Re: Tell Me When, 2/3
anonymous
July 28 2010, 20:01:24 UTC
Oh anon, that was a nice hot sexy little piece. America is ridiculously cute. "He puckers his lips ridiculously, bends down to mouth out blub, blub, blub noises against Francis' dick where it's lying over his pelvis, soft and slapped-raw, and leans back up, grinning..." FFF WHAT IS THIS *dies laughing* And of course he's so careful with France, even if the other is sort of careless with himself and daredevil in bed.
I'd really like to see more about why and how France is such a crazy masochist, and maybe some strength-kink about that's why he comes to America. I'd kill to watch them going at another round. *wink wink*
One, uh, actually major problem, though. Generally the term "cockslapping" refers to one partner hitting the other (generally in the face) with their erect penis. So instead of doing the slapping to someone's cock, you're slapping them with a cock. I'm actually not sure whether the OP is aware of this, because hitting anything with a penis hard would be painful for Alfred too.
But c'est la vie. Terminology misfire aside, this was a nice fill. :3
Generally the term "cockslapping" refers to one partner hitting the other (generally in the face) with their erect penis. So instead of doing the slapping to someone's cock, you're slapping them with a cock
AHAHAHA WHAT. OH GOD. Dear OP, I'm so sorry. This is what I get for not looking things up and assuming they're self-explanatory.
Are you kidding me? THIS WAS AWESOME. HOLY SHIT -adds link to my to-fap-to list- OH GOD ANONWRITER EVEN IF IT'S KIND OF A MISFIRE [WELL, IT IS. SORT OF!] IT WAS SO EFFING HOT I FUCKING DIED. ILOVE YOU FOR ETERNITY <3333333333333333333
HOLY FUCK I'M SO GOING TO FAP TO THIS. HOT SHIT IS OT OH GOD OH GODDD.
Re: authornon
anonymous
July 28 2010, 22:02:26 UTC
This anon giggled so hard at your exchange.
Seriously, though, no worries. I came in expecting a dick to the face, and this was much, much better. Masochist!France is a new and glorious thing to me, and America was too freaking cute. I absolutely loved it!
I'd really like to see more about why and how France is such a crazy masochist, and maybe some strength-kink about that's why he comes to America. I'd kill to watch them going at another round. *wink wink*
One, uh, actually major problem, though. Generally the term "cockslapping" refers to one partner hitting the other (generally in the face) with their erect penis. So instead of doing the slapping to someone's cock, you're slapping them with a cock. I'm actually not sure whether the OP is aware of this, because hitting anything with a penis hard would be painful for Alfred too.
But c'est la vie. Terminology misfire aside, this was a nice fill. :3
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AHAHAHA WHAT. OH GOD. Dear OP, I'm so sorry. This is what I get for not looking things up and assuming they're self-explanatory.
/slinks off into a corner in shame
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HOLY SHIT -adds link to my to-fap-to list- OH GOD ANONWRITER EVEN IF IT'S KIND OF A MISFIRE [WELL, IT IS. SORT OF!] IT WAS SO EFFING HOT I FUCKING DIED. ILOVE YOU FOR ETERNITY <3333333333333333333
HOLY FUCK I'M SO GOING TO FAP TO THIS. HOT SHIT IS OT OH GOD OH GODDD.
./goes crazy
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Seriously, though, no worries. I came in expecting a dick to the face, and this was much, much better. Masochist!France is a new and glorious thing to me, and America was too freaking cute. I absolutely loved it!
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