Re: What, even more Germancest?
anonymous
April 23 2009, 18:31:19 UTC
How the hell he do this to someone who raised him up? to someone he love most? Many years ago because of his hopeless stupidity and reckless dicdission, the Prussian almost died and end up in hands of Russian. His brother suffers because of him before and will go on in the future.
Why his arrogant brother is willingly submissive under him? Don't mention to his eagerness to satisfy him. How? Though it means to clash Gilbert's pride, he has never hesitated to spread his legs, hurting himself, just to fillful his little brother lust, why?
The answer of this question maybe is his brother unrequited love toward him. Like when he was a child, Gilbert always said something like "You was born to be my master.". Whatever, he stills can't get over this disgusting feeling, toward himself...
"West."
Ludwid is brough back to reality by faint voice of his brother.
"West, what's wrong?" He can tell that his brother obviously stills very tired from their previous hours.
"Nothing brother, I'm fine"
"Iike I'm going to believe you! You are no a good liar, you know? West, you must have something wrong in your little thick head."
"It's not anything important."
"Tell me now" The prussia keep insists and leans closer to his brother.
"Do you really want to know?"
"Hell yes"
He knows that Gilbert would laugh at him if he confessed his true feeling. Because no need to ask Gilbert for forgiveness since his brother has never loathed him. The prussian always love him even German hurts him again and again.
No matter what his brother would say, but he can't forgive himself. He can't forgive his dirty mind and his lack of restraint that end up letting himself hurting Gilbert repeatly.
Since he refuses to give the real answer, what he can do now is evading his brother insistant question.
"If you want to know that much, then I will tell you."
Re: What, even more Germancest?
anonymous
April 24 2009, 14:46:17 UTC
Normally, bad grammar drives me crazy, but since this is anonymous, its harder to get a beta, so I decided to read it anyway.
Anon, that section where Germany was comparing body parts, the different kinds of contact that reveal different forms of affection, was *excellent*. Grammar aside, that was some really powerful imagery. I'm really glad you wrote this despite the language issues.
Late OP is here
anonymous
April 24 2009, 15:12:31 UTC
English isn't my first language either, so I'm not so strict about the grammer, and yeah... But author!anon, you literally made my day. I was really nervous sine past few days and when I saw someone filled my request I was more than delighted. And your fic... oh my god, the part, where Ludwig describes Gilbert's body parts, how it was and how it's now... Dear lord, I love it. I can't find good words, so you just should know, that you made me really, really happy. Thak you for this and I hope you'll write something more n a future!
Why his arrogant brother is willingly submissive under him? Don't mention to his eagerness to satisfy him. How? Though it means to clash Gilbert's pride, he has never hesitated to spread his legs, hurting himself, just to fillful his little brother lust, why?
The answer of this question maybe is his brother unrequited love toward him. Like when he was a child, Gilbert always said something like "You was born to be my master.". Whatever, he stills can't get over this disgusting feeling, toward himself...
"West."
Ludwid is brough back to reality by faint voice of his brother.
"West, what's wrong?" He can tell that his brother obviously stills very tired from their previous hours.
"Nothing brother, I'm fine"
"Iike I'm going to believe you! You are no a good liar, you know? West, you must have something wrong in your little thick head."
"It's not anything important."
"Tell me now" The prussia keep insists and leans closer to his brother.
"Do you really want to know?"
"Hell yes"
He knows that Gilbert would laugh at him if he confessed his true feeling. Because no need to ask Gilbert for forgiveness since his brother has never loathed him. The prussian always love him even German hurts him again and again.
No matter what his brother would say, but he can't forgive himself. He can't forgive his dirty mind and his lack of restraint that end up letting himself hurting Gilbert repeatly.
Since he refuses to give the real answer, what he can do now is evading his brother insistant question.
"If you want to know that much, then I will tell you."
But he isn't going to lie.
"Now, I just want to fuck you again."
Fail anon is fail. T.T
OP!anon , I'm really sorry.
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Anon, that section where Germany was comparing body parts, the different kinds of contact that reveal different forms of affection, was *excellent*. Grammar aside, that was some really powerful imagery. I'm really glad you wrote this despite the language issues.
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But author!anon, you literally made my day. I was really nervous sine past few days and when I saw someone filled my request I was more than delighted. And your fic... oh my god, the part, where Ludwig describes Gilbert's body parts, how it was and how it's now... Dear lord, I love it.
I can't find good words, so you just should know, that you made me really, really happy. Thak you for this and I hope you'll write something more n a future!
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