Alaska stuck his head under the faucet, washing away the shampoo from his hair. "All done?" asked his dad as he strolled into the bathroom holding a stack of towels fresh and hot from the dryer
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Your characterization and descriptions of all of the characters are spot on! Especially Hawaii and Alaska, since they're OCs. I can't wait to see how Alaska flies away, haha. Love this story!
I really hope that America is wrong about Russia. I want to see a tired, sad but still loving (yet confused?) Russia being a good papa to little Alaska. I can't wait for the trip.
I'm not sure who had to worst childhood...the original 13/England's kids or this little guy...after all America hated England for a while, fought with him in an actual war, and only became friends during /war/ but Alaska has never seen his dad so...these kids are so messed up...
Your Alaska is such a well-written child. You tug at my heartstrings, author anon, especially with that last detail about Hawaii not drawing him in. Poor Alaska, he feels so left out! More and more I think America shouldn't scold him over what's gonna happen, because it's everything around him that pushes him to it; It's less a capricious "I wanna meet my other dad!" and more a "I want a family of my own". Bawwwww ;_;
America is such a cool dad, but picturing him answering those kind of questions made me lol. Even though his answer, and Alaska's heart clenching, made me sad again. Man, what a hard awakening! I wonder what America's feelings for his kids' dads are? He seems pretty sure he doesn't love Japan, and comfortable with the knowledge, but Russia is clearly a subject that makes him uncomfortable. I really wonder at the circumstances of Alaska's conception, now, but also Hawaii's; both were not so far ago, after all.
America yawned and stretched, and after a few moments two things occured to him: first, that it was much too bright outside for seven in the morning, and secondly, that he had not been awakened by the wail of his alarm clock. He turned his head and blinked blearily in the direction of his clock, only to find that it was off. America picked it up, and found the plug dangling uselessly behind it. Groaning, he groped for his glasses, and having put them on, picked up his wristwatch from the bedside table and glared at it as though all this were its fault
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I loled at the end. OMG, I know, poor America, but his reaction was pricelessXDXDXD Poor Alaska, he's in big trouble now! But he's SO DAMNED CUTE ♥ I wonder where he'll land?
*dies laughing* Oh dear lord... Poor America! The last few parts had me holding my stomach from laughter (and probably annoying my neighbors with that and all my 'aww's).
I know it was an aside, but I also love the little crack about Uncle Canada and his being a heavy sleeper. Now we know why he's always late to the meetings!
Loved the updates and looking forward to future ones!
By the by... um, you may be waiting until you finish, but if you do de-anon in the future, would you perchance be interested in sharing this on the America mpreg community (raising_states)?
But it's really quiet (though people on it are very nice). I think because not many people like mpreg and those that do don't know much about it. ^^; That's why I wanted to encourage author anon to consider posting her wonderful fill there.
When Alaska awoke and peered out of the porthole to see land, the sun was already hanging low over the horizon. He had chased the night across the ocean
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"But you do need love to have a baby? Right?"
Geez, Alaska really knows how to ask the tough questions, doesn't he?
There was no Alaska in the picture.
This line really made me want to hug him! I feel so bad for him, America and Russia. :(
I love this story so far writer anon! I can't wait for the next part! :)
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I'm not sure who had to worst childhood...the original 13/England's kids or this little guy...after all America hated England for a while, fought with him in an actual war, and only became friends during /war/ but Alaska has never seen his dad so...these kids are so messed up...
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America is such a cool dad, but picturing him answering those kind of questions made me lol. Even though his answer, and Alaska's heart clenching, made me sad again. Man, what a hard awakening! I wonder what America's feelings for his kids' dads are? He seems pretty sure he doesn't love Japan, and comfortable with the knowledge, but Russia is clearly a subject that makes him uncomfortable. I really wonder at the circumstances of Alaska's conception, now, but also Hawaii's; both were not so far ago, after all.
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Poor Alaska, he's in big trouble now! But he's SO DAMNED CUTE ♥
I wonder where he'll land?
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I know it was an aside, but I also love the little crack about Uncle Canada and his being a heavy sleeper. Now we know why he's always late to the meetings!
Loved the updates and looking forward to future ones!
By the by... um, you may be waiting until you finish, but if you do de-anon in the future, would you perchance be interested in sharing this on the America mpreg community (raising_states)?
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Dude, there's an America mpreg community?!
Why did I not know this ?!
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But it's really quiet (though people on it are very nice). I think because not many people like mpreg and those that do don't know much about it. ^^; That's why I wanted to encourage author anon to consider posting her wonderful fill there.
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