I want to see something before 1809 (when Finland was taken from his hubby TT____TT) - maybe how they first met. Historical references = love. Interaction with other Nordic countries = bliss.
Re: Continued by another author
anonymous
April 6 2009, 15:45:27 UTC
If you want to post this elsewhere, I could help you with the Swedish bits. The grammar is a bit weird and it's kind of distracting for a Swede to read it. ^_^;
Re: Continued by another author
anonymous
April 6 2009, 16:04:59 UTC
How nice! Could you post the corrected sentences? I'd be happy to fix them in the original piece on my drive, although it's late to fix them in here, I'm afraid...
Re: Continued by another author
anonymous
April 12 2009, 15:49:51 UTC
Du har mycket att lära dig Men skallen Stopp! Sätt dig Ska vi gå hem?
Now this one: Det är en klasslös språka ...is difficult. You can't use "klasslös" like that in swedish, since it refers more to classes of people, like... workers, nobility, clergymen and stuff like that. It would be more correct to say something lacks class, so try: Det språket saknar klass. Tho honestly, Sweden wouldn't say that, since they actually spoke Finnish (along with German, French, Dutch, Danish and Norwegian) in Stockholm at least until the 1600s. Swedish was just one of many languages in Sweden until the whole world became really nationalistic in the 1850s.
Re: I hope this is correctly posted/matches the request...
anonymous
April 3 2009, 19:23:01 UTC
You described Finland really well, bears were important part of the pre-christian religion. I especially like the part "He unsheathed his knife and closed his eyes for a moment, in respect to the spirit of the great king of the forest he was about to slay", so beautifully expressed it's making me feel proud of my ancestors!
Beginning of a Syndrome 1
anonymous
July 18 2009, 22:31:46 UTC
I did this few months ago and found it again and thought I might as well finally post it here as another fill like I thought I would when I wrote it. It might have grammar and spelling mistakes but I hope you can overlook them, computer was my beta. I hope you'll like it
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Beginning of a Syndrome 2
anonymous
July 18 2009, 22:36:13 UTC
It was dark at first, as if he was looking at something unpleasant but it passed quickly and Finland thought he saw a moment of realization in Sweden’s eyes. Of course, it happened so long ago, and was such a brief moment, that there is no way he could be sure about it but that’s what it looked like to him and that’s what Finland still believes he saw
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Beginning of a Syndrome 4
anonymous
July 18 2009, 22:43:42 UTC
Finland stops when he finally arrives at the spot he was searching for all along. It’s a huge rock, bigger than any of the ones inside the forest, standing at the edge of a meadow
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Beginning of a Syndrome 6
anonymous
July 18 2009, 22:49:38 UTC
Sweden pulled his fingers out with a sickening noise after he seemed to think that this was enough preparation and Finland felt him shift on the bed and pull his hips up, positioning himself and
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Author's Notes
anonymous
July 18 2009, 22:57:29 UTC
Okaaay there it is. I APOLOGIZE for the japanese honorifics, I don't know how something like "Russia-san" got there, forgive me.
It's late in here, I'm tired and don't remember what I should put in here so if something bothers you, please ask and I will explain whatever is bugging you later.
Re: Beginning of a Syndrome 7 and Final
anonymous
August 10 2009, 06:24:16 UTC
Oh wow. This is just. Really. Beautiful. SuFin is a twisted relationship underneath the surface indeed. The ending struck me as both sweet and disturbing. Sweden and Finland have changed over time to accommodate each other but Finland's house is still not where it used to be.
I want to see something before 1809 (when Finland was taken from his hubby TT____TT) - maybe how they first met. Historical references = love. Interaction with other Nordic countries = bliss.
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Borg borg borg ;)
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Men skallen
Stopp!
Sätt dig
Ska vi gå hem?
Now this one:
Det är en klasslös språka
...is difficult. You can't use "klasslös" like that in swedish, since it refers more to classes of people, like... workers, nobility, clergymen and stuff like that. It would be more correct to say something lacks class, so try:
Det språket saknar klass.
Tho honestly, Sweden wouldn't say that, since they actually spoke Finnish (along with German, French, Dutch, Danish and Norwegian) in Stockholm at least until the 1600s. Swedish was just one of many languages in Sweden until the whole world became really nationalistic in the 1850s.
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(Wiki is your friend! ;)
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It's late in here, I'm tired and don't remember what I should put in here so if something bothers you, please ask and I will explain whatever is bugging you later.
Thank you if you read through the fic and ciao~~
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Thank you so much for writing this. 8DD
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