Hetalia kink meme part 21
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part 21
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Can be angsty, but I'd prefer fluff; just something awkward with these two having awkward feelings for each other as children :3
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Transylvania, 1211
Gilbert thinks he could drop dead right about now -- he's certainly tired enough, his sword and shield are too heavy, and the padding is sticking to his skin even though he was smart and wore a shirt underneath it today. He doesn't like carrying all of this at all. It's just too much for someone his size to handle. But he's sucking it up and dealing with it, because he's the Teutonic Knights and they're just awesome like that.
Although, it's kind of hard to feel awesome and badass when a man two feet taller than you is ruffling your hair and making your dead legs buckle under the pathetic weight. "Good show out there, Gilbert!" the komtur says, laughing boisterously. " 'F I didn't know better, I'd say you'd been doing this your whole life."
It's a lame joke. Really lame, because this is Gilbert's life and that's far from an exaggeration. But Gilbert smirks and laughs and says, "Longer than ( ... )
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Gilbert manages to precariously balance his sword, shield, helmet and everything else that he's dropped and stagger through the camp with it, heading to his (tiny) tent nearer the center. Only the komtur is aware of what he is, exactly, so it annoys all of the other knights that he tends to be first when they assess their priorities. Gilbert learned long ago not to antagonize them too much, especially because most of them are war-hardened and believe that a good smack will straighten a kid right out. It won't, though; Gilbert's too awesome to be beaten down like that ( ... )
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hungary!and if you don't like it then too bad.) "So what are we doing ( ... )
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hungary!and if you don't like it then too bad.) "So what are we doing ( ... )
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He rushes over to the other nation, trying to remember years of medical training and what exactly would be called for in this situation. He pretends not to notice that he's stammering when he says, "H-hey, are you okay?"
"I'm fine, dammit," Hungary retorts, but his eyes are glistening.
Gilbert doesn't have time to register that the other is rearing back and aiming before pain explodes in his shoulder, deepening a bruise he'd gotten earlier. He clutches at it and bites his lip to keep from yelling. "Ow," he grunts ( ... )
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Also this literally made me chuckle out loud
(Then again, if they've hit him and he's decided to stop with the insults, has it worked? Have they won? Must look into that.)
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This is beyond cute, Anon! And awesome, of course ;) Both Gilbert and Hungary are really well portrayied, and their awkwardness very believable and also fun to read.
Thank you for the nice reading <3
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ANYWAY even if it wasn't me THIS TUGS AT MY HEARTSTRINGS oh they are precious babies ♥ and will one day lovehate each other so hard d'aaaaaaaawwwwww
This was just adorable, thanks so much for writing (I think?):D
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I loved all the historical references you made and how you actually set the story in the announced time frame and not simply said it was that time but never actually did anything with it. That was cool!
I really don't have much concrit? Maybe hmmm, tone down on Prussia's feelings? But even then they were good? They didn't blend seamlessly into the rest of your narrative but now im just nitpicking
IT WAS GOOD! I LEARNED SOMETHING AND IT WAS AWESOME!
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