[Part 19] Japan/Greece - unintentional non-con (placeholder)
anonymous
January 27 2012, 10:34:42 UTC
Prompt: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/20236.html?thread=78144524#t78144524 "Nation A has a kink such as BDSM or rape-roleplay, and their partner Nation B seems perfectly willing to go along with it. They have a safeword, and nation A is under the impression that Nation B is fine with it. But Nation B actual ends up honestly frigtened or in pain (in the bad way), but doesn't want to tell Nation A because they really are in love and Nation B doesn't want their partner to think that they are judging or condemning them for this kink."
Filled with Giripan (Japan as Nation A, and Greece as Nation B). Which yes, seems... unusual, but hopefully it makes sense in the context of the fic.
Warnings: Non-con (of course), badly done BDSM, and a blanket angst warning from those two things.
Talking Through Walls (1/?)
anonymous
January 27 2012, 10:38:26 UTC
When it first came up, Japan ran and locked himself for the bathroom for hours.
Greece just waited there, patiently, one hand pressed to the door. Japan had sobbed on the other side, although he was obviously trying to hide it, “Please... please don't judge me, Greece-san,” and Greece didn't think he'd ever heard anything more heartbreaking.
He wanted to hold Japan, to tell him it was okay, to soothe away the tears with kisses. But Japan was on the other side of a wall and would never let him do so anyway.
Once Japan had come out, they'd been able to discuss the matter more rationally. Japan had confessed - about the ropes and whips, about the many wild things he wanted. Frankly, with some of Japan's reputation it hadn't come as that much of a surprise. What came as more of a surprise was the fact Japan wanted to be the one to inflict such things, not receive them, but Greece could accept that.
“Shh...” He'd said, stroking Japan's hair softly (careful not to overstep his bounds). “I... I don't mind...”It took some convincing. A
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anonymous
January 27 2012, 17:11:54 UTC
Oh ... this is awful in a spectacular way.
Japan's internal debate with himself over whether or not he's a 'good man' is sad. I can comprehend that arousal sometimes manifests in ways I don't quite understand from person to person, but I don't think Japan has anything to worry about if this is the sort of thing he likes roleplaying; the line between fantasy and reality is thicker than people think, but because they believe it to be so thin, it causes trouble.
I don't believe Japan would ever go so far as to rape Greece; that much is evident. But the reservations on both sides will accumulate into something awful. You're handling a sensitive subject matter remarkably well, so I've no doubt this fic will be something brilliant.
Oh! One last comment; though I'm not sure what it represents, I adore the title, too x)
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anonymous
January 27 2012, 22:42:29 UTC
I agree with everything the second anon above me said. This promises to be a well-constructed build-up to the inevitable angst and unintentional non-con and make it hurt even more because Greece so obviously just wants to make Japan happy and unashamed of his kinks (I really like the voice you gave him, by the way).
It's a testament to your writing skill that I'm planning to read the next parts for this fill as soon as they come up even though I know they'll break my heart. :(
Talking Through Walls (2/?)
anonymous
January 27 2012, 23:35:20 UTC
He is supposed to tug the chain between the cuffs if he ever needs to be released. He considers doing it, just for a second, long enough to confirm what exactly they're doing. Don't be stupid, he thinks. You'll figure it out. You're good at this sort of thing.He's not used to the ropes and chains, but he's easy-going, particularly about sex, he'll be fine
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anonymous
January 29 2012, 05:00:23 UTC
Oh, this is not going to end well. D: In spite of this, I really do want to see what happens after this; I hope that there'll be a clear-up of this eventually.
Talking Through Walls (3/?)
anonymous
January 29 2012, 10:12:44 UTC
He shudders, violently, feeling sick. Greece. Japan almost never uses only his name, using san or kun or chan or other short syllables Greece doesn't really understand. Only when he was very sleepy did he call Greece by his name alone, and then Greece had to look up what it meant anyway. It was meant to be familiarity, endearment - and he smiled, at what that must mean for Japan. Now, he feels like he's been stabbed. It just feels like a violation, an insult - and somehow doubts intimacy and familiarity are what Japan means right now
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anonymous
January 29 2012, 22:07:46 UTC
Oh, Greece. I perfectly understand why he's thinking and acting the way he is and that just makes this entire scenario even more heartbreaking; either he admits that he's not fine with this and gets Japan even more ashamed of himself, or he keeps quiet and continues to suffer through all this.
I have to say that you're doing a wonderful job with this prompt so far, uncomfortable as it might be.
Talking Through Walls (4/?)
anonymous
February 8 2012, 11:37:55 UTC
Japan's nails dig in, ow, that hurts. That wasn't unexpected but - is he being punished? Probably. That must be part of it, and he tries to remain still. He has absolutely no idea what he's doing.
“Oh Greece,” Japan whispers, and it slightly soothes his nerves as they scream. “Oh...”
He thinks Japan is moving. He can't see, admittedly, but there's the rustling off cloth and the shifting of weight on the bed, so that's a giveaway. Suddenly, Japan leans down and licks the length. Greece tenses and tugs against the ropes and chains. “Shh, please, don't move.”
Japan has almost never gone down on him. He tried once, but he was too awkward about it not being 'normal' and Greece had some problems staying still and not gagging him. He felt really guilty about that. Of course, it's easier for Japan when he's bound and still and hence, can't do anything like move. He can't do anything. He bites into his gag as Japan sucks on the head slightly, like it was a lollipop. “This is much easier, when you're so... powerless
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anonymous
February 8 2012, 17:23:13 UTC
Oh god, this is getting even more painful to read and yet I really do want to keep on reading because your writing and characterization are so damn good.
Take your time to update, anon; this fill is well worth waiting for.
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anonymous
February 8 2012, 18:52:54 UTC
O-oh, this is painful to read. I feel absolutely terrible for Greece, you don't know how nervous this fic's making me! I'm fully invested, anon; please continue because otherwise my heart may break even more than it already is! D:
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“Oh Greece,” Japan whispers, and it slightly soothes his nerves as they scream. “Oh...”
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I feel delightfully sick, anon, this is a brilliant fic.
"Nation A has a kink such as BDSM or rape-roleplay, and their partner Nation B seems perfectly willing to go along with it. They have a safeword, and nation A is under the impression that Nation B is fine with it. But Nation B actual ends up honestly frigtened or in pain (in the bad way), but doesn't want to tell Nation A because they really are in love and Nation B doesn't want their partner to think that they are judging or condemning them for this kink."
Filled with Giripan (Japan as Nation A, and Greece as Nation B). Which yes, seems... unusual, but hopefully it makes sense in the context of the fic.
Warnings: Non-con (of course), badly done BDSM, and a blanket angst warning from those two things.
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Greece just waited there, patiently, one hand pressed to the door. Japan had sobbed on the other side, although he was obviously trying to hide it, “Please... please don't judge me, Greece-san,” and Greece didn't think he'd ever heard anything more heartbreaking.
He wanted to hold Japan, to tell him it was okay, to soothe away the tears with kisses. But Japan was on the other side of a wall and would never let him do so anyway.
Once Japan had come out, they'd been able to discuss the matter more rationally. Japan had confessed - about the ropes and whips, about the many wild things he wanted. Frankly, with some of Japan's reputation it hadn't come as that much of a surprise. What came as more of a surprise was the fact Japan wanted to be the one to inflict such things, not receive them, but Greece could accept that.
“Shh...” He'd said, stroking Japan's hair softly (careful not to overstep his bounds). “I... I don't mind...”It took some convincing. A ( ... )
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Japan's internal debate with himself over whether or not he's a 'good man' is sad. I can comprehend that arousal sometimes manifests in ways I don't quite understand from person to person, but I don't think Japan has anything to worry about if this is the sort of thing he likes roleplaying; the line between fantasy and reality is thicker than people think, but because they believe it to be so thin, it causes trouble.
I don't believe Japan would ever go so far as to rape Greece; that much is evident. But the reservations on both sides will accumulate into something awful. You're handling a sensitive subject matter remarkably well, so I've no doubt this fic will be something brilliant.
Oh! One last comment; though I'm not sure what it represents, I adore the title, too x)
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It's a testament to your writing skill that I'm planning to read the next parts for this fill as soon as they come up even though I know they'll break my heart. :(
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I have to say that you're doing a wonderful job with this prompt so far, uncomfortable as it might be.
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“Oh Greece,” Japan whispers, and it slightly soothes his nerves as they scream. “Oh...”
He thinks Japan is moving. He can't see, admittedly, but there's the rustling off cloth and the shifting of weight on the bed, so that's a giveaway. Suddenly, Japan leans down and licks the length. Greece tenses and tugs against the ropes and chains. “Shh, please, don't move.”
Japan has almost never gone down on him. He tried once, but he was too awkward about it not being 'normal' and Greece had some problems staying still and not gagging him. He felt really guilty about that. Of course, it's easier for Japan when he's bound and still and hence, can't do anything like move. He can't do anything. He bites into his gag as Japan sucks on the head slightly, like it was a lollipop. “This is much easier, when you're so... powerless ( ... )
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Take your time to update, anon; this fill is well worth waiting for.
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And this line:
“Oh Greece,” Japan whispers, and it slightly soothes his nerves as they scream. “Oh...”
asdfghjkl;
why
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I feel delightfully sick, anon, this is a brilliant fic.
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