Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6)
anonymous
October 17 2010, 07:33:08 UTC
Tomasz <3
And Poland, omg! Usually I find the valleyspeak a bit annoying, but you manage to not overdo it and keep it in line with other things I imagine about his character (like the fact that he likes to put his nose in politics!) and I just adore him.
Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6)
anonymous
October 17 2010, 19:11:26 UTC
You're so evil! This cliffhanger will kill me till next update!
But I really loved this chapter <3 I love how Poland acts and he's so cute~ Btw, I just LOVED all the details, like the mug from Hungary, the curtains and his daughter's painting. It was adorable and make the fic more realistic at least for me.
Can't wait for next update, I hope it's soon! Thanks again for this, anon <3
Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6)
anonymous
October 25 2010, 04:11:53 UTC
Kyaaa~ such a good story! author!anon, you rock! ^^ Keep it up. I can't wait until the next chapter. But I hope it's not over too soon- will Tomasz be found out by any of the other Nations? Like Russia? (dun dun duuuun...) That would be epic, too...
Either way, please update soon! I love this story so much!
Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (1/6)
anonymous
October 29 2010, 18:58:52 UTC
Tomasz set in Łukasiewicz's office and tried to get his brain to make out what, exactly, happened in the bracket between the loud crash of the coffee cup on the floor and what was happening now, to no avail. His head was spinning faster than a tumble drier and making similar monotonous humming noises in his head. Thump. Thump. Dhurrrr.
Even after he caught his breath again, his head felt warm, fluffy and blank, while still being alert. What was going on. He couldn’t even phrase it as a question; all he could do was to look at his own shoes and wonder how come he hadn’t noticed how dirty they were. And that coffee-colored carpet in Łukasiewicz's office was very nice. It looked very expensive, and for a brief moment he almost bent down to feel it, until what little part of his self-awareness that was left grabbed him by the collar and pulled him back. But he did slip his right foot out of his shoe and felt the carpet through his sock. Nice. Not as rough and bristly as it looked. The tumble drier in his head gave a satisfied grumble.
Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (2/6)
anonymous
October 29 2010, 19:05:45 UTC
Turning around, he found himself looking at a portrait of a young girl. It was very old, old enough to fit better in a museum than a place like this. It wasn't very large, and he couldn't recall who was the artist whose signature was on it- but he felt like he has certainly seen it somewhere before. It was a nagging feeling he could not get rid of
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Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (5/6)
anonymous
October 29 2010, 19:13:18 UTC
Tomasz walked to the chair on the other side of the working desk, looking as Łukasiewicz made his way to his sit slowly. He had so many things to ask him… but for some reason, he felt like he couldn't. His heart beat too hard and a lump formed in his airways. Where to being from? His father, which it seemed that Łukasiewiczz and Loriunaits knew? The reason He had the same eyes as the ones he recalls as his mother's? Should he strike up some small talk before getting to the point or just ask? And Łukasiewicz didn’t look so good… but if he would come another day, the chance might slip away
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Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (6/6)
anonymous
October 29 2010, 19:16:02 UTC
"I'm… I'm their kid!" He felt tears feeling his eyes. He was this close to seeing, to knowing- and this happens?! "Don't I have the right to know who they are, even if I can’t meet them at all
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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (6/6)
anonymous
October 30 2010, 04:48:17 UTC
anon, I know I've commented this before but I'm going to say it again - I LOVE THIS FIC.
I always get so excited when I see that you updated. I love the way you write Feliks and Toris. Also, I am not usually a person who likes OCs, but Tomasz is SO sweet, well-rounded, and perfectly believable, I can't help but absolutely love him and care for him just as much as I care for Poland and Lithuania.
Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (6/6)
anonymous
October 30 2010, 10:56:34 UTC
Also, I am not usually a person who likes OCs, but Tomasz is SO sweet, well-rounded, and perfectly believable, I can't help but absolutely love him and care for him just as much as I care for Poland and Lithuania.
I second this sentiment entirely. This whole chapter was precious, I think, with the carpet and the curtains and Poland and his fit, and the birthday. I'm very much looking forward to see how it will go form here.
Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 9 (6/6)
anonymous
October 30 2010, 10:35:02 UTC
I...I don't know what to say... This fic is jus to WONDERFUL, and like Prussia, AWESOME. You have also encouraged me to read more PolLiet fics :D. Wonderful job anon wonderful job.
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And Poland, omg! Usually I find the valleyspeak a bit annoying, but you manage to not overdo it and keep it in line with other things I imagine about his character (like the fact that he likes to put his nose in politics!) and I just adore him.
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This cliffhanger will kill me till next update!
But I really loved this chapter <3
I love how Poland acts and he's so cute~ Btw, I just LOVED all the details, like the mug from Hungary, the curtains and his daughter's painting. It was adorable and make the fic more realistic at least for me.
Can't wait for next update, I hope it's soon!
Thanks again for this, anon <3
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Either way, please update soon! I love this story so much!
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Even after he caught his breath again, his head felt warm, fluffy and blank, while still being alert. What was going on. He couldn’t even phrase it as a question; all he could do was to look at his own shoes and wonder how come he hadn’t noticed how dirty they were. And that coffee-colored carpet in Łukasiewicz's office was very nice. It looked very expensive, and for a brief moment he almost bent down to feel it, until what little part of his self-awareness that was left grabbed him by the collar and pulled him back. But he did slip his right foot out of his shoe and felt the carpet through his sock. Nice. Not as rough and bristly as it looked. The tumble drier in his head gave a satisfied grumble.
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I LOVE THIS FIC.
I always get so excited when I see that you updated. I love the way you write Feliks and Toris. Also, I am not usually a person who likes OCs, but Tomasz is SO sweet, well-rounded, and perfectly believable, I can't help but absolutely love him and care for him just as much as I care for Poland and Lithuania.
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I second this sentiment entirely. This whole chapter was precious, I think, with the carpet and the curtains and Poland and his fit, and the birthday. I'm very much looking forward to see how it will go form here.
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