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[Part 9] Prussia/Germany - Lessons in BDSM anonymous December 5 2010, 12:50:39 UTC
The original request was that Prussia taught Germany everything he knows about BDSM, I tried, but the characters kind of did their own thing. Germany-centric.

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Lessons in BDSM anonymous December 5 2010, 12:57:58 UTC
The day had been rather unremarkable so far, as stressful as one would expect, but not so much as to be especially tiring. Germany was fine with that, in fact he preferred things that way, and so he continued his work until it was done and then went home ( ... )

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Re: Lessons in BDSM anonymous December 5 2010, 13:08:57 UTC
Prussia presses a hand over Germany's heart, feeling the steady rhythm through his palm, before undoing the loose knot holding the robe closed, circling behind his brother again, steps audible this time, he pulls the robe off, leaving Germany nude. He begins running his hands over Germany again, over his back again, across his shoulders, down his sides, and tracing the slight curve of his hips before settling his hands firmly over Germany's finely toned ass, fingers splayed over pale flesh. Prussia kneads it, becoming increasingly rough before he simply stops and digs his nails into Germany's hips and drags then sharply across the tender flesh. The pain makes Germany gasp and something deep inside of him twist in ways he knows it shouldn't. He supposes that he had always been peripherally aware of that part of himself, but Prussia's tutelage was forcing him to explore it. That had been the second lesson, you had to understand what your kinks were, and so Prussia had set out to discover his. He had been very pleased to discover this ( ... )

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Re: Lessons in BDSM anonymous December 5 2010, 13:15:59 UTC
Prussia's voice comes again and Germany is so thankful he could cry, "Do you want me West?" he asks, and his tone is teasing because Prussia is a sadist and there is nothing he enjoys so much as twisting someone until they beg for him to do to them what he wants ( ... )

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Re: Lessons in BDSM - Notes anonymous December 5 2010, 13:24:14 UTC
This definitely got away from me. It started as an attempt to fill this request:
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/12046.html?thread=26735118#t26735118
and ended up with Germany accepting that he has a a bit of masochist in him, I imagine like a Captain Morgan that doesn't mind the burn.

About Germany's hair and Prussia's behavior: that description of his un-styled hair is my personal head-canon, and Prussia thinks BDSM is Serious Business so he acts like it as much as he can.

Hmmm...hope I didn't mess this up too badly, OP.

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Re: Lessons in BDSM - Notes anonymous December 5 2010, 13:56:44 UTC
Not only hot, but also extremely well-written and with a touch of realism. Thank you, this was awesome :D

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Re: Lessons in BDSM - Notes anonymous December 5 2010, 21:23:49 UTC
UNF. That was superhot, author!anon. I really loved all the descriptions of the setting; sometimes it seems that it's lacking in other stories. And I could really feel the tension--I didn't notice I was gripping onto my computer until I reached the end.

Thank you for writing!

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Re: Lessons in BDSM - Notes anonymous December 6 2010, 17:48:31 UTC
I totally agree with the other anons: it was hot AND realistic. It felt very natural, and I loved the use of the robe as a tool to get into the right mindset.

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Author Here anonymous December 6 2010, 21:23:46 UTC
Thanks for the great response everyone!

This request's subject is very relevant to my interests, so I employed my arcane knowledge to fill it. The mindset is just as important as the actions undertaken, that's why there are often specific outfits, rooms, and props that are only used during scenarios, to provide clear separation between regular relationship interaction and the role-play, in which the partners take on their unequal roles of dominance and subjugation.

That ties back into my head canon of Germany and Prussia having equal roles and as double representative personifications of their country and also being in an equal and deeply loving and respectful relationship.

Hmm, is it very obvious that Prussia/Germany is one of my two OTPs (the other is Russia/Germany) and part of my OT3 (Russia->Germany<-Prussia)?

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Re: Author Here anonymous December 14 2010, 14:00:30 UTC
Finally! Someone I could relate to~

Oh authoranon, I demand that OT3 to be written!

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