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Part 11: Anything goes historical, WW1 with Hungary & Serbia anonymous January 13 2011, 09:38:43 UTC

Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13943.html?thread=34684023#t34684023

Part 1-4: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17465.html?thread=54942265#t54942265

Let war be waged 5a anonymous January 13 2011, 10:13:34 UTC

“It must be because we are lazy and incompetent,” Czech said, completely deadpan. “You keep telling me that, I can't imagine why you would leave me in charge of something important ( ... )

Let war be waged 5b anonymous January 13 2011, 10:22:57 UTC

Hungary had more reasons to be angry. At this point Prussia had taken more control than she imagined, listening little to her and Austria.

She expected Russia to be dangerous and Serbia his annoying pawn. It was Italy who shocked her, Italy who she practically raised and now turned against them despite their treaties...

She got only one message from him.

“Hungary, please don't be mad at me but my boss says you're not very friendly to us but I try my best whatever happens”. Something like that, she had thrown it away shortly after reading ( ... )

Let war be waged 5c anonymous January 13 2011, 10:38:07 UTC

Hungary tried to not worry about her pushy provinces as she faced Russia. He was angry but his armies were hopelessly unprepared. And yet she wasn't much better off ( ... )

Re: Let war be waged 5c anonymous January 13 2011, 19:30:35 UTC

Passive-aggressive, gender confused Czech-Slovakia = win. I love them.

It was Italy who shocked her, Italy who she practically raised and now turned against them despite their treaties...

And she hasn't even seen the end of it yet.

Croatia on the other hand was perfectly proper, just like Austria and smiled confidently as if he was caught with other men's wives in compromising positions daily.

He probably does. I like him a lot.

“Talking politics,” Croatia said. “It can be very intense.”

I love the way you make absolutely innocent stuff sound dirty.

I also love your Hungary - she's badass and full of love and naive, in a way. I can't believe you're making me side with her in WWI, but she's very relatable here. And that final part with Austria... That's how I always imagined the Austria-Hungary relatioship to be honest, especially this final part.

Re: Let war be waged 5c anonymous January 14 2011, 09:33:31 UTC

Thanks :)

gender confused Czech-Slovakia
They're not confused by their gender, it's everyone else who is ;) I kind of find it funny to think about all the gender confusion around Austria...

I like to think Hungary/Austria get happier, but right now they're looking at a divorce in a few years :(

Re: Let war be waged 5c anonymous January 15 2011, 13:59:33 UTC

I am really glad every time I see this series updated.

Hungary's pov is poignant - the way she tries to keep things together, without realizing (or admitting) everyone in the empire is heading in a different direction
Also, Austria's answer to her question is just perfect. It's so him.

I love scheming Croatia and androgynous Czech and Slovakia.

“Do you think I'm like Russia?”
The twins exchanged a glance, puzzled over the question.
“No,” Czech said.
“Absolutely not,” Slovakia agreed. “Well, perhaps right now. I heard he comes up with random dangerous questions too.”

Your dialogues are so much fun.

Re: Let war be waged 5c anonymous January 16 2011, 20:57:28 UTC

I am really glad every time I see this series updated.

Thanks :) I'm glad someone still remembers it, I haven't updated in a while but I'll work on it from now on...

Let war be waged 6a anonymous January 28 2011, 12:05:50 UTC

General Winter's less famous but equally troubling cousin General Mud was on their side. It sounded more intimidating with the deadly cold of Winter but the chaos Mud could cause shouldn't be underestimated ( ... )

Let war be waged 6b anonymous January 28 2011, 12:12:47 UTC

Albania took her personal guard with her, a favor Serbia was almost grateful for. Kosovo would be reclaimed too, along with Belgrade. All of it would be his again Serbia promised himself ( ... )

Let war be waged 6c anonymous January 28 2011, 12:22:22 UTC

Safe cheerful topics were bound to run out sooner rather than later, Serbia found himself starting to freak out again when they talked about what to do next. Regroup at Greece's islands, then join in with France ( ... )

Let war be waged 6d anonymous January 28 2011, 12:27:44 UTC

It wasn't the best thing ever to arrive to some Greek island completely in pieces, feeling more dead than alive. But fuck it, they were stronger than Austria and Hungary ever expected just to put up the resistance they did, for getting here at all, for planning to get back in game as soon as they could. After all of this they couldn't fail ( ... )

Re: Let war be waged 6d anonymous January 30 2011, 16:05:33 UTC

Didn't have time to comment properly (again), but I still love this.

Let war be waged 7a anonymous April 11 2012, 15:15:16 UTC

It was an awkward dinner. Czech and Slovakia oozed disdain with their every movement and it was a surprise they even bothered to show up. Even usually calm Slovenia was pissed. Hungary couldn't blame him, the poor guy had been out fighting Italy at Isonzo more than once already and it didn't look like it was about to end yet. After Slovenia ended up defending Serbia in an argument with Austria he suddenly found himself sent out against Italy instead. Hungary almost felt bad for him ( ... )

Let war be waged 7b anonymous April 11 2012, 15:22:29 UTC

Fighting usually made her feel better. But not when her enemy was her former ally and someone she used to care for ( ... )

Let war be waged 7c anonymous April 11 2012, 15:26:49 UTC

Looking over their allies Austria couldn't hide his discomfort. Hungary hoped she did better. Germany was happy to see them, Prussia not so much. He still looked as arrogant as ever, but not as spotless and not nearly as healthy as he had when all this started. Germany was pale as well, worrying himself sleepless over all the things Prussia assumed would solve themselves eventually ( ... )

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