America/France
anonymous
June 1 2010, 15:02:11 UTC
One night, America declares that he's going to fill France to the brim with cum. France approves of this idea very much.
Prostate play (to ensure more cum during climax - milking him, if you will) possibly with cockrings, and of course coming multiple times, as well as France balancing his position with pillows to keep the cum inside his body for as long as possible.
Bonus points for snark, deep kisses, lots of eye contact, and them being affectionate with each other even as they're rutting like animals.
Fill You Up 1/6
anonymous
June 13 2010, 01:50:24 UTC
The Western edge of the sky is still glowing with the last hint of sunset when America finally - finally - stumbles through his front door to find France, his hair wrapped up in a towel above his head, bathrobe hanging decadently off one shoulder as he holds the New York Times in one hand and toys with his glass of wine with the other
( ... )
Fill You Up 2/6
anonymous
June 13 2010, 01:52:06 UTC
"I wanna get you dirty," America whispers into the soft skin behind France's ear, "I wanna mark you like you're mine." His, his own, his beloved, not like the pale gray walls with identical staplers on everyone's desk, where the people are as replaceable as their paperclips. France shivers when America flicks out his tongue to trace along the edge of his earlobe. "Wanna come inside you until you can't hold any more and plug you up and make you keep it
( ... )
Fill You Up 3/6
anonymous
June 13 2010, 01:53:06 UTC
When France shifts his hips a litle too fast a drop of come trails out of his ass despite the pillow, and America reaches down to scoop it up, pressing two fingers back inside France and rubbing them along each other to feel the sticky-slick slide of his come over the skin. His come, his come, and it's inside France, and it's going to stay there, and the thought sends hot sparks racing through his body down to his dick.
"A - hah, you are filthy." France's voice is thick and breathy, bleeding up into a moan as he comes hot and bitter across the back of America's tongue
( ... )
Fill You Up 4/6
anonymous
June 13 2010, 01:54:21 UTC
France chuckles and reaches over to grab the plug. "You want this, I take it?"
"Ooh, yeah, thanks," and America presses a kiss to the very edge of France's hole as he holds France's hips tilted upward to push in the plug, kissing that too just for good measure.
"I should finger you," France comments, lazily, running his palms over America's back. "I hear it increases the...quantity."
Delighted, America reaches up to kiss his cheek, weighing in his mind whether he can manage another round right away. "You have the best ideas." Sleepiness wins out. "Can we nap first, though? I'm beat."
"But of course."
"Mmm." Maybe just ten minutes, and then they can go again.
Twenty minutes later, he blinks awake and peers up at France, who is gazing at the ceiling with an unreadable half-smile, his thumb rubbing back and forth across the back of America's neck. He knows better than to barge his way into France's thoughts - France keeps his own secrets and America has no right to demand to hear them, no matter how burningly he wants to know
( ... )
Re: Fill You Up 5/6
anonymous
June 13 2010, 01:55:17 UTC
"M'not hurting your back?" Because he's trembling with the effort of holding himself back but he knows full well how bad he could hurt France, if he ever forgot his own strength, so he grits his teeth until France shakes his head jerkily against the pillow. "'Kay."
The angle is a little bit awkward at first, but then it's excellent, because France hooks his ankles together behind America's back, and he's dragging America closer, closer, like he never wants to let him go - his face is damp with sweat, twisted strings of hair sticking to his cheeks and forehead, and America can't tear his eyes away. He licks over his palm and wraps it around France's cock, his breath stuttering at the throaty, needy noise France makes at that, and keeps thrusting into him, filling him
( ... )
Fill You Up 6/6 + a/n
anonymous
June 13 2010, 01:59:22 UTC
"F-France, god, I - I'm gonna -" he gasps, and jerks out of their hands to press just the head of his dick inside France so he can fill him up that last little bit, and he moans and doubles over again when he sees a little trickle of come spurt out, fuck fuckBreathing. Breathing is pretty awesome. Maybe he should get on that. America sucks in air sharply and closes his eyes for a moment, and when he opens them, France is offering him the plug again
( ... )
Re: Fill You Up 6/6 + a/n
anonymous
June 14 2010, 19:54:57 UTC
:D I'm glad you liked it, anon!
