Appreciation [1/5]
anonymous
February 7 2009, 03:53:22 UTC
“Estonia! Estonia, what's the matter?” Lithuania frowned, rapping his knuckles gently against the bathroom door. When there was no response but a muffled snuffling, he decided to try another approach. “What are you doing in there
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Appreciation [2/5]
anonymous
February 7 2009, 03:58:37 UTC
As soon as the ludicrousness of the situation began to wear off a little, Lithuania pulled away from his still-tearful brother and straightened him up. “Listen, Estonia. You can't let what Ukraine or anybody else thinks bother you, okay?”
The younger nation was silent, staring at his knees.
“Look,” continued Lithuania gently. He tilted Estonia's chin up and gently removed his glasses, folding them and laying them on the bedside table. Immediately Estonia's world became a grainy haze, and he tried not to panic over the temporary loss of his eyesight. “You aren't ugly. You're not even plain. You are,” he said firmly, brushing his thumb over one tear-puffed cheek to wipe away the moisture that still gathered there, “a very good-looking young man.” Lithuania smiled, hoping it might encourage Estonia to do the same
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Appreciation [3/5]
anonymous
February 7 2009, 04:00:00 UTC
Against all sanity, everything he had thought he knew about himself, Estonia realized he was nodding, that Lithuania's hands were coming up to his shoulders, one pressing gently while the other slid in to cup his cheek, and then there was wet heat against his mouth as another pair of lips found his own. For a moment Estonia thought he had melted, simply dissolved into molten liquid with no form or consciousness, and Lithuania's voice was a faraway pull, tugging him back to reality
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Appreciation [4/5]
anonymous
February 7 2009, 04:05:24 UTC
anon failed so completely on HTML in this segment (though the previous one is FUBAR, too ;_;), as well as properly titling it, that she's reposting this entirely. I AM SO SORRY, GAIZ D:
This felt almost exactly like the kiss had - the same moist heat and tender pressing of skin against skin - but it was a thousand times moreso, and he whimpered and writhed with the intensity of it. He thought maybe he felt Lithuania smile, though it was impossible to tell, half-blind without his glasses and drugged with emotion and staring down at the fuzzy dark shape of Lithuania's head moving rhythmically back and forth, slow and deliberate
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Appreciation [5/5]
anonymous
February 7 2009, 04:07:08 UTC
“Li-thu-a-ni-a~!”
The singsong voice set both of them immediately on edge, and Estonia nearly choked on his own breath. He could see dread begin to age his brother's face almost immediately, and suddenly wished there was something he could do to shelter him, this man who was always protecting and caring for everyone else. Who tells you not to hate yourself? Estonia wondered. Who makes you feel at home?“Lithuania, where are you? You're not hiding from me, are you
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Writer!anon apologizes
anonymous
February 7 2009, 04:10:54 UTC
Sorry, leading=/=topping. Sorry, massive HTML FUBAR. Sorry, if OP happens to be squicked by 'cest ships. FORTUNATELY YOU'VE GOT TWO OTHER ANONS SWOOPING IN TO SAVE THE DAY. ;__;
Seriously, OP, I'm REALLY sorry about all that. And if it's not what you intended/wanted.
...The glasses are still there, though. :'D
P.S. could a mod maybe delete the super-messed up first attempt at part 4? *goes off to curl up in the corner, ashamed*
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anonymous
February 7 2009, 05:01:26 UTC
D: Bah. HTML messes are no fun! But, it happens to the best of us. Tip: Usually when I'm prepping a fill, I make a private entry in my LJ with the fill in it, so that I can test out the HTML ahead of time. Alternately, you can use the 'preview post' function (but I find the private entry thing is just easier).
Anyway. This was sweet -- er, I mean, until Russia showed up, anyway. x.x Gah, poor Estonia. And Liet. I want to hug them both! Ah, I love how affectionate, how loving Liet is toward Estonia. But the end, oh, my heart. Ouch. x.x
Re: Writer!anon apologizes
anonymous
February 7 2009, 05:42:07 UTC
Very very true! ;_; And thank you for the advice, I'll do that next time. Thing is, I read this over to check for breaks in the HTML twice, but I think I went all dyslexic on it and just didn't notice. >.<
I'm glad you enjoyed it...? If I'm reading that right, and you did in fact enjoy it. ^_^U Yeah, I don't know, I wanted it to be totally fluffy all the way, but then...the Russia!ending hijacked me. *sigh* It's just really hard to write straight up fluff involving the Baltics, since you ALWAYS have Russia looming and throwing a shadow over them. ;_;
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anonymous
February 7 2009, 05:51:09 UTC
Ahaha, I did indeed like it (I think my flailing must have made it unclear). Ahh, but so sad~
You do have a point about Baltics and fluff. It's hard! I've tried sometimes, but Russia likes to lurk. However, I'm going to do my best to make my own Estonia-fic fluffy (or at least happy). I tried to solve the Russia problem in my own by setting it post-independence. We'll see how that works out. xD
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anonymous
February 7 2009, 05:55:17 UTC
Hooray! XD No, I just never know whether it's good or bad when people say "OH, MY HEART D:" or variations thereupon.
