Re: Freedom isn't Free 2/3
anonymous
January 9 2009, 23:06:06 UTC
Every thrust that he made was like an unstoppable force. They would jolt his smaller body each time, specially when he began to move back against him. So incredibly full, so impossibly deep...! Each rock of his hips sending dual sensations of slight pain mixed with undeniable pleasure as he struck the brunette's spot without fail, even if by accident.
Currently, Lithuania grasped Poland's shoulders tighter, nails digging in slightly as he rose his hips into every thrust, trying desperately to obtain this lost feeling of completeness.
Heavy breath fell over his face and neck, hot and usually with the scent of vodka.
Not sweet as honey like now.
Hands gripped his hips like an inescapable vice, likely to leave bruises in the morning.
The hands that should be holding him were on the bed, fisted into the sheets beside him-as touching his hips might mean touching a scar from where a whip lash had wrapped around. Even so, Lithuania was growing close.
The brunette was helpless against the pureness of his physical awareness. Pain, pleasure, and the building pressure in his belly. Vulnerable and powerless against the onslaught of emotions that ran through him. This man, the man who had hurt him so deeply that he sometimes felt he would never be whole again... This man who filled that void with himself, and willingly let his favorite into his own deep wounds...
The sound of the shout in his ear was all wrong when Poland came, but it still spurred his own reaction-without his own neglected member even being touched. And in a low whisper, Lithuania came as well.
Re: OTL that was 3/3
anonymous
January 10 2009, 13:31:45 UTC
Anon, this is... this is just amazing and soo scary somehow v.v Disturbing in so many ways and yet! I love it :o I don't really like Ivan/Toris - I can't imagine willing Toris and rape or forced sex isn't something I enjoy (that weird, huh?), but you just made me buy it. Oh, how I buy it! That-that contrast between Poland and Russia, just perfect. Oh my, love you for that ♥
Re: Freedom isn't Free 2/3
anonymous
January 10 2009, 19:55:43 UTC
You did a great job portraying Liet's addiction to Ivan's brand of sex and comparing it to Poland. I adore the descriptions and how in character they both are. Enjoyed it very much.
Currently, Lithuania grasped Poland's shoulders tighter, nails digging in slightly as he rose his hips into every thrust, trying desperately to obtain this lost feeling of completeness.
Heavy breath fell over his face and neck, hot and usually with the scent of vodka.
Not sweet as honey like now.
Hands gripped his hips like an inescapable vice, likely to leave bruises in the morning.
The hands that should be holding him were on the bed, fisted into the sheets beside him-as touching his hips might mean touching a scar from where a whip lash had wrapped around. Even so, Lithuania was growing close.
The brunette was helpless against the pureness of his physical awareness. Pain, pleasure, and the building pressure in his belly. Vulnerable and powerless against the onslaught of emotions that ran through him. This man, the man who had hurt him so deeply that he sometimes felt he would never be whole again... This man who filled that void with himself, and willingly let his favorite into his own deep wounds...
The sound of the shout in his ear was all wrong when Poland came, but it still spurred his own reaction-without his own neglected member even being touched. And in a low whisper, Lithuania came as well.
“Ivan...!”
Looks like he wasn't so free after all.
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No worries about the mistakes~ It's well written so thats all that matters~ Really like the bit about the scars~
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I don't really like Ivan/Toris - I can't imagine willing Toris and rape or forced sex isn't something I enjoy (that weird, huh?), but you just made me buy it. Oh, how I buy it!
That-that contrast between Poland and Russia, just perfect. Oh my, love you for that ♥
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