Re: Little Suggestions [4/???]
anonymous
September 7 2010, 01:10:20 UTC
Just lost the last three pages and all my edits. "OTL Save frequently, kids!America kicked him away, hissing “That’s enough.” England whimpered. “What a whore. Getting so excited over such a small thing.” He rubbed his eye and tried to smooth his hair. God, he probably looked like a wreck. But it was hardly his fault-- it was so damn hot in that room. The Englishman glanced up at his face, which was flushed, but not as much as his own. America placed his hat on a nearby shelf and smoothed his hair. Their eyes met, and America glared down at him. He barked something, but the man on the floor wasn’t listening. A pause. “I said, on your knees,” repeated the taller man, his voice fiercer this time, metal clinking against metal as he undid his belt
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SEQUEL please
anonymous
September 8 2010, 21:35:05 UTC
*drowns in drool*
Best role I've ever read in my whole life, believable and hot + delicious character interaction, dialogue and fluffiness at the end + good and loving and healthy USUK + boot fetish + "forceful" blowjob + fingering roughly and dirtytalking + begging = VERY HAPPY READER :)
I totally wanted Germany to know at least that something had happened.
I NEED THAT SEQUEL WITH RUSSIA!ENGLAND LIKE YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE. especially if Russia also figures something out and/or you explore why he excites America, as you did here with England about Germany's militariness and domination
Re: SEQUEL please
anonymous
September 8 2010, 21:41:38 UTC
I feel greedy for demanding more when she's just posted, but seriously? Yes, more please. <3
I'm ... pretty sure that Germany knows what that uniform's for, since he knows that 1) neither of them would wear it casually and 2) that uniform is heavily fetishized by so many people. I still kind of want to see his horrified reaction, though. :'D
Re: SEQUEL please
anonymous
September 9 2010, 16:57:37 UTC
... You are so fabulous. ♥
Thaaaaat's what I figured. I wonder how you say, "Oh god why? Brain bleach, please?" in German? XD
... Actually, Italy has probably given Germany plenty of reason to keep a supply of brain bleach on hand, come to think of it! Just in a less perverted way ... probably. *eyes Italy suspiciously*
Re: Little Suggestions [Bonus]
anonymous
September 8 2010, 21:38:18 UTC
Oh god, that was scorchingly hot, anon, but I think what makes me want to read this fic over and over is all of the normal little interactions, including bursting out laughing during aftercare. You seriously got the mix of kink, relationship, and characterization amazingly right in this story, and it makes me wish I knew who you were so I could read everything you've read, seriously. :D So much love, anon. ♥
And that ending was so amazingly funny and awkward. Christ, you guys, keep your kinky shit in a separate closet or something. XDDD
Re: Little Suggestions [Bonus]
anonymous
September 9 2010, 17:49:05 UTC
I suck at explanations, so I copied from LJ's FAQ:
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Best role I've ever read in my whole life, believable and hot + delicious character interaction, dialogue and fluffiness at the end + good and loving and healthy USUK + boot fetish + "forceful" blowjob + fingering roughly and dirtytalking + begging = VERY HAPPY READER :)
I totally wanted Germany to know at least that something had happened.
I NEED THAT SEQUEL WITH RUSSIA!ENGLAND LIKE YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE. especially if Russia also figures something out and/or you explore why he excites America, as you did here with England about Germany's militariness and domination
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I'm ... pretty sure that Germany knows what that uniform's for, since he knows that 1) neither of them would wear it casually and 2) that uniform is heavily fetishized by so many people. I still kind of want to see his horrified reaction, though. :'D
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He totally knows what it's for-- he just wishes he didn't know. ;P
--authornon
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Thaaaaat's what I figured. I wonder how you say, "Oh god why? Brain bleach, please?" in German? XD
... Actually, Italy has probably given Germany plenty of reason to keep a supply of brain bleach on hand, come to think of it! Just in a less perverted way ... probably. *eyes Italy suspiciously*
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And that ending was so amazingly funny and awkward. Christ, you guys, keep your kinky shit in a separate closet or something. XDDD
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America doesn't give it that much thought. ;P
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Like...like... I cannot even speak right now!!
The omake was hilarious!!! I can just picture Germany's reaction clearly on my head LOL
Ahhh I support the sequel idea pleeease.... because after this:
“Fucking awesome,” replied America. “I had my doubts, but it was worth it. Now you gotta dress up as Russia and do it for me.”
You can't just leave me wondering what Iggy!Russia looks and acts like *pouts* pleeease!!
*HUGS*
Now seriously... it is awesome! <3
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You guyssss why are you so good at making me want to do things ;a;
--authornon
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the ending is just too brilliant for words!!!
LOVE YOU!!!!!!
XDDD
omg, I totally agreed with the others, Wanna see Russia!England XD
Russia like... my favorite character XD
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! >w<
Russia!England would be... interesting. XD
--authornon
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How do I fix it??!@
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YOUUUUUU--
GET IN THE NEAREST CHURCH/CIVIL REGISTRY WITH ME NOW. NOW. OR DO I NEED TO GET OUT MY SHOTGUN? >:[
seriously, though, thids is amazing. scorchingly hot and funny and in-character and sweet. i enjoyed every word of it, anon. ♥
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