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[Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 02:19:45 UTC
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=2957258#t2957258

Alfred took another glance around the lobby of the convention center and sighed. Man, Arthur wasn’t anywhere, was he? It was a world conference, hidden at the back of the center, so that meant a lot of the nations were wandering around, but it was usually pretty easy to find England. Shoving his hands in his pockets, Alfred strolled out of the lobby. Maybe England was already back from his break and was hiding in the conference room?

He thought nothing of heading there or of opening the door. It took a few seconds for the sight to register, but once it did, Alfred blurted out, “WHAT THE HELL?” France was sitting in one of the chairs, mouth kiss-swollen, hands shoved in unmentionable places. This, this was not the issue. The issue was the person currently straddling France, hands curled in France’s blonde hair. It…it was CanadaMatt flushed pink and moved from ( ... )

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 02:46:50 UTC
...Is anyone else getting tired of 2+2=HiImDumb!America? Or just plain lazy charactization, in general? Sigh.

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 02:50:58 UTC
It's not supposed to be an indication "HiImDumb!America," but an indication of how baffling he finds the situation. And, it might be helpful if you could point out the other "lazy characterization[s]."

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 04:07:07 UTC
Agreeing with other anon.
He's definitely not stupid in this situation, merely surprised. The "two plus two equals.... banana?" instances were examples to demonstrate how he felt all logic had gone out the window. There is no other mention of America being anything other than of average intelligence, albeit a little unobservant, but that's part of his character.

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 04:35:08 UTC
...Is anyone else getting tired of rude people? Or just people who can't be assed to make constructive criticism? Sigh.

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 07:31:44 UTC
o/ I am. Plus the anon just completely missed the point like the others already pointed out.

Besides, it was funny.

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 04:11:11 UTC
This was a cute little drabble, anon! I liked all the little details and looks Canada and France shared, as well as America's complete bewilderment (and everyone taking bets, ha!).
Lovely work~!

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 06:09:40 UTC
:3 It made me laugh. Nice work

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 08:09:02 UTC
Really sweet.

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Re: [Part 2] - Complex Equations [Franada - America finds out] anonymous April 28 2011, 15:09:05 UTC
very cute fill author!anon!
As an older sibling, I can vouch for America's reaction - it's mind-breaking baffling and disturbing to find out you «innocent» younger sibling is not only dating but getting laid.

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