Thanks for the crit; I did try at first to be super-detailed about the come itself but the description just would not work the way I wanted it to, so I settled for possessiveness instead rather than keep stuff I felt was totally ooc /o\ also, I weirded myself out completely thinking about the sperm swimming around like little tadpoles
You totally do have authority, though. As someone who has that kink (while I'm just a curious outside observer), you know best how it ought to be written. And I have far too many shameful kinks of my own to judge anyone else's.
Sorry for the lateness, I had a bad weekend. Mmm! This is really delicious! I love how tender it is, and little details in the prose like France's sneakiness, as well as their back and forth retorts and rapport together..
Just, gah. I am incoherent with the awesome. Also, with the late hour. I should be sleeping, dammit.
No crit, though I was surprised at the lack of French pet names. No chous, chers, or coeurs XD
I'm so glad it made you happy, OP! It was a kink I'd never written before and it was a lot of fun to write.
/tucks you into bed
Yeah, my French is rudimentary at best (I took two years in high school...three years ago), so I'm a bit wary about including it in fills because I'm afraid I'll get it wrong, and I know how frustrating that can be to native speakers hehe.
Prostate play (to ensure more cum during climax - milking him, if you will) possibly with cockrings, and of course coming multiple times, as well as France balancing his position with pillows to keep the cum inside his body for as long as possible.
Bonus points for snark, deep kisses, lots of eye contact, and them being affectionate with each other even as they're rutting like animals.
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"A - hah, you are filthy." France's voice is thick and breathy, bleeding up into a moan as he comes hot and bitter across the back of America's tongue ( ... )
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"Ooh, yeah, thanks," and America presses a kiss to the very edge of France's hole as he holds France's hips tilted upward to push in the plug, kissing that too just for good measure.
"I should finger you," France comments, lazily, running his palms over America's back. "I hear it increases the...quantity."
Delighted, America reaches up to kiss his cheek, weighing in his mind whether he can manage another round right away. "You have the best ideas." Sleepiness wins out. "Can we nap first, though? I'm beat."
"But of course."
"Mmm." Maybe just ten minutes, and then they can go again.
Twenty minutes later, he blinks awake and peers up at France, who is gazing at the ceiling with an unreadable half-smile, his thumb rubbing back and forth across the back of America's neck. He knows better than to barge his way into France's thoughts - France keeps his own secrets and America has no right to demand to hear them, no matter how burningly he wants to know ( ... )
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The angle is a little bit awkward at first, but then it's excellent, because France hooks his ankles together behind America's back, and he's dragging America closer, closer, like he never wants to let him go - his face is damp with sweat, twisted strings of hair sticking to his cheeks and forehead, and America can't tear his eyes away. He licks over his palm and wraps it around France's cock, his breath stuttering at the throaty, needy noise France makes at that, and keeps thrusting into him, filling him ( ... )
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Thanks for the crit; I did try at first to be super-detailed about the come itself but the description just would not work the way I wanted it to, so I settled for possessiveness instead rather than keep stuff I felt was totally ooc /o\ also, I weirded myself out completely thinking about the sperm swimming around like little tadpoles
You totally do have authority, though. As someone who has that kink (while I'm just a curious outside observer), you know best how it ought to be written. And I have far too many shameful kinks of my own to judge anyone else's.
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Just, gah. I am incoherent with the awesome. Also, with the late hour. I should be sleeping, dammit.
No crit, though I was surprised at the lack of French pet names. No chous, chers, or coeurs XD
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/tucks you into bed
Yeah, my French is rudimentary at best (I took two years in high school...three years ago), so I'm a bit wary about including it in fills because I'm afraid I'll get it wrong, and I know how frustrating that can be to native speakers hehe.
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