
Late OP is here
anonymous
April 24 2009, 15:12:31 UTC
English isn't my first language either, so I'm not so strict about the grammer, and yeah... But author!anon, you literally made my day. I was really nervous sine past few days and when I saw someone filled my request I was more than delighted. And your fic... oh my god, the part, where Ludwig describes Gilbert's body parts, how it was and how it's now... Dear lord, I love it. I can't find good words, so you just should know, that you made me really, really happy. Thak you for this and I hope you'll write something more n a future!
Gilbert sometimes turns to Ludwig, heart pounding, head spinning, counting on him to take away the feeling, giving himself up. His body, his pride. He’s learned it never works, because nothing ever works around there anymore. Everything is falling apart and raining out of the sky like comets with their blue-white tails against revealing darkness
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Delighted op is delighted
anonymous
April 24 2009, 15:22:25 UTC
Oh my, yet another fill. My week has been made. Now it's Gilbert's POV, hell yeah, I wanted this so bad. It's short, true, but so touching. Gah, why I love angst with those two so much, why? Author!anon, now I'll be smiling for the rest of the day (maybe even during sleep, wtf) Thank you so so so much for this *reads again*
B: If Prusssia thinks about times when he wa raising up Germany and feels even more guilt.
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Anon, that section where Germany was comparing body parts, the different kinds of contact that reveal different forms of affection, was *excellent*. Grammar aside, that was some really powerful imagery. I'm really glad you wrote this despite the language issues.
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But author!anon, you literally made my day. I was really nervous sine past few days and when I saw someone filled my request I was more than delighted. And your fic... oh my god, the part, where Ludwig describes Gilbert's body parts, how it was and how it's now... Dear lord, I love it.
I can't find good words, so you just should know, that you made me really, really happy. Thak you for this and I hope you'll write something more n a future!
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Now it's Gilbert's POV, hell yeah, I wanted this so bad. It's short, true, but so touching. Gah, why I love angst with those two so much, why?
Author!anon, now I'll be smiling for the rest of the day (maybe even during sleep, wtf) Thank you so so so much for this *reads again*
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