Gorgeous [Part 2b/?]
anonymous
February 9 2010, 08:24:39 UTC
"Al-Alfred..."
Already half-hard, Arthur's eyes rolled back as Alfred reached between them and took the elder nation's cock in a firm grip. Stroking slowly, at leisure, the Briton's former colony-turned-superpower chuckled warmly, "I'll take that as a yes."
Before he could stir up a response. - although something was certainly responding quite well already - Arthur found his voice muffled by Alfred's mouth as he devoured him in a bruising yet patient kiss. The younger took his time to feather the others lips with his tongue until he was permitted entry, then taking the opportunity presented to lazily prod the other's tongue into action. For a brief second the two fought for dominance, before Arthur at last submitted to the others will and allowed Alfred to lead the heady open-mouthed kiss
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Author!Anon apologizes
anonymous
March 6 2010, 22:38:10 UTC
Many apologies for the lateness in updates. My internet has been down for a while, so I wasn't able to access the online notepad I've been writing this fill on. Not to mention that I've been feeling like utter shite this last week while simultaneously attempting to finish up a first draft on a novel.
So in short: I'll be attempting to finish this all up within the following week. =)
Re: Gorgeous [Part 4/5]
anonymous
March 11 2010, 09:57:11 UTC
Alfred was silent but for the hiss of air forced from his nostrils as Arthur fucked his mouth faster, slightly harder, but always mindful not to make the younger nation gag or suffocate. Warmth ran down the Briton's spine, trickling south to his groin and pooling there as a particular sensation of anticipation began to build from his feet upwards. Feeling his core muscles beginning to tighten, thighs trembling as he forcefully kept on abusing the other nation's mouth, Arthur let himself be taken by pleasure
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Gorgeous [Part 5/5]
anonymous
March 11 2010, 10:06:48 UTC
Woops, bit of inconsistency. Alfred was supposed to have his hands behind his back rather than on his lap before Arthur finished off the first time. ------
A tongue sliding over the swollen globe of his left buttock silenced him, warm saliva quickly cooling over the hot flesh in the cool air of the cellar. Arthur's nose pressed against the sensitive flesh, drawing first a whine from Alfred, then a throaty moan as his tongue delved into the cleft of his buttocks, trailing down until the tip of the moist organ was circling the taught ring of muscles that the American so desperately then wished to be penetrated.
"Please! I- I need to-" The American rolled his hips against the wood of the cross, the head of his erection just barely brushing against one of the silver studs that decorated the black wood. He was so, so close, but the ring prevented his release, almost to the point of pain which, of course, only aroused him further. When Arthur broke through the tight ring of muscle and began tonguing him, Alfred nearly sobbed and was -
( ... )
Re: Gorgeous [Part 5/5]
anonymous
March 11 2010, 15:42:18 UTC
The entire fic was pure and utter hotness and I loved how you wrote them! One small thing that really took me out of the mind melting hotness was that Arthur took him "dry". That, I mean, there's no way you can be taken dry and without prep without seriously tearing up the person receiving, not just nice pain but bad pain. Other than that the fic was amazing and I really enjoyed it!
Already half-hard, Arthur's eyes rolled back as Alfred reached between them and took the elder nation's cock in a firm grip. Stroking slowly, at leisure, the Briton's former colony-turned-superpower chuckled warmly, "I'll take that as a yes."
Before he could stir up a response. - although something was certainly responding quite well already - Arthur found his voice muffled by Alfred's mouth as he devoured him in a bruising yet patient kiss. The younger took his time to feather the others lips with his tongue until he was permitted entry, then taking the opportunity presented to lazily prod the other's tongue into action. For a brief second the two fought for dominance, before Arthur at last submitted to the others will and allowed Alfred to lead the heady open-mouthed kiss ( ... )
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F5F5F5F5F5F5F5
Soooo hot anon~ @w@ <3
PLEASEEE UPDATE LIKE.. NOW.
[[and pfft. alfred fucking jones, bitch.]]
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umm could I have a link to the earlier parts? *fails*
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That will take you back to the original request, which has the first few parts on it as well. =)
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This is really hot, anon. :)
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ReCaptcha: "upbraids citizen" ... I don't think my country likes that idea, actually.
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But than again you like it huh Daddy? *smirk*
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So in short: I'll be attempting to finish this all up within the following week. =)
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Sorry all the shit's hitting the fan at once; life likes to do that, doesn't it? ^_^; Good luck with your novel! :Db
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A tongue sliding over the swollen globe of his left buttock silenced him, warm saliva quickly cooling over the hot flesh in the cool air of the cellar. Arthur's nose pressed against the sensitive flesh, drawing first a whine from Alfred, then a throaty moan as his tongue delved into the cleft of his buttocks, trailing down until the tip of the moist organ was circling the taught ring of muscles that the American so desperately then wished to be penetrated.
"Please! I- I need to-" The American rolled his hips against the wood of the cross, the head of his erection just barely brushing against one of the silver studs that decorated the black wood. He was so, so close, but the ring prevented his release, almost to the point of pain which, of course, only aroused him further. When Arthur broke through the tight ring of muscle and began tonguing him, Alfred nearly sobbed and was - ( ... )
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This. Was. Hot.
How hot?
I squirmed in my seat. And I don't even like bondage. Dominant England and the whole tables being turned on America thing is just.... nggh.
I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
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