Past-Part Fills Part 4--closed

Feb 27, 2011 12:28



This Past-Part Fills post is now closed to new fills.
Fresh past-part fills post HERE

Comments and Suggestions go here
Keep yourself up to date -- check out the news HERE

Leave a comment

Little Suggestions [1/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 00:42:49 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=4594634#t4594634
US/UK - US dresses up (Roleplays?) Germany and Dominates UK. Slicked back hair, uniform, leather gloves. (riding crop?)

Warnings: All consensual, but roleplayed as noncon. D/s, mild bondage, a riding crop. And lots of swearing and a couple ethnic slurs for Germans, but nothing too offensive I think.

lol what better way to kick off my first year of college than porn? First fic fill, first smutfic ever. The guys next door were throwing a party so I started writing. I hope you like it!America blinked from across the table. “You want what ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [2/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 00:44:43 UTC
Two weeks later, England was coming back from a long day at work. Long, but productive-- a good day, which left him more satisfied than tired. He unlocked the door, carefully set his briefcase down, hung up his jacket, and wondered why all the drapes were closed. It had been a sunny day, but from the looks of his parlor you couldn’t tell. Rather unsettling. England knew hadn’t closed them. And he hadn’t had a housekeeper in years. So the only person who could have done it was ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [3/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 00:45:51 UTC
Before he could run, England was slammed against the wall, foreign hands clenched around his wrists and a sharp knee digging into his back. He struggled, but his assailant was too strong-- soon, both his wrists were clenched in one strong hand, while the other pressed his face into the wall. “You should have known you couldn’t escape me,” said the attacker, his voice calm and even and very German-sounding as he put a pair of handcuffs around his victim’s wrists ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 00:48:20 UTC
The Brit licked his lips, causing the riding crop to retreat. “Go to hell. I’d never betray my country.” Cliche, but effective ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:00:27 UTC
adsfkajf; afawe so hot

God, I just happened to have perfect timing and notice you fill this; I never even saw this request, but omg, this is hitting all my kinks. God, I love this meme sometimes! So awesome, anon. <3

But why is he calling him "Mr. Jones" instead of "Mr. Kirkland"?

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:04:09 UTC
Ah, I forgot because of the hotness, but America kicking England's ass right out of the house to start the scene over was hilarious and kind of strangely in-character. <3 And it's kind of awesome that he included nice little touches like waiting a couple of weeks, "ambushing him from a different location after they started over, and making sure he was disoriented. Very hot and considerate. :D

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:12:01 UTC
XD America wants his kinky sex done right, damn it!

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:11:17 UTC
Eeee, I'm so glad you like it! >w<

It's because I make stupid typos, that's why. "OTL

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:27:33 UTC
Ahaha, I was 90% sure it was a brain fart like I normally make, but you never know how weirdly kinky things are going to get when England's involved! ;D Don't worry about it too much. <3

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [4/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:10:20 UTC
Just lost the last three pages and all my edits. "OTL Save frequently, kids!America kicked him away, hissing “That’s enough.” England whimpered. “What a whore. Getting so excited over such a small thing.” He rubbed his eye and tried to smooth his hair. God, he probably looked like a wreck. But it was hardly his fault-- it was so damn hot in that room. The Englishman glanced up at his face, which was flushed, but not as much as his own. America placed his hat on a nearby shelf and smoothed his hair. Their eyes met, and America glared down at him. He barked something, but the man on the floor wasn’t listening. A pause. “I said, on your knees,” repeated the taller man, his voice fiercer this time, metal clinking against metal as he undid his belt ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [6/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:19:54 UTC
numbering FAIL! XD Previous part should be 5.He sraightened up and slicked his hair, quickly beginning to fall, back into place ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [6/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:23:26 UTC
I was planning to post it all tonight, but my computer eating it kinda put a wrench in that and I'm waaay to tired to keep writing tonight. Oh well! I'll do my best to have the rest up by the end of the week.

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [6/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 01:43:36 UTC
God, that sucks so hard, anon. ;_; Fucking technology, eh?

Poor America is trying so hard to keep his hair tamed; I can't believe he even got Nantucket slicked down, honestly. That's dedication to your scene. <3

Oh, and it's kind of nice to see a top doing a quick check like that, although his panic is ever-so-slightly funny to me for some reason. He's such a sweetheart and a good top/dom, and that combination amuses me in fiction, even though it's true more often than not in real life.

Unf, what an awesome use of America's strength there: England whimpered and shrunk away. That didn’t stop America. He yanked England upright by his collar so that their faces almost touched, his arms coiled around his back. *A*

Okay, yeah, this is the fun kind of non-con scene. Jesus, and those gloves staying on is just awesome. Especially when he's manhandling him, like holding him by the jaw, spreading his thighs, and so on. So hot, seriously. :D

And I'm unbelievably sorry your computer ate the rest, but I have to admit, that is such ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [6/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 02:45:08 UTC
Shiiiiit. Unf. SO HOT.

Whew. Ok, words. (That just hit all of my kinks so hardcore, I can barely talk.) So:

“Git. I don’t want him. I want you.”

Nice to see them communicating, for once!

“That’s not the best German accent I’ve heard, but I suppose it will have to do,” England sighed.

Because of course, he wouldn't just go with it xD

The riding crop snapped across his face.

Guh. Just, guh.

“Go to hell. I’d never betray my country.” Cliche, but effective.

I love how we his mental voice stays the same, even in a situation like this one. So England!

America panicked. He dropped his accent, whispering, “England? England are you okay-- oh crap-- I just got carried away-- do you want to stop? I can get-- Oh! Uh, light? Red light?”I'm so glad you included this! Because oh man, that's totally happened to me (I mean, uh, not like, while pretending to be Germany, but you know what I mean). If America's never done anything like this, it would be really hard to maintain! ...on the other hand, hot that he got too carried away ( ... )

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [6/???] anonymous September 7 2010, 19:05:03 UTC
OMG OMG OMG (no one so the de-anon 0_o)
THIS IS SOOO HOOT!!!! I can barely write right now.... and I'm blushing like mad!

I'm so sorry about your computer, but will wait impatiently here for you ^^ *hugs*

Reply

Re: Little Suggestions [6/???] anonymous September 8 2010, 13:52:38 UTC
*whimpers*

Reply


Leave a comment

Up