I have no idea if this has been requested before, but I've never seen anything like that, so...
It's kind of a fact that Poland's a crossdresser, right? But, what if he's not crossdressing when he's wearing girl's clothes, but when she's wearing boy's clothes? For whatever reason, she's been hiding it, and nobody suspected seriously until... something, you can make it up.
BONUS: Only Hungary knew, 'cause they're bffs and all that BONUS #2: Only Russia knew~
Re: All Together Now [7/?]
anonymous
February 6 2010, 03:48:09 UTC
Anon, this fic is beautiful. The section where England muses on the age of the nations was so nifty, and Russia! And Romano! And Germany and France and Hungary's suit and oh, I love everything about this story. Down to the presence of my much-too-rarely seen OTP, Lietpol ♥
Re: All Together Now [7/?]
anonymous
February 6 2010, 04:21:16 UTC
This is superb! I love love love England's theorizing about the ages of Nations. I would really love to see his final analysis. And the EU facts! This fill is like a soft delicious cookie chock-full of EU history and politics. Thank you, writer!
All Together Now [8/?]
anonymous
February 7 2010, 05:05:39 UTC
Spain raises her glass and Greece obligingly pours some more ouzo into it. Neither of them take their eyes off the tussle across the room. Czechia - what an absurd name, why couldn't he have kept Bohemia? - Czechia is trying to hit France over the head with a breadstick, while France is attempting to forcibly remove Czechia's moustache. Just because someone likes their moustache to look nice doesn't mean it isn't real, and France has to know that, meaning he's either being annoying on purpose - odd, he's usually more subtle - or he's a lot drunker than he looks. Poland is making a pretense at seperating them, but she's giggling while she does and not trying very hard. Germany's brother is openly egging them on
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All Together Now [9a/18]
anonymous
March 3 2010, 04:18:37 UTC
[Thank you for your patience, and sorry for the wait. I think I know where this is going now and the rest should get written much faster. Also, I should note that this scene was one I had in mind from the beginning of the fic and I wasn't actually inspired by http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13125.html?thread=32795205#t32795205 - but that is a wonderful fill, and you should all go read it.]
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Latvia smiles at Poland - Poland doesn't loom so much anymore, even if she's still taller than him. She, and Latvia really wonders how he missed that all the years he lived with her and Lithuania, especially when he'd spotted the other girls so easily. But, well, she was younger then. Not so, er, well-developed. Poland smiles back. "See?" she whispers. "Tango isn't that hard."
"I - I guess not." Latvia squezes her hand.
"You're a great dancer. Even if you're too short to dip me." Latvia blushes at the memory. She'd dipped him instead, and it was a
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All Together Now [9b/18]
anonymous
March 3 2010, 04:20:23 UTC
He couldn't have said what the dance was, three seconds after it stops. Estonia seems content to keep twirling him gently about, which feels nice. There's so much gold in here, and it all glitters. It taks him a few seconds to realize they've stopped, and Estonia gives him a little squeeze before letting him go
( ... )
Re: All Together Now [9b/18]
anonymous
March 3 2010, 04:43:08 UTC
ee yay! Latvia is hard, but this came out beautifully, anon, blitzed!no-tolerance!Latvia is brill, and I'm thrilled to see the continuation. I adore this fill.
oh, Finland; eviscerate you with a butter knife, amiably, indeed. and oh, Estonia. This anon would've made Sweden the woman, because she thinks it's funnier, but has to admit this picks up on canon lines a bit more cleverly. Mad love.
Re: All Together Now [9b/18]
anonymous
March 3 2010, 11:22:17 UTC
On the one hand, I love this story. I love genderbend, I love the questions raised by it being revealed as such, and I love the way you have dealt with it here (especially Estonia. Oh, Estonia).
But:
Poland's eyes are warm and friendly and deep and, oh, he can see why Lithuania missed her so much even when he wouldn't admit it.
Why does Poland have to be different because he is a woman? Poland is certainly friendly enough in the manga, but he is friendly in a clingy, pushy way. "Warm" and "deep" are not adjectives anyone would be using about canon!Poland. Why would a generous pair of breasts make him considerate and capable of thinking before she speaks?
I love Poland because he is a bigmouthed birdbrain. I love this story, too, but the way you write Poland reads - between the lines - with a cringe-worthy echo of "of course a female Poland would be more mature and nurturing than a male one. What else defines a woman? Duh."
It's kind of a fact that Poland's a crossdresser, right? But, what if he's not crossdressing when he's wearing girl's clothes, but when she's wearing boy's clothes? For whatever reason, she's been hiding it, and nobody suspected seriously until... something, you can make it up.
BONUS: Only Hungary knew, 'cause they're bffs and all that
BONUS #2: Only Russia knew~
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Glad you're enjoying it so far!
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Because Spain would make a hot girl, seriously, and it would certainly explain dat GLORIOUS ass.
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I love it~ can't wait for you to update!
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Are you going to continue?
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andohgod please tell me we get to see Russia's reaction to being outed. ;3;
Also the title has me singing some Beatles over here~
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Latvia smiles at Poland - Poland doesn't loom so much anymore, even if she's still taller than him. She, and Latvia really wonders how he missed that all the years he lived with her and Lithuania, especially when he'd spotted the other girls so easily. But, well, she was younger then. Not so, er, well-developed. Poland smiles back. "See?" she whispers. "Tango isn't that hard."
"I - I guess not." Latvia squezes her hand.
"You're a great dancer. Even if you're too short to dip me." Latvia blushes at the memory. She'd dipped him instead, and it was a ( ... )
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oh, Finland; eviscerate you with a butter knife, amiably, indeed. and oh, Estonia. This anon would've made Sweden the woman, because she thinks it's funnier, but has to admit this picks up on canon lines a bit more cleverly. Mad love.
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Also, as an Estonia fan and the anon who started the FTM nation request, I am QUITE PLEASED with this reveal.
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But:
Poland's eyes are warm and friendly and deep and, oh, he can see why Lithuania missed her so much even when he wouldn't admit it.
Why does Poland have to be different because he is a woman? Poland is certainly friendly enough in the manga, but he is friendly in a clingy, pushy way. "Warm" and "deep" are not adjectives anyone would be using about canon!Poland. Why would a generous pair of breasts make him considerate and capable of thinking before she speaks?
I love Poland because he is a bigmouthed birdbrain. I love this story, too, but the way you write Poland reads - between the lines - with a cringe-worthy echo of "of course a female Poland would be more mature and nurturing than a male one. What else defines a woman? Duh."
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