Tell Me When, 1/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 18:54:40 UTC
Alfred's cabin is warm and dry, golden light spilling out the windows into air so cold it burns to breathe. They'd raced each other in down the long driveway, their yelps carrying out past the woodpile into the forest behind. And then the breathless untangling of scarves and coats and mittens had given way to cider on their bed in front of the fire, and their cheeks flushed from heat instead of cold, and then Francis had pulled Alfred down atop him and curled a whisper around the shell of his ear
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Tell Me When, 2/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 18:55:43 UTC
"Okay?"
"Yes," he moans, "yes, Alfred, please," so Alfred slaps him again, and again: smack, smack, smack, and Francis' body trembles at the impact. He's digging his nails into his own forearm, red scrapes clawing up his wrist to his elbow, and his chest shudders with every inhale
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Re: Tell Me When, 2/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 18:57:18 UTC
"Hurt me," says Francis, his voice low and rough, "Anything, just - "
Alfred finger-flicks him in the balls: once, twice, and Francis groans and comes, pulsing in Alfred's mouth and bitter-hot on his tongue. He falls back against the pillows and strokes his hand through Alfred's hair. His fingers are shaking.
"You look like a fish out of water," Alfred teases, because Francis does, his mouth opening and closing like that. He puckers his lips ridiculously, bends down to mouth out blub, blub, blub noises against Francis' dick where it's lying over his pelvis, soft and slapped-raw, and leans back up, grinning, when Francis' laughter is cut off with a gasp
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Re: Tell Me When, 2/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 19:32:41 UTC
Its a bit of a strange kink, but I think you wrote it very well. This meme needs more Al/Francis either way, I love the pairing and I love how you portrayed them together. Very nice fic overall :)
Re: Tell Me When, 2/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 20:01:24 UTC
Oh anon, that was a nice hot sexy little piece. America is ridiculously cute. "He puckers his lips ridiculously, bends down to mouth out blub, blub, blub noises against Francis' dick where it's lying over his pelvis, soft and slapped-raw, and leans back up, grinning..." FFF WHAT IS THIS *dies laughing* And of course he's so careful with France, even if the other is sort of careless with himself and daredevil in bed.
I'd really like to see more about why and how France is such a crazy masochist, and maybe some strength-kink about that's why he comes to America. I'd kill to watch them going at another round. *wink wink*
One, uh, actually major problem, though. Generally the term "cockslapping" refers to one partner hitting the other (generally in the face) with their erect penis. So instead of doing the slapping to someone's cock, you're slapping them with a cock. I'm actually not sure whether the OP is aware of this, because hitting anything with a penis hard would be painful for Alfred too
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Generally the term "cockslapping" refers to one partner hitting the other (generally in the face) with their erect penis. So instead of doing the slapping to someone's cock, you're slapping them with a cock
AHAHAHA WHAT. OH GOD. Dear OP, I'm so sorry. This is what I get for not looking things up and assuming they're self-explanatory.
Are you kidding me? THIS WAS AWESOME. HOLY SHIT -adds link to my to-fap-to list- OH GOD ANONWRITER EVEN IF IT'S KIND OF A MISFIRE [WELL, IT IS. SORT OF!] IT WAS SO EFFING HOT I FUCKING DIED. ILOVE YOU FOR ETERNITY <3333333333333333333
HOLY FUCK I'M SO GOING TO FAP TO THIS. HOT SHIT IS OT OH GOD OH GODDD.
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anonymous
July 28 2010, 22:02:26 UTC
This anon giggled so hard at your exchange.
Seriously, though, no worries. I came in expecting a dick to the face, and this was much, much better. Masochist!France is a new and glorious thing to me, and America was too freaking cute. I absolutely loved it!
Re: Tell Me When, 2/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 21:53:18 UTC
You just put a new spin on the phrase "beating the meat", author!anon!!!
While not was I was expecting either, I rather like the masochistic spin and think that it would be more pleasurable than getting slapped by a cock...*is weird*
Anyway, this is wonderfully sexy and sweet and fabulous!!
Francis likes it.
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"Yes," he moans, "yes, Alfred, please," so Alfred slaps him again, and again: smack, smack, smack, and Francis' body trembles at the impact. He's digging his nails into his own forearm, red scrapes clawing up his wrist to his elbow, and his chest shudders with every inhale ( ... )
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Alfred finger-flicks him in the balls: once, twice, and Francis groans and comes, pulsing in Alfred's mouth and bitter-hot on his tongue. He falls back against the pillows and strokes his hand through Alfred's hair. His fingers are shaking.
"You look like a fish out of water," Alfred teases, because Francis does, his mouth opening and closing like that. He puckers his lips ridiculously, bends down to mouth out blub, blub, blub noises against Francis' dick where it's lying over his pelvis, soft and slapped-raw, and leans back up, grinning, when Francis' laughter is cut off with a gasp ( ... )
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:drools
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I'd really like to see more about why and how France is such a crazy masochist, and maybe some strength-kink about that's why he comes to America. I'd kill to watch them going at another round. *wink wink*
One, uh, actually major problem, though. Generally the term "cockslapping" refers to one partner hitting the other (generally in the face) with their erect penis. So instead of doing the slapping to someone's cock, you're slapping them with a cock. I'm actually not sure whether the OP is aware of this, because hitting anything with a penis hard would be painful for Alfred too ( ... )
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AHAHAHA WHAT. OH GOD. Dear OP, I'm so sorry. This is what I get for not looking things up and assuming they're self-explanatory.
/slinks off into a corner in shame
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HOLY SHIT -adds link to my to-fap-to list- OH GOD ANONWRITER EVEN IF IT'S KIND OF A MISFIRE [WELL, IT IS. SORT OF!] IT WAS SO EFFING HOT I FUCKING DIED. ILOVE YOU FOR ETERNITY <3333333333333333333
HOLY FUCK I'M SO GOING TO FAP TO THIS. HOT SHIT IS OT OH GOD OH GODDD.
./goes crazy
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Seriously, though, no worries. I came in expecting a dick to the face, and this was much, much better. Masochist!France is a new and glorious thing to me, and America was too freaking cute. I absolutely loved it!
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While not was I was expecting either, I rather like the masochistic spin and think that it would be more pleasurable than getting slapped by a cock...*is weird*
Anyway, this is wonderfully sexy and sweet and fabulous!!
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