Yeah, especially ANYTHING INVOLVING LIET. Even without Russia, he packs a lot of angst of his own. ;_; But I will be looking forward to a happy break from the bleak routine when you post your fic~ Also I'm excited to know who you paired with Estonia! XD
Sadly, the whole "SELF ESTEEM TAKES 9000 DAMAGE FROM UKRAINE!" plot point sort of requires them to be living in Russia's house. And the rest sort of writes itself.
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anonymous
February 7 2009, 05:30:02 UTC
Dude, that was freaking AMAZING. So sad, but so sweet at the same time. Have you filled anything else? (Because I would be on that like white on rice.) XD
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anonymous
February 8 2009, 07:08:35 UTC
"Who tells you not to hate yourself? Estonia wondered. Who makes you feel at home?" I cried :'(
Pffft, now I know who you are. XD You wrote my favorite fill~ I don't know how many times I've read that Poland/Lithuania text-sex story. Puts a smile on my face every time. 'ttly secksy'
Re: OP Here!
anonymous
February 8 2009, 04:39:46 UTC
Aww, I'm glad you liked it! <3 I know, Estonia needs more love. ;_; I'd write more of him, but he always ends up turning out more like Latvia when I write him. XD
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The younger nation was silent, staring at his knees.
“Look,” continued Lithuania gently. He tilted Estonia's chin up and gently removed his glasses, folding them and laying them on the bedside table. Immediately Estonia's world became a grainy haze, and he tried not to panic over the temporary loss of his eyesight. “You aren't ugly. You're not even plain. You are,” he said firmly, brushing his thumb over one tear-puffed cheek to wipe away the moisture that still gathered there, “a very good-looking young man.” Lithuania smiled, hoping it might encourage Estonia to do the same ( ... )
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This felt almost exactly like the kiss had - the same moist heat and tender pressing of skin against skin - but it was a thousand times moreso, and he whimpered and writhed with the intensity of it. He thought maybe he felt Lithuania smile, though it was impossible to tell, half-blind without his glasses and drugged with emotion and staring down at the fuzzy dark shape of Lithuania's head moving rhythmically back and forth, slow and deliberate ( ... )
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The singsong voice set both of them immediately on edge, and Estonia nearly choked on his own breath. He could see dread begin to age his brother's face almost immediately, and suddenly wished there was something he could do to shelter him, this man who was always protecting and caring for everyone else. Who tells you not to hate yourself? Estonia wondered. Who makes you feel at home?“Lithuania, where are you? You're not hiding from me, are you ( ... )
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Seriously, OP, I'm REALLY sorry about all that. And if it's not what you intended/wanted.
...The glasses are still there, though. :'D
P.S. could a mod maybe delete the super-messed up first attempt at part 4? *goes off to curl up in the corner, ashamed*
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Anyway. This was sweet -- er, I mean, until Russia showed up, anyway. x.x Gah, poor Estonia. And Liet. I want to hug them both! Ah, I love how affectionate, how loving Liet is toward Estonia. But the end, oh, my heart. Ouch. x.x
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I'm glad you enjoyed it...? If I'm reading that right, and you did in fact enjoy it. ^_^U Yeah, I don't know, I wanted it to be totally fluffy all the way, but then...the Russia!ending hijacked me. *sigh* It's just really hard to write straight up fluff involving the Baltics, since you ALWAYS have Russia looming and throwing a shadow over them. ;_;
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You do have a point about Baltics and fluff. It's hard! I've tried sometimes, but Russia likes to lurk. However, I'm going to do my best to make my own Estonia-fic fluffy (or at least happy).
I tried to solve the Russia problem in my own by setting it post-independence. We'll see how that works out. xD
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Yeah, especially ANYTHING INVOLVING LIET. Even without Russia, he packs a lot of angst of his own. ;_; But I will be looking forward to a happy break from the bleak routine when you post your fic~ Also I'm excited to know who you paired with Estonia! XD
Sadly, the whole "SELF ESTEEM TAKES 9000 DAMAGE FROM UKRAINE!" plot point sort of requires them to be living in Russia's house. And the rest sort of writes itself.
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Um, I've filled a couple other things (and would be really flattered if you'd like to read them, too!):
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/632.html?thread=628600#t628600 <-- Poland/Lithuania, Liet crossdressing
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/632.html?thread=593016#t593016 <-- Poland/Lithuania, phone (text) sex
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/632.html?thread=734072#t734072 <-- the first Partition of the Commonwealth so basically Prussia, Russia and Austria raping Poland and Lithuania (it's as yet unfinished, and also REALLY LONG, so...a lot of warnings for this one ^_^U ( ... )
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Pffft, now I know who you are. XD You wrote my favorite fill~ I don't know how many times I've read that Poland/Lithuania text-sex story. Puts a smile on my face every time. 'ttly secksy'
Not above Anon, btw.
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Sorry for the late reply! I was gone for several days due to a retreat I had to attend in D8.
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Oh, I hope you had fun on your retreat! :)
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