Last chapter! Thank you - ALL OF YOU - for all the wonderful, super-helpful feedback and love. This fic got me through a really rough patch, and thanks to all of you, I was able to grow more as a writer and learn so much, and know what I can still improve. :3 At the behest of an anon, I did take my time with this one deliberately. I tend to get antsy and rush things, and I absolutely did not want that to happen with this one. I’m fairly pleased with the results, and I hope you are, too.there is a line in here that reeks of tumblr see if you can spot it.
Guys I am not suited to write for the Mafia. This is quite clear to me now.
I’m not gone from the KinkMeme, though. Like you could be rid of me so easily. Ha. See you around lovelies!
Or, as Lovino might say: Ciao, motherfuckers!
No seriously, I love you guys. Thanks again! By the time Antonio
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Re: [Part 16] Spain/Romano - Andalusian Horses: Academia Equus 10c/10
anonymous
June 1 2011, 08:26:35 UTC
Rome was softening as he aged, that much was true, but he was just as overwhelming a force as always. It made him a good leader, and he excelled at leading the Mafiosi loyal to him. Lovino had some of the newspaper clippings from his father’s early days - back when he and Feliciano had collected them - touting his outrageous achievements in ignoring the law and getting clean away with it. There were rarely photos of him, just reports of the damage. Disloyal Mafiosi were found dead in alleys with Rs carved into their foreheads: warnings to others
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Re: [Part 16] Spain/Romano - Andalusian Horses: Academia Equus 10e/10
anonymous
June 1 2011, 08:32:24 UTC
Lovino’s heart pounded in his throat, his eyes all over Antonio’s body, painted in the vibrant colors of the sunset. He could only stare as the man unbuckled his belt, loosened the button and lowered the zipper of his jeans with a few deft strokes of his fingers, the sounds almost inaudible. He took his sweet time lowering the waist of the jeans over his buttocks. He took even more time sliding his boxers free, one cheek at a time. Then he faced the window completely naked, and stretched leisurely, arms over his head and back muscles shifting subtly
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Re: [Part 16] Spain/Romano - Andalusian Horses: Academia Equus 10h/10
anonymous
June 1 2011, 08:39:36 UTC
Not awake enough to process the rest, Lovino found the soap and shampoo in the carryon, mixed with the scent of Antonio’s clothing. Guiltily, he snared one of the shirts to wander around in afterward (to enjoy the smell of him while he was gone, though he’d rather die than admit it) and found his pants and went to bathe
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Re: [Part 16] Spain/Romano - Andalusian Horses: Academia Equus 10i/10
anonymous
June 1 2011, 08:42:25 UTC
Antonio released him and reached for a washrag and bent to retrieve the little bar of soap. Lathering the cloth, he spread it across his long fingers and draped it over the back of Lovino’s neck, pressing his lips to the boy’s forehead as he massaged his neck and washed it at the same time. He moved gradually lower, washing his back and waist and buttocks, taking special care with the sore entry between, and came around to the front. He gave a gentle, cursory scrubbing not intended to arouse, and moved slowly higher, scrubbing up his chest, across his pecs. He left suds on Lovino’s collarbone, then washed his arms and under arms. And his sides, moving back down toward his hips. Then he knelt on the tile and finished by washing each leg in turn. “Back up two steps, ciccino
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"Take your time!"-anon here
anonymous
June 1 2011, 19:46:06 UTC
And I'm so happy you did. Take your time, I mean. :D This chapter was much better than the bit confusing last one. I like the rebellion from Antonio and Lovino (although I have a thing for mafia!Lovino...) and the passage about Rome's character. It's nice to get to know your Rome better at the end. Although you said you're not made for mafia, I liked the hints you gave here, like the memories of gunshots or the Rs. It created a nice angsty atmosphere. Antonio's threat was kinda out of my head-canon. I hadn't expected him to 'solve' that problem, since for me (at least in your fic) he's too soft for being a threat. But that didn't disturb the flow of the story, just my expectation which isn't a bad thing. :D Antonio has to be cool, too. Anyways. Lovino was much more Lovino here, we talked about that last chapter and you got his character way better here. :) He showed his fear without being too explicit about it, that's cranky Roma. <3 And, oh, Aracelia! ♥ And, oh, flirtations and then deep affection! I liked their interactions very
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Thank you again for that. I think people will get angry with me if I take too long, or frustrated, or think i've abandoned it. But I really do my best when I'm slower to post. :/
I have a thing for Mafia!Lovi too, so that turn was a bit unexpected for me too. I'm glad the thing about Rome didn't seem too sudden or overmuch - I trusted my instincts completely on that one, I thought it was too late in the game for anything like that. But it worked!
I really struggled with the mafia stuff all the same. I'm the kind of person who has trouble jaywalking, much less causing any real trouble. XD I'm really glad the hints were enough. I pulled a little on Kill Bill memories for that. >.> Thank you thank you, I'm very glad it created the effect I needed it to. :3
I didn't mean for that to come across as a threat. I was going for peacemaker, but I have yet to fully polish the effect. All the same, I'm glad it didn't disrupt things too much. :) I couldn't resist having him have a cool moment haha.GOOD! Oh I'm so glad you think so! I thought
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Re: A!Anon here!
anonymous
June 3 2011, 18:11:35 UTC
Nah, everybody's busy with real life, so reader's gotta deal with it. :D
Hey, I've around 5 Spamano storylines by now, and 5 other ideas. ;D
I've read a few good smut stories, like "Give and Take" or "A way to say I love you" and "Of bosses and Italian charmes". I don't know if you know those, but the smut scenes there are pretty... let's say honest. :D And well done.
I'm fond of dialogues, too. 8D Definitely understand your point here.
Yeah, I will watch out for it. (Ja? Are you possibly German like me? O_O If yes, I don't know if I'll stop laughing.)
Re: A!Anon again
anonymous
June 6 2011, 14:08:29 UTC
No, sorry, I couldn't find it. :| Seems like you put it in private or anything, I can't find it with the livejournal search. I guess, you haven't put up a link to the hetalia community either? Well, my nick is pfirsichkind, so just write me a pm, lol? 8D Then I could link you to those awesome stories I told you about, too. <3
Last chapter! Thank you - ALL OF YOU - for all the wonderful, super-helpful feedback and love. This fic got me through a really rough patch, and thanks to all of you, I was able to grow more as a writer and learn so much, and know what I can still improve. :3 At the behest of an anon, I did take my time with this one deliberately. I tend to get antsy and rush things, and I absolutely did not want that to happen with this one. I’m fairly pleased with the results, and I hope you are, too.there is a line in here that reeks of tumblr see if you can spot it.
Guys I am not suited to write for the Mafia. This is quite clear to me now.
I’m not gone from the KinkMeme, though. Like you could be rid of me so easily. Ha. See you around lovelies!
Or, as Lovino might say: Ciao, motherfuckers!
No seriously, I love you guys. Thanks again!
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And Rome. Stop being such a jerk to the lovebirds! >:(
Thanks for the awesome fill, author!anon! See you in that other fill of yours that I'm stalking! <333333
There can never be enough hearts to express my love for you, so have <33333 * infinity * internets.
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I'm glad it was delicious. Part of me was worried, since I tried some new things. >D Same with the characters! Thank you.
I'm sure between Ludwig and Antonio, something shall be worked out and Rome will chill out. :B
Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you liked it! See you there!!
BAWWWWWW thank you so much! All of you lovely anons are what make this worthwhile. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. :3
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Antonio's threat was kinda out of my head-canon. I hadn't expected him to 'solve' that problem, since for me (at least in your fic) he's too soft for being a threat. But that didn't disturb the flow of the story, just my expectation which isn't a bad thing. :D Antonio has to be cool, too.
Anyways. Lovino was much more Lovino here, we talked about that last chapter and you got his character way better here. :) He showed his fear without being too explicit about it, that's cranky Roma. <3
And, oh, Aracelia! ♥ And, oh, flirtations and then deep affection! I liked their interactions very ( ... )
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I have a thing for Mafia!Lovi too, so that turn was a bit unexpected for me too. I'm glad the thing about Rome didn't seem too sudden or overmuch - I trusted my instincts completely on that one, I thought it was too late in the game for anything like that. But it worked!
I really struggled with the mafia stuff all the same. I'm the kind of person who has trouble jaywalking, much less causing any real trouble. XD I'm really glad the hints were enough. I pulled a little on Kill Bill memories for that. >.> Thank you thank you, I'm very glad it created the effect I needed it to. :3
I didn't mean for that to come across as a threat. I was going for peacemaker, but I have yet to fully polish the effect. All the same, I'm glad it didn't disrupt things too much. :) I couldn't resist having him have a cool moment haha.GOOD! Oh I'm so glad you think so! I thought ( ... )
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Hey, I've around 5 Spamano storylines by now, and 5 other ideas. ;D
I've read a few good smut stories, like "Give and Take" or "A way to say I love you" and "Of bosses and Italian charmes". I don't know if you know those, but the smut scenes there are pretty... let's say honest. :D And well done.
I'm fond of dialogues, too. 8D Definitely understand your point here.
Yeah, I will watch out for it. (Ja? Are you possibly German like me? O_O If yes, I don't know if I'll stop laughing.)
You're SO welcome, dear. <3
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German blood's good, too. :D :D
I'm honoured now. ; A ; ♥
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