Freedom isn't Free 1/3
anonymous
January 9 2009, 22:55:50 UTC
I know who you are and you know who I am! >3> I wasn't quite as mean as I thought of being, here. Poland is not so much a bad lover, as he is most definitely not Ivan... And also shouldn't ever top! /personalopinion! Independence. It tasted every bit as good as the first time-but even better. Because this time there was no going back, and he was going to make sure of that. He was working on his relations with other nations now, even Poland who he'd fought with in his last brief stretch of freedom. And speaking of Poland
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Freedom isn't Free 2/3
anonymous
January 9 2009, 23:03:07 UTC
I knew I was going to fuck up the italics bold thing. Ignore that OTL
Poland was stripping off his clothing, a wry smile on his face as his body was revealed. Lithuania couldn't lie, Poland had a wonderful body. It was smaller than his own, and slender but surprisingly well shaped. Full lips, slender neck, small shoulders, narrow hips, ample ass, and legs any woman would kill for. It seemed to spark a rare feeling of aggressiveness in the brunette, the desire to hold his oldest friend down and switch their current roles. But no, he would let the blond have his way for now. Poland reminded him of a cat as he climbed onto the bed, grinning wickedly.
He always fell over him like a larger predator, even before he'd undressed himself. He would take up the kisses again, as those hands of his swift, careless enough to snap a few buttons loose, stripping him bare while touching as much of his favorite as possible.Soft fingers undid each button with care-clothing was important to Poland after all, even if it wasn't anything particularly
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Re: Freedom isn't Free 2/3
anonymous
January 9 2009, 23:06:06 UTC
Every thrust that he made was like an unstoppable force. They would jolt his smaller body each time, specially when he began to move back against him. So incredibly full, so impossibly deep...! Each rock of his hips sending dual sensations of slight pain mixed with undeniable pleasure as he struck the brunette's spot without fail, even if by accident.
Currently, Lithuania grasped Poland's shoulders tighter, nails digging in slightly as he rose his hips into every thrust, trying desperately to obtain this lost feeling of completeness.
Heavy breath fell over his face and neck, hot and usually with the scent of vodka.
Not sweet as honey like now.
Hands gripped his hips like an inescapable vice, likely to leave bruises in the morning.
The hands that should be holding him were on the bed, fisted into the sheets beside him-as touching his hips might mean touching a scar from where a whip lash had wrapped around. Even so, Lithuania was growing close.
The brunette was helpless against the pureness of his physical awareness. Pain,
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Re: OTL that was 3/3
anonymous
January 10 2009, 13:31:45 UTC
Anon, this is... this is just amazing and soo scary somehow v.v Disturbing in so many ways and yet! I love it :o I don't really like Ivan/Toris - I can't imagine willing Toris and rape or forced sex isn't something I enjoy (that weird, huh?), but you just made me buy it. Oh, how I buy it! That-that contrast between Poland and Russia, just perfect. Oh my, love you for that ♥
Re: Freedom isn't Free 2/3
anonymous
January 10 2009, 19:55:43 UTC
You did a great job portraying Liet's addiction to Ivan's brand of sex and comparing it to Poland. I adore the descriptions and how in character they both are. Enjoyed it very much.
Forgive anon for being so vicious. I want a good laugh at Poland's expense... <3 >3>
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I know who you are and you know who I am! >3> I wasn't quite as mean as I thought of being, here. Poland is not so much a bad lover, as he is most definitely not Ivan... And also shouldn't ever top! /personalopinion!
Independence. It tasted every bit as good as the first time-but even better. Because this time there was no going back, and he was going to make sure of that. He was working on his relations with other nations now, even Poland who he'd fought with in his last brief stretch of freedom. And speaking of Poland ( ... )
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I knew I was going to fuck up the italics bold thing. Ignore that OTL
Poland was stripping off his clothing, a wry smile on his face as his body was revealed. Lithuania couldn't lie, Poland had a wonderful body. It was smaller than his own, and slender but surprisingly well shaped. Full lips, slender neck, small shoulders, narrow hips, ample ass, and legs any woman would kill for. It seemed to spark a rare feeling of aggressiveness in the brunette, the desire to hold his oldest friend down and switch their current roles. But no, he would let the blond have his way for now. Poland reminded him of a cat as he climbed onto the bed, grinning wickedly.
He always fell over him like a larger predator, even before he'd undressed himself. He would take up the kisses again, as those hands of his swift, careless enough to snap a few buttons loose, stripping him bare while touching as much of his favorite as possible.Soft fingers undid each button with care-clothing was important to Poland after all, even if it wasn't anything particularly ( ... )
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Currently, Lithuania grasped Poland's shoulders tighter, nails digging in slightly as he rose his hips into every thrust, trying desperately to obtain this lost feeling of completeness.
Heavy breath fell over his face and neck, hot and usually with the scent of vodka.
Not sweet as honey like now.
Hands gripped his hips like an inescapable vice, likely to leave bruises in the morning.
The hands that should be holding him were on the bed, fisted into the sheets beside him-as touching his hips might mean touching a scar from where a whip lash had wrapped around. Even so, Lithuania was growing close.
The brunette was helpless against the pureness of his physical awareness. Pain, ( ... )
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No worries about the mistakes~ It's well written so thats all that matters~ Really like the bit about the scars~
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I don't really like Ivan/Toris - I can't imagine willing Toris and rape or forced sex isn't something I enjoy (that weird, huh?), but you just made me buy it. Oh, how I buy it!
That-that contrast between Poland and Russia, just perfect. Oh my, love you for that ♥